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Please change four instances of "Ernard" to "Erhard" in the "Assassin's gun" section. 67.188.1.213 (talk) 04:46, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Done Jack Frost (talk) 05:09, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

It looks like only three instances were changed, but thanks for getting the process started. 67.188.1.213 (talk) 06:51, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Done Rummskartoffel (talk) 09:57, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Thanks much. 67.188.1.213 (talk) 17:23, 28 June 2020 (UTC)

Frank Mankiewicz quote is incorrect

If you listen to actual recordings of Mr. Mankiewicz speaking, it's clear he is actually saying (bold words inserted, strikeout removed from original):

"I have a short announcement to read, which I will read at this time. Senator Robert Francis Kennedy died at 1:44 a.m. today, June 6, 1968. With Senator Kennedy at the time of his death were his wife Ethel, his sisters Mrs. Stephen Smith, Mrs. Patricia Lawford, ~~his~~ brother-in-law Mr. Stephen Smith, ~~and~~ his sister-in-law Mrs. John F. Kennedy. He was 42 years old. ~~Thank you.~~"

This is a very clear recording of everything after the first sentence: Death announcement MrAureliusR_Talk! 18:33, 15 July 2021 (UTC)

FAR needed

The article could perhaps need some formal review, checking it against the FA criteria. It was promoted eons ago, back in 2008. There are huge swaths of unsourced texts, as well as tags for inappropriate colloquialisms. I am also not positive that it is comprehensive, since the discourse around the shooting has changed significantly the last decade. The 'See also' should prolly also be nuked. Nutez (talk) 21:53, 16 November 2021 (UTC)

Tet offensive

Article states that Johnson "ordered the Tet offensive" which is clearly incorrect as the offensive was launched by North Vietnam! 105.63.219.35 (talk) 03:22, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Fixed; thanks! – Kavyansh.Singh (talk) 04:39, 7 June 2022 (UTC)

Protection?

Shouldn't this page be protected for being related to the Arab-Israeli conflict? ColorfulSmoke (talk) 00:10, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

ColorfulSmoke, we only protect articles when there is an ongoing pattern of vandalism, edit warring or other clear disruption. Cullen328 (talk) 00:12, 30 July 2022 (UTC)

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