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Integrating modern technology with traditional Chinese medicine moved to draftspace
An article you recently created, Integrating modern technology with traditional Chinese medicine, does not have enough sources and citations as written to remain published. It needs more citations from reliable, independent sources. (?) Information that can't be referenced should be removed (verifiability is of central importance on Misplaced Pages). Currently, almost the entire article appears to be original research, which is not allowed on Misplaced Pages, and it is written like a personal essay, as opposed to like an encyclopedia article (WP:NOTESSAY).
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Please do the basic student tutorial. The article about technology in TCM is not a Misplaced Pages article, but rather an essay. Jytdog (talk) 15:03, 30 October 2018 (UTC)
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