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| ***Hadrianos removed the above comments. I rolled him back so that a clear record is kept of this bizarre behaviour. ] (]) 09:24, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | ***Hadrianos removed the above comments. I rolled him back so that a clear record is kept of this bizarre behaviour. ] (]) 09:24, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | ||
| '''Oppose''' - An interesting article that I enjoyed reading, but further copy-editing is needed. Here are some examples: | |||
| :*''It plays its home professional games in the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium in downtown Madrid since 1947.'' - The tense is wrong. | |||
| :*''The club is the world's richest in football (€351m) in terms of revenue and the second most valuable (worth over €950m as of 2008).'' - some attention needed here. | |||
| :*''After moving between some minor grounds'' - between? | |||
| :*''Real Madrid had the lead going into the last match of the season.'' - "were in the lead"? | |||
| :*''On 2 July 1978, the one to whom credit can be given for transforming Real Madrid from the second most successful club in Madrid into the most successful in Spain, and one of the most successful in Europe, club president Santiago Bernabéu passed away.'' - is hopelessly convoluted. | |||
| :*''rezoned'' - ?? | |||
| :*''a total of'' - just one example of much redundancy. | |||
| These are just a few example of many problems. A fresh pair of eyes is needed; the whole article needs attention. ] ] 09:31, 12 October 2008 (UTC) | |||
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Real Madrid C.F.
- Nominator(s): Hadrianos1990
- previous FAC (02:18, 28 September 2008)
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I nominate this article because I consider it one of the best on Misplaced Pages. I worked a lot to improve it and I hope You'll agree. Thank You! —Hadrianos1990 07:54, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Can an English translation be provided for Image:MadridFC1902.jpg? Giggy (talk) 08:04, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Trabajo propio = own work.
- Una de las primeras formaciones del Madrid Football Club (Real Madrid C.F.) a principios del siglo XX. = One of the first "formations" of Real Madrid Footabll club at teh beginnings of the 20th century. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 08:12, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Support Very good article! Congratulations! Giggy (talk)
- I didn't write this Giggy (talk) 08:49, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- Hadrianos removed the above comments. I rolled him back so that a clear record is kept of this bizarre behaviour. Marskell (talk) 09:24, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
- I didn't write this Giggy (talk) 08:49, 12 October 2008 (UTC)
Oppose - An interesting article that I enjoyed reading, but further copy-editing is needed. Here are some examples:
- It plays its home professional games in the Santiago Bernabéu Stadium in downtown Madrid since 1947. - The tense is wrong.
- The club is the world's richest in football (€351m) in terms of revenue and the second most valuable (worth over €950m as of 2008). - some attention needed here.
- After moving between some minor grounds - between?
- Real Madrid had the lead going into the last match of the season. - "were in the lead"?
- On 2 July 1978, the one to whom credit can be given for transforming Real Madrid from the second most successful club in Madrid into the most successful in Spain, and one of the most successful in Europe, club president Santiago Bernabéu passed away. - is hopelessly convoluted.
- rezoned - ??
- a total of - just one example of much redundancy.
These are just a few example of many problems. A fresh pair of eyes is needed; the whole article needs attention. Graham Colm 09:31, 12 October 2008 (UTC)