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	The current text suggests that the conflict originated as part of the partition, however it was not the case. Kashmir had decided to exercise its right to remain independent post partition, but Pakistan tried to convince the then ruler to join Pakistan. When he did not agree, Pakistan decided to forcefully take control of independent state of Kashmir. It resulted into conflict when the king Hari Singh signed a treaty with India. ] (]) 22:41, 11 August 2019 (UTC)		The current text suggests that the conflict originated as part of the partition, however it was not the case. Kashmir had decided to exercise its right to remain independent post partition, but Pakistan tried to convince the then ruler to join Pakistan. When he did not agree, Pakistan decided to forcefully take control of independent state of Kashmir. It resulted into conflict when the king Hari Singh signed a treaty with India. ] (]) 22:41, 11 August 2019 (UTC)
	: {{done}}. Changed as requested. -- ] (]) 08:43, 12 August 2019 (UTC)		: {{done}}. Changed as requested. -- ] (]) 08:43, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

			== Extended-confirmed-protected edit request on 13 August 2019 ==

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			The intro says "The dispute began in 1947 with the partition of the British Indian Empire.." which is factually incorrect. Kashmir had decided to remain independent - a decision on the lines of that of Nepal and Bhutan. Kashmir would have remained an independent country had it not been the Pakistan's invasion to forcefully capture the territory of Kashmir. And it happened 2-3 months after the independence and partition of India. The Kashmir conflict has got nothing to do with the Partition and even mentioning it alongside partial, with an agenda to hide the facts behind the conflict.

			I think it must be changed accordingly. One of my previous proposals were rejected so I leave it to the admins on how to make it factually correct and impartial.

			As for the process for submitting edit requests - I suggest to change it to "The dispute began in 1947 when the Pakistan's forces Invaded territory of Kashmir with an intention to capture it, when the negotiations led by Jinnah had failed with Hari Singh" ] (]) 17:45, 13 August 2019 (UTC)

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convert "The conflict started after the partition of India in 1947 as a dispute over the former princely state of Jammu and Kashmir" to "The conflict started when Pakistan invaded the princely state of Jammu and Kashmir that had decided to remain independent after the partition of India in 1947"

The current text suggests that the conflict originated as part of the partition, however it was not the case. Kashmir had decided to exercise its right to remain independent post partition, but Pakistan tried to convince the then ruler to join Pakistan. When he did not agree, Pakistan decided to forcefully take control of independent state of Kashmir. It resulted into conflict when the king Hari Singh signed a treaty with India. Suryap2011 (talk) 22:41, 11 August 2019 (UTC)

Done. Changed as requested. -- Kautilya3 (talk) 08:43, 12 August 2019 (UTC)

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The intro says "The dispute began in 1947 with the partition of the British Indian Empire.." which is factually incorrect. Kashmir had decided to remain independent - a decision on the lines of that of Nepal and Bhutan. Kashmir would have remained an independent country had it not been the Pakistan's invasion to forcefully capture the territory of Kashmir. And it happened 2-3 months after the independence and partition of India. The Kashmir conflict has got nothing to do with the Partition and even mentioning it alongside partial, with an agenda to hide the facts behind the conflict.

I think it must be changed accordingly. One of my previous proposals were rejected so I leave it to the admins on how to make it factually correct and impartial.

As for the process for submitting edit requests - I suggest to change it to "The dispute began in 1947 when the Pakistan's forces Invaded territory of Kashmir with an intention to capture it, when the negotiations led by Jinnah had failed with Hari Singh" Suryap2011 (talk) 17:45, 13 August 2019 (UTC)

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