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The original article had language and citation issues. I have fixed some of these. There was exterraneous information that was irrelevant to the biography and uncited. I have removed some of it. The article is better now, in my opinion, however, it could use more biographical information if anyone has it. Please make sure it is interesting to readers and is verified or referenced. With movie stars there is a lot of tabloid news as we all know (here the Guru Dutt affair). This is often times exaggeration and sometimes pure fiction. Biographies of Guru Dutt or Waheeda Rehman should be cited as reference and this section should be re-written to reflect the sources. | The original article had language and citation issues. I have fixed some of these. There was exterraneous information that was irrelevant to the biography and uncited. I have removed some of it. The article is better now, in my opinion, however, it could use more biographical information if anyone has it. Please make sure it is interesting to readers and is verified or referenced. With movie stars there is a lot of tabloid news as we all know (here the Guru Dutt affair). This is often times exaggeration and sometimes pure fiction. Biographies of Guru Dutt or Waheeda Rehman should be cited as reference and this section should be re-written to reflect the sources. <span style="font-size: smaller;" class="autosigned">—Preceding ] comment added by ] (]) 15:05, 28 June 2009 (UTC)</span><!-- Template:UnsignedIP --> <!--Autosigned by SineBot--> |
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Editing Done, More Revisions and Sources Needed
The original article had language and citation issues. I have fixed some of these. There was exterraneous information that was irrelevant to the biography and uncited. I have removed some of it. The article is better now, in my opinion, however, it could use more biographical information if anyone has it. Please make sure it is interesting to readers and is verified or referenced. With movie stars there is a lot of tabloid news as we all know (here the Guru Dutt affair). This is often times exaggeration and sometimes pure fiction. Biographies of Guru Dutt or Waheeda Rehman should be cited as reference and this section should be re-written to reflect the sources. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 67.169.201.107 (talk) 15:05, 28 June 2009 (UTC)
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