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| * Fix stat in military section, Iran's Baji can call up reserves numbering 1 million, and has 11 million members. | * Fix stat in military section, Iran's Baji can call up reserves numbering 1 million, and has 11 million members. | ||
| * '''Reduce size of History section by moving details to History of Iran article and using ]. Suggested length: 10 paragraphs.''' | |||
| * Improve writing style in Economic section (too many short, shoppy paragraphs that start with "Iran..." | |||
| * Consolidate Government section into one long section describing the federal government, deferring "main article" links to the main Politics in Iran article | * Consolidate Government section into one long section describing the federal government, deferring "main article" links to the main Politics in Iran article | ||
| * Add brief coverage of current student reform efforts, e.g. http://www.daneshjoo.org/ | * Add brief coverage of current student reform efforts, e.g. http://www.daneshjoo.org/ | ||
Revision as of 04:29, 27 March 2007
- Fix stat in military section, Iran's Baji can call up reserves numbering 1 million, and has 11 million members.
- Consolidate Government section into one long section describing the federal government, deferring "main article" links to the main Politics in Iran article
- Add brief coverage of current student reform efforts, e.g. http://www.daneshjoo.org/
- Better explain democratic elections in early 1950s (put details in History article). Could someone add a paragraph to flesh this out? How were democratically held elections implemented? The Shah was reinstated, the article states, but does not explain how he had lost power...
- Fix the nonfactual reference to the Bush administration’s plans to use nuclear force. These plans are not only unconfirmed, but also alleged. Furthermore, the source article is post dated.
- Give more information about main cities that are not Tehran.
- Add coverage about refugess e.g. from Iraq and Afghanistan, in Demographics.
- Add boundary disputes to 'Geography and climate' section, e.g. from CIA:
- ex. Iran protests Afghanistan's limiting flow of dammed tributaries to the Helmand River in periods of drought; Iraq's lack of a maritime boundary with Iran prompts jurisdiction disputes beyond the mouth of the Shatt al Arab in the Persian Gulf; Iran and UAE dispute Tunb Islands and Abu Musa Island, which are occupied by Iran; Iran stands alone among littoral states in insisting upon a division of the Caspian Sea into five equal sectors
- Confirm all image copyrights and licensing
- Continue to police for unsourced images