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Hello! Thanks for your edits to Bipolar disorder. While they seem reasonable, unfortunately, I've had to revert them for the following reasons.
This is a highly contentious article, and is one of the mostly densely cited in the encyclopedia for that reason. All the sentences in the sections of the article you changed are provided with citations to articles from the medical literature, per Misplaced Pages's WP:MEDRS policy. Have you reviewed the cited articles to check that they support your changes in wording? If not, you should either do so, or add new citations to support your edits that meed the WP:MEDRS criteria. Regards, -- The Anome (talk) 15:23, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
References
Please use high quality references per WP:MEDRS such as review articles or major textbooks. Note that review articles are NOT the same as peer reviewed articles. A good place to find medical sources is TRIP database Thanks.
Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:03, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
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Again, welcome! Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:03, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
Not support
This text "An influential" is not supported. Plus we need to use newer sources. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:04, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
- What TEXT exactly supports "The concept of 'Bipolar II' gained influence from the 1970s and was adopted by the DSM-IV in 1994." in this ref Biol Psychiatry. 1976 Feb;11(1):31-42.</ref>? I do not see text that supports that it gained influence. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:46, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
- Look it's a trivial matter to search for this and see that the category of Bipolar II was introduced from the 70s - particularly the seminal article I took the time to format and include - and adopted by the DSM in the 90s. If you want the history section to continue having no mention whatsoever of the history of the main subtype of BP, then go at it. FinalAccount (talk) 12:27, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- Per WP:V we require references that support the content people add. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 12:34, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- For the record I object to your use of 'we require' as if you are, and others aren't, synonymous with Misplaced Pages or some part of it. FinalAccount (talk) 09:00, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
- Per WP:V we require references that support the content people add. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 12:34, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- Look it's a trivial matter to search for this and see that the category of Bipolar II was introduced from the 70s - particularly the seminal article I took the time to format and include - and adopted by the DSM in the 90s. If you want the history section to continue having no mention whatsoever of the history of the main subtype of BP, then go at it. FinalAccount (talk) 12:27, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- What TEXT exactly supports "The concept of 'Bipolar II' gained influence from the 1970s and was adopted by the DSM-IV in 1994." in this ref Biol Psychiatry. 1976 Feb;11(1):31-42.</ref>? I do not see text that supports that it gained influence. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 23:46, 24 August 2014 (UTC)
Welcome again
Hi, Final Account, and thanks for engaging with other editors on the Bipolar disorder article's talk page. As you can see, I hope you can see that we are, like you, all working together in good faith to improve the encyclopedia to reflect the current medical consensus on this -- and, where significant, to also reflect diversity in medical opinion. Welcome to the Misplaced Pages community! -- The Anome (talk) 19:02, 25 August 2014 (UTC)
- Thank you for taking the time to clarify your perspective. FinalAccount (talk) 09:05, 26 August 2014 (UTC)
Proposed deletion of Ronald R. Fieve
Hello, FinalAccount. I wanted to let you know that I’m proposing an article that you started, Ronald R. Fieve, for deletion because it's a biography of a living person that lacks references. If you don't want Ronald R. Fieve to be deleted, please add a reference to the article.
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Thanks, nafSadh did say 06:21, 31 August 2014 (UTC)
- Do you have a visual or cognitive impairment or what am I missing? FinalAccount (talk) 07:31, 31 August 2014 (UTC)