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'''Weak Oppose''' and '''Conditional Support'''. I agree with JHMM13 that the article needs a larger lead and more citations as some sections do not have any. I also think that the article needs a seperate references section. If my concerns are adressed I would be more than happy to support the article. ] 06:33, 8 February 2007 (UTC) | '''Weak Oppose''' and '''Conditional Support'''. I agree with JHMM13 that the article needs a larger lead and more citations as some sections do not have any. I also think that the article needs a seperate references section. If my concerns are adressed I would be more than happy to support the article. ] 06:33, 8 February 2007 (UTC) | ||
*I have expanded the lead and separated the note from the references. The unreferenced comments are ones which occur in more than one source. I shall select representative references and insert them gradually. ] 13:27, 8 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
'''Oppose'''. I thing this artcle can't be Featured article.--] 12:59, 8 February 2007 (UTC) | |||
*That isn't particularly helpful or constructive. Please be more specific in your criticism. ] 13:27, 8 February 2007 (UTC) |
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George I of Greece
Self-nomination A "good article" meeting fac. DrKiernan 08:39, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
- Oppose. Improper referencing. Not enough inline citations to match claims. Lead section far too short for my taste. Prose not brilliant. Here is an example: "George was not the first choice of the Greek people (citation??). Upon the overthrow of Otto, the Greek people had rejected his brother Leopold, the heir presumptive, while adhering to the concept of a monarchy. JHMM13 08:56, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
- Three references are given for the above - Van der Kiste, Clogg and Forster - all at the end of the paragraph. DrKiernan 09:17, 7 February 2007 (UTC)
Weak Oppose and Conditional Support. I agree with JHMM13 that the article needs a larger lead and more citations as some sections do not have any. I also think that the article needs a seperate references section. If my concerns are adressed I would be more than happy to support the article. Kyriakos 06:33, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
- I have expanded the lead and separated the note from the references. The unreferenced comments are ones which occur in more than one source. I shall select representative references and insert them gradually. DrKiernan 13:27, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
Oppose. I thing this artcle can't be Featured article.--Absar 12:59, 8 February 2007 (UTC)
- That isn't particularly helpful or constructive. Please be more specific in your criticism. DrKiernan 13:27, 8 February 2007 (UTC)