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| *'''Images''' are fine; all PD. A few are not Commons-safe, but they are uploaded locally and appropriately tagged. ] (]) 22:40, 13 January 2013 (UTC) | *'''Images''' are fine; all PD. A few are not Commons-safe, but they are uploaded locally and appropriately tagged. ] (]) 22:40, 13 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
| *'''Support''' I made a couple of , please check <font face="chiller"><font color="red"><b>] - </b></font></font><font face="arial"><font color="green">]</font></font> 15:04, 16 January 2013 (UTC) | *'''Support''' I made a couple of , please check <font face="chiller"><font color="red"><b>] - </b></font></font><font face="arial"><font color="green">]</font></font> 15:04, 16 January 2013 (UTC) | ||
| ==== Review by SandyGeorgia ==== | |||
| '''Oppose''' for now, expect to strike, multiple | |||
| # The '''Réunion Ibis''' (''Threskiornis solitarius'') is ... if the Threskiornis solitarius is an alternate name, it should be both bolded and italicized. | |||
| # Images are facing off the page ... I believe the intent of the MOS guideline applies to both animals and people ... please juggle images so animals aren't looking off the page. | |||
| # In the mid 19th century, ... missing hyphen, pls review throughout. | |||
| # An alternate name is mentioned in the second paragraph; is it not possible to get that mentioned sooner? | |||
| # The taxonomic history of the Réunion Ibis is very convoluted, ... is there a difference between "very convoluted" and "convoluted"? Please check for redundancy. | |||
| # It has been claimed that Bertrand-François Mahé de La Bourdonnais sent a "Solitaire" to France ... weasly ... by whom? | |||
| Just random checks, I stopped there, the article is not in bad shape, but some additional prose review would be helpful. ] (]) 22:31, 17 January 2013 (UTC) | |||
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- Nominator(s): FunkMonk (talk) 16:31, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
I am nominating this for featured article because I have added practically all known info about, most PD images, and presented all controversies relating to the bird, and it has also been copyedited. FunkMonk (talk) 16:31, 12 January 2013 (UTC)
Source review - spotchecks not done
- FN5: publisher?
- FN9, 10: formatting
- Compare FNs 11 and 17. Nikkimaria (talk) 03:23, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- I think all these issues should be fixed now. FunkMonk (talk) 10:59, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- Support as per my good article review. A very strong article on a very interesting topic. J Milburn (talk) 22:40, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- Images are fine; all PD. A few are not Commons-safe, but they are uploaded locally and appropriately tagged. J Milburn (talk) 22:40, 13 January 2013 (UTC)
- Support I made a couple of minor edits, please check Jimfbleak - talk to me? 15:04, 16 January 2013 (UTC)
Review by SandyGeorgia
Oppose for now, expect to strike, multiple
- The Réunion Ibis (Threskiornis solitarius) is ... if the Threskiornis solitarius is an alternate name, it should be both bolded and italicized.
- Images are facing off the page ... I believe the intent of the MOS guideline applies to both animals and people ... please juggle images so animals aren't looking off the page.
- In the mid 19th century, ... missing hyphen, pls review throughout.
- An alternate name is mentioned in the second paragraph; is it not possible to get that mentioned sooner?
- The taxonomic history of the Réunion Ibis is very convoluted, ... is there a difference between "very convoluted" and "convoluted"? Please check for redundancy.
- It has been claimed that Bertrand-François Mahé de La Bourdonnais sent a "Solitaire" to France ... weasly ... by whom?
Just random checks, I stopped there, the article is not in bad shape, but some additional prose review would be helpful. SandyGeorgia (Talk) 22:31, 17 January 2013 (UTC)