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::::That orthodox/conservative Christians believe in a bodily resurrection is made overly clear in the article; the liberal point of view, let alone the non-Christian (atheist) view is largely neglected. Copying the whole Criticism-section of the Vision-article is undue apologetics. ] - ] 15:02, 22 November 2023 (UTC) | ::::That orthodox/conservative Christians believe in a bodily resurrection is made overly clear in the article; the liberal point of view, let alone the non-Christian (atheist) view is largely neglected. Copying the whole Criticism-section of the Vision-article is undue apologetics. ] - ] 15:02, 22 November 2023 (UTC) | ||
:::::You miss my point. I'm all for representing non-Christian views, but that section was just a constructed argument on why Ehrman thinks it was down to purely visions, and as I pointed out about Blomberg, there is no balance. There should either be separate arguments representing both sides of the debate, a paragraph noting scholars sceptical of Ehmrman under his argument (such as Wright), or simply remove the debate altogether and simply state that some scholars argue for the vision hypothesis or bodily resurrection. If any point of view is neglected it is in fact the Christian one, since you're not allowing points in favor of it. ] (]) 19:25, 22 November 2023 (UTC) |
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Let's use WP standards
I have appealed to good faith editing on this talk page repeatedly. I have endeavored not to engage, and to engage, and three times we have simply ground to a halt. This article is not neutral. It has become a soapbox for one point of view. It does not meet WP standards.
Entombment and empty tomb Burial
Early on, the stories about the empty tomb were met with scepcis.
is a half truth. The other half should be mentioned for neutrality, or this statement should be removed.Already in the first century AD, critics of the early Christian community asserted that Jesus had not really died on the cross. Other suggestions are that the body was stolen from the grave, or was lost due to naturally causes.
First, none of this is cited. I do agree the theories mentioned should be included as critiques of the traditional view, but for neutrality, it should include two sentences with the critique of the critique.Neutrality requires that mainspace articles and pages fairly represent all significant viewpoints ... the majority view should be explained sufficiently to let the reader understand how the minority view differs from it, and controversies regarding aspects of the minority view should be clearly identified and explained.
This has not been done here.Critical scholars have argued that there are historical discrepancies in the stories of the burial and the empty tomb.
This is a rabbit hole that would be a digression in this article, which I guess you know, since it isn't explained. But WP says don't raise a topic then fail to explain it. That's a good way to confuse the reader.Martin Hengel argued that Jesus was buried in disgrace as an executed criminal who died a shameful death
This reference has no page number, making this uncheckable, and I think it is not a fully accurate summary of what isa view which is "now widely accepted and has become entrenched in scholarly literature.
which also has no page number. This is full of which should be removed according to summary style.John Dominic Crossan famously stated that Jesus' body was thrown into a shallow grave and eaten by dogs, the bones scattered.
Puffery and no critique. There should at least be a nod to historical evidence somewhere, since there are no Roman texts supporting this.- The entire next paragraph is Ehrman. Presenting this requires that
how the minority view differs from it, and controversies regarding aspects of the minority view should be clearly identified and explained.
They aren't. British New Testament scholar Maurice Casey took a middle position on the matter: he argues that Jesus was indeed buried by Joseph of Arimathea, but in a tomb for criminals owned by the Sanhedrin. He therefore rejects the empty tomb narrative as legendary.
A middle position on what? Only one position has been presented. This also has no page number.A number of Christian authors have rejected the criticisms, taking the Gospel-accounts to be historically reliable. Raymond E. Brown, writing in 1973,...
