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	:*] New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Hook cited in article but could not be verified because the presumed source in full is only available to subscribers. The phrase "demonstrate who was boss" is very informal--if possible could you provide me with the part of the article that states this? If you can't, then at least make the hook a bit more formal. ]]<sup>]</sup> 01:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC)		:*] New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Hook cited in article but could not be verified because the presumed source in full is only available to subscribers. The phrase "demonstrate who was boss" is very informal--if possible could you provide me with the part of the article that states this? If you can't, then at least make the hook a bit more formal. ]]<sup>]</sup> 01:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC)
	::*Thanks, Ben. Certainly -- the article sentence that I was paraphrasing in my own words was "As a child he suffered blows from Alon, who made the hierarchy at home clear." Alon is his older brother. Open to suggestions. Best. Sorry for the slow response -- have not had pc access. ] (]) 22:45, 21 July 2015 (UTC)		::*Thanks, Ben. Certainly -- the article sentence that I was paraphrasing in my own words was "As a child he suffered blows from Alon, who made the hierarchy at home clear." Alon is his older brother. Open to suggestions. Best. Sorry for the slow response -- have not had pc access. ] (]) 22:45, 21 July 2015 (UTC)
			:::{{ping\|Epeefleche}} Maybe this would be better. Also, his weight is irrelevant. ]]<sup>]</sup> 09:37, 31 July 2015 (UTC)

			:::'''ALT1''': *... that when Israeli ] and ] medalist ''']''' was a child, his older brother used to hit him to demonstrate his superiority?

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... that when 120 kg (265 lb) Israeli judoka and 2015 European Games medalist Or Sasson was a child, his older brother used to hit him to demonstrate who was boss?

Reviewed: Lake Rose (Pennsylvania)

Created by Epeefleche (talk). Self-nominated at 03:03, 2 July 2015 (UTC).

New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Hook cited in article but could not be verified because the presumed source in full is only available to subscribers. The phrase "demonstrate who was boss" is very informal--if possible could you provide me with the part of the article that states this? If you can't, then at least make the hook a bit more formal. BenLinus 1214 01:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC)

Thanks, Ben. Certainly -- the article sentence that I was paraphrasing in my own words was "As a child he suffered blows from Alon, who made the hierarchy at home clear." Alon is his older brother. Open to suggestions. Best. Sorry for the slow response -- have not had pc access. Epeefleche (talk) 22:45, 21 July 2015 (UTC)

@Epeefleche: Maybe this would be better. Also, his weight is irrelevant. BenLinus 1214 09:37, 31 July 2015 (UTC)

ALT1: *... that when Israeli judoka and 2015 European Games medalist Or Sasson was a child, his older brother used to hit him to demonstrate his superiority?

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