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If you then feel that the "clean-up" tag can be removed, I suggest you contact the person who put the tag on the page (you can find this out by looking in the page history). The person you want is ]. He may be able to say if he agrees that the tag can be removed. Hope that helps. ] 23:14, 29 March 2006 (UTC) If you then feel that the "clean-up" tag can be removed, I suggest you contact the person who put the tag on the page (you can find this out by looking in the page history). The person you want is ]. He may be able to say if he agrees that the tag can be removed. Hope that helps. ] 23:14, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

== Birthday ==
FYI: Birthday seems to differ in ]... --] 08:22, 2 May 2006 (UTC)

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helpme

Hello!I edited this talk page because i don't know what is wrong with the page i edited-Dragan Vasiljković-so i would like someone to say something about it as soon as possible so i can fix it.I don't know why was that box placed on top of the article,but i would like to know what should i do to make it go away.--Captain ginyu 18:57, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

Hi, the article was tagged with cleanup. From the article, it needs wikification, (making links), and needs spaces between punctuation. Let me know if you require assistance. :) Gflores 19:01, 28 March 2006 (UTC)
The few things that I see that needed cleaning up would be:
  1. A citation for what issue of the journal The Australian had an article about the man, including date of publication
  2. Clean up the punctuation and grammar of the "War crimes" section
  3. The last paragraph said that Australians thought that something was "absurd". What Australians said this? Was this printed anywhere? Is there a quote that can be used like "Such and such leader of the Australian government stated in an interview that "X" was absurd"?
Dismas| 23:13, 28 March 2006 (UTC)

Looks better - just a few more comments

  • Lead paragraph says he is currently a golf instructor. Last sentence says he is in prison. It is not clear what order these events are in. Needs clarifying.
  • There is still no reference to articles published in Australia.
  • Some copyediting is needed, but that is a lower priority than the other two comments.

If you then feel that the "clean-up" tag can be removed, I suggest you contact the person who put the tag on the page (you can find this out by looking in the page history). The person you want is User:Johntex. He may be able to say if he agrees that the tag can be removed. Hope that helps. Carcharoth 23:14, 29 March 2006 (UTC)

Birthday

FYI: Birthday seems to differ in de:Dragan_Vasiljković... --katpatuka 08:22, 2 May 2006 (UTC)