This has contentious labels - other writers are not characterized by their beliefs: ; it contains editorializing saying that their position is based on their belief in the gospel accounts rather than historical evidence: ; no dates are referenced for any other writer, so this stands out, as if it is an attempt to convey doubt: Jenhawk777 (talk) 20:56, 23 December 2022 (UTC)
You misunderstand WP:NPOV; it's not about finding a compromise between academia and religion. It is about accurately representing what academics say about religion. Jeppiz (talk) 18:07, 3 April 2021 (UTC)
The more serious problem in your arguments above is that you continously imply we should find some middle road between faith and scholarship. We should not, as that would be the opposite of WP:NPOV. I know many people misunderstand NPOV and think it's about meeting halfway. It is not; it's about representing the most reliable sources as accurately as possible. Jeppiz (talk) 09:52, 5 April 2021 (UTC)
- Jeppiz This is so off the wall it almost doesn't deserve answering. Where did I suggest any such thing as a compromise between academia and religion? I have done nothing but argue continuously for a better representation of the academics. I have asked repeatedly that all of the most reliable sources be represented accurately according to WP policies. Are you assuming that all Christian academics, and anything published by a Christian publishing house, are by definition unreliable sources that deserve to be excluded? Jenhawk777 (talk) 04:45, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
The Bibles, both the Hebrew one and the Greek one, are, in my view, largely a collection of religious myths. However, these two collections of religious myths have been also fundamental for the development of Western civilization. They have been in fact so fundamental, that they have been considered factual historical truth for most of the history of this Western civilization. Up to the so-called modern Enlightenment period (roughly from the second half of the 17th century and up to the great French Revolution of 1789), no one ever dared to even start to question the historical truth of these religious narratives or myths. Misplaced Pages tries to continue in the digital age the rationalistic traditions of the Encyclopedists of the Enlightenment period, who did question the historical truth of these myths. By the second half of the 20th century, Western thought and philosophy got close to almost completely denying there was any historical truth in them. These are the sources that open this article. However, this rationalistic turn of civilization never struck any deep roots in the popular minds of the countries in the Western world. The majority of the populations in these countries, including in the United States, are still fundamentally religious. They are still brought up to think that the Bible they read and study in their own native language is the absolute, final truth in the world. As such, by and large they are still definitely believed to contain the the factual historical truth of the ancient periods in which they were collected and put together. And so, the thin veneer of rationalism achieved by Western civilization by the second half of the 20th century is about to be wiped out by a new wave of religious fundamentalism. This current discussion here is just one of the harbingers of this new wave that is surging and is about to overwhelm Western civilization as we know it, I feel. warshy 23:14, 31 May 2021 (UTC)
Misplaced Pages's neutrality is often misunderstood as giving equal validity to mainstream and fringe views
Quoted from WP:NOTNEUTRAL. tgeorgescu (talk) 00:05, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- tgeorgescu I don't mean to be rude, but I don't care what your personal views are. They shouldn't matter to a WP article, and an article's talk page is a really inappropriate place to be discussing them. I only care if you can't keep your beliefs out of a Misplaced Pages article. I am not a fundamentalist, and this sad romanticized fairy tale of the threat to rationalism posed by religious faith is really only a threat to the neutrality of this article. Jenhawk777 (talk) 04:45, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- To reply to some of your specific points instead of arguing about methodology:
- "The other half should be mentioned for neutrality" For anything to be mentioned, there should be sources about it. Do you have anything specific in mind?
- "it should include two sentences with the critique of the critique" I am far from certain that the article should present different viewpoints in the style of a debate. But if you can source different arguments, go ahead with the changes.
- "There should at least be a nod to historical evidence somewhere, since there are no Roman texts supporting this." Sure, as long as you can find a modern source analyzing the burial practices of this era.
- "This has contentious labels - other writers are not characterized by their beliefs" If you want to argue about policy, keep in mind that the policy on biased or opinionated sources requires us to use these "contentious" labels.: "Bias may make in-text attribution appropriate, as in "The feminist Betty Friedan wrote that..."; "According to the Marxist economist Harry Magdoff..."; or "The conservative Republican presidential candidate Barry Goldwater believed that..."." In other words, sources with a pro-Christian bias should be identified in the text. Dimadick (talk) 05:09, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Thank you for a reasoned response. Yes, of course there should be sources. I am off-line for about a week due to RL, but I will come back with those edits.
- Assuming you can establish a Christian bias, then I agree. Some are, some aren't. That should mean that secular apologists are also described accordingly, right? Jenhawk777 (talk) 05:50, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Response by JJ:
- 1: what is "the other half" which is not mentioned? Note that we have a long section with a summary of the Bible-stories, without critical remarks; these are provided later.
- That it was also met with belief. A summary of the stories is background. But critical remarks should probably be moved there. Critical remarks should be kept together with what they are being critical of. Expecting sophomores to keep straight what goes with what is apparently unreasonable. That's why responses should also be included in the same places.
- 2: no, it's not sourced; it's a simple summary, with links. Do you doubt the existence of these 'theories'? The "critique of the critique" can be found at the respective articles.
- Summaries are what we do and they all need sources. If the critique is in the respective articles, it should be in the summary here. I do not doubt the existence of these theories I doubt the accuracy of your summary of them. That Jesus's crucifixion was political/criminal - as a troublemaker - is generally accepted, but "buried in disgrace" and "died a shameful death" are over the top non-neutral claims I do not think are universally agreed upon.
- 3: this sentence introduces the criticisms, which are the explainrd.
- No it doesn't. There are no historical discrepancies discussed or even mentioned, there are only theories with no reference to their possible historicity at all. As one example, the fact that there are no Roman texts supporting Crossan's suggestion should be mentioned if "historical discrepancies" are going to be discussed.
- 4: Hengel's argument is probably indeed summarized inadequately, and may need improvement; a pagenumber could be added, but since it is a direct quote, it is easy verifiable.
- I don't doubt it's a quote, but it's a quote that shouldn't be quoted on WP because of the bias it contains. It should be summarized as one part of the discussion of how Jesus was buried.
- 5: "famously" is not puffery; his remarks have made an impression, to which many authors have responded. This is a summary, and work in progress.
- I suggest you reread WP guidelines.
- 6: Ehrman possibly occupies too much space.
- 7: "Middle position" is unclear indeed; it could be removed.
- 8: when a person is writing in defense of his faith, it is relevant to know this. Though I must say thatCraig Evans does not seem to offer anything that's not also mentioned by other scholars. 1973 is mentioned for Brown because he refers to theories on Jesus being buried in a common grave, which means that Crossan's statements were not novel. That part has to be elaborated; Allison (if I remember correctly) mentions a number of sources, the earliest being from 1847. That Brown s responding to such theories was not mentioned in the original sentence. And he seems to have changed his mind on this, arguing for a common grave in the 1980s or 1990s. This is also not mentioned.
- Who is writing in defense of their faith? You? I think so. That's the problem here. You mean Evans though don't you? So exclude him, I don't care. There are certainly plenty of scholars out there who don't reflect a bias of either kind.
- The basic point still is that the stories (plural) of the entombment of Jesus raise questions, and that his entombment, or burial, was not a honourable burial with the normal mourning procedures and rituals, but a disgracefull one. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 05:50, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- The stories do raise questions and those questions should all be mentioned and examined in the light of what good sources say about historical facts. Please. Do that. It was certainly not a normal burial - though what a normal burial for a crucified man was is the debate, isn't it? I don't find majority support for the idea that his burial was disgraceful.
- For the last month I have left you to work on this article without interference. I have never reverted you once. I have dealt with everyone here in good faith, and with good manners, but the requirements of the encyclopedia are beginning to outweigh all my other concerns. It seems to me as if you have a divided mind on this, that part of you wants to measure up to WP standards and the other part just wants to preach. I suggest squelching your inner preacher. I think you are capable of producing a quality text here if you will do that. I have duties in RL right now, but I am hoping to come back to an article that reflects your true abilities and no longer needs input from me. I have enough on my plate elsewhere. Please just fix this to meet WP standards. For the good of the encyclopedia. That's why we're here. Jenhawk777 (talk) 06:37, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
Jenhawk777, let me get this right: You dig up comments I wrote almost two years ago merely to comment it "almost doesn't deserve answering". Then you go on to write you have enough on your plate and don't want this article to need your input. Good news, it doesn't. Move on.
As for the article, it makes it very clear already what the Christian belief about the resurrection is, so that aspect is not missing. