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| #Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been?{{partly done}} | #Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been?{{partly done}} | ||
| ⚫ | #In the "Relationship to political movements" section the introduction <s>needs to be removed and</s> a clear sentence should be added.{{ |
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| #Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here.{{partly done}} | #Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here.{{partly done}} | ||
| #The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now?{{partly done}} | #The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now?{{partly done}} | ||
| ⚫ | #<s>In the "Relationship to political movements" section the introduction <s>needs to be removed and</s> a clear sentence should be added.</s>{{done}} | ||
| #<s>The movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers.</s>{{done}} | #<s>The movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers.</s>{{done}} | ||
| #<s>Lead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article.</s> {{done}} | #<s>Lead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article.</s> {{done}} | ||
Revision as of 23:09, 5 December 2011
- Science: Could a sentence or two explaining how these ideas differ from the traditional scientific view be added along with what the response of the scientific community to these ideas has been?
Partly done - Theoretical schools: The second paragraph seems be entirely about literary theory. You need to place this paragraph in the context of feminist theory in general, showing us why a discussion of literary theory is appropriate here. Partly done
- The "Late twentieth and early twenty-first centuries" section seems US-centric. What is going on in the rest of the world right now? Partly done
In the "Relationship to political movements" section the introductionneeds to be removed anda clear sentence should be added.
DoneThe movements & ideologies section may need reorganization in order to make it clearer and less complex for readers. DoneLead: mention feminism's effects on society, since that is a major part of the article. DoneSimilarly, the article has a picture some Parisian suffragettes, but France is not even mentioned in the article body. DoneLiterature section - the second two paragraphs may be overly specific, giving the names of a few important feminist texts instead of describing the general development of feminist literature as a whole. The entire period from 1818 until the 1960s is skipped over. Undue weight may be given to feminist science fiction. Done
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