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<noinclude>{{al|{{#titleparts:Revolution Software/GA2|-1}}|noname=yes}}<br/></noinclude><includeonly>:''This review is ] from ]. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.''</includeonly> |
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'''Reviewer:''' ] (] '''·''' ]) 21:39, 6 October 2011 (UTC) |
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===Checking against GA criteria=== |
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:'''] review''' (see ] for what the criteria are, and ] for what they are not) |
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#It is '''well written'''. |
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#:a ''(prose)'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''(] for ], ], ], ], and ])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: The lead adequately summarises the article, see ] |
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#::The prose good, it is "reasonably well written". |
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#::It's well organised, information is presented logically. Please read ] and subpages. |
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#It is '''accurate''' and ''']'''. |
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#:a ''(references)'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''(citations to ])'': {{GAList/check|y}} c ''(])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:a ''(major aspects)'': {{GAList/check|y}} b ''(focused)'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:''Fair representation without bias'': {{GAList/check|n}} |
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#It is '''stable'''. |
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#:''No edit wars, etc.'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#:: stable |
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{{GAList/check|}} b ''(appropriate use with ])'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#'''Overall''': |
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#:''Pass/Fail'': {{GAList/check|y}} |
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#::Shoddily put together, please read the ] and make sure that this article meetrs them before renominating. ] (]) 22:06, 6 October 2011 (UTC) |
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This artcile has not been reviewed. ] simply copied and pasted ] altering the failure points to passes. ] (]) 14:24, 16 October 2011 (UTC) |
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:Seconding the above just for the record. Apparently by ], though I cannot see how this is any short of socking given ] created this page 10 min later. — <small> ] ▎]</small> 14:30, 16 October 2011 (UTC) |
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