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An attorney for the company has twice now made edits that make the article read like a press release. His version was not written in encyclopedic ] nor in a format that follow ] or the MOS in general. I would ask that ] not to ] but to examine other companies' Misplaced Pages article and try to emulate the style and tone.--] (]) 20:00, 16 May 2016 (UTC) | An attorney for the company has twice now made edits that make the article read like a press release. His version was not written in encyclopedic ] nor in a format that follow ] or the MOS in general. I would ask that ] not to ] but to examine other companies' Misplaced Pages article and try to emulate the style and tone. For example, two business-related articles that reached official "Good Article" status are ] and ]]. --] (]) 20:00, 16 May 2016 (UTC) |
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I changed the announcement date of the collaboration between Blockbuster and CinemaNow from January 2008 to January 2009, based on seeing the press release posted this week by a friend who works for CinemaNow's owner, Sonic Solutions. I'm pretty sure 2008 was the kind of date typo common in the January of any year -- if I'm incorrect about this, I apologize. Mnoe817 (talk) 08:28, 16 January 2009 (UTC)
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I think it is now owned by BestBuy. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 71.139.18.163 (talk) 21:47, 16 June 2010 (UTC)
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An attorney for the company has twice now made edits that make the article read like a press release. His version was not written in encyclopedic WP:TONE nor in a format that follow WP:LEAD or the MOS in general. I would ask that COI editor not to edit-war but to examine other companies' Misplaced Pages article and try to emulate the style and tone. For example, two business-related articles that reached official "Good Article" status are Nestlé Purina PetCare and ]]. --Tenebrae (talk) 20:00, 16 May 2016 (UTC)