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Revision as of 22:02, 20 September 2009 editKillerChihuahua (talk | contribs)Extended confirmed users34,578 edits Remove personal attack. Wrong venue: This has no place on FAR: if you have issues with an editor, resolve those issues with that editor.← Previous edit Revision as of 22:05, 20 September 2009 edit undoTintor2 (talk | contribs)Autopatrolled, Extended confirmed users, Pending changes reviewers87,350 edits no comment given, just a personal attackNext edit →
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* '''Comment'''. Images need alt text as per ]. ] (]) 18:04, 20 September 2009 (UTC) * '''Comment'''. Images need alt text as per ]. ] (]) 18:04, 20 September 2009 (UTC)
*'''Keep''': get a life, get an education and write a page yourself - you fool! ] (]) 22:00, 20 September 2009 (UTC)

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I am nominating this featured article for review because it fails the featured article criteria, primarily criteria 1c. The article contains numerous unsources statements, with many sections being wholly unsourced.

  • The first paragraph if Biographical and historical background - entirely unsourced. All but one sentence of "Fact and fiction in the narrator" - unsourced.
  • "Models for Oroonoko" - all but a few sentences, again unsourced.
  • "Slavery and Behn's attitudes" - two sentences cited, the rest not.
  • "Historical significance" not a single citation.
  • "Literary significance" - two cited sentences.
  • Three cited sentences in "The New World setting" - the rest not.
  • "Character analysis" has one whole cited sentence.
  • "Women in Oroonoko" appears to possibly be cited, but with the issues in the rest, I'm inclined to think its only those three sentences that have citations
  • "Adaptation" uncited except one sentence.

It also fails criteria 2a - as the lead does not summarize the article adequately, or really at all. The second paragraph focuses on the author's history rather than the novel. It fails 2b in that it lacks the basic novel infobox. Being an older FA (passed in 2005) it does of course lack alt text on all images, though by itself would not be a reason to delist.

(personal attack removed by KillerChihuahuaAdvice 22:02, 20 September 2009 (UTC)) -- Collectonian (talk · contribs) 17:38, 20 September 2009 (UTC)