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| ⚫ | #Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here.{{partly done}} | ||
| #Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been? | #Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been? | ||
| #Lead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article | #Lead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article | ||
| #The movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers. | #The movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers. | ||
| #Introduction to "Relationship to political movements" section needs revision. | #Introduction to "Relationship to political movements" section needs revision. | ||
| ⚫ | #Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here.{{partly done}} | ||
| #The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now?{{partly done}} | #The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now?{{partly done}} | ||
| #<s>Similarly, the article has a picture some Parisian suffragettes, but France is not even mentioned in the article body.</s>{{done}} | #<s>Similarly, the article has a picture some Parisian suffragettes, but France is not even mentioned in the article body.</s>{{done}} | ||
Revision as of 15:17, 4 December 2011
- Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been?
- Lead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article
- The movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers.
- Introduction to "Relationship to political movements" section needs revision.
- Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here.
Partly done - The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now? Partly done
Similarly, the article has a picture some Parisian suffragettes, but France is not even mentioned in the article body.
DoneLiterature section - the second two paragraphs may be overly specific, giving the names of a few important feminist texts instead of describing the general development of feminist literature as a whole. The entire period from 1818 until the 1960s is skipped over. Undue weight may be given to feminist science fiction. Done
Please see Talk:Feminism/GA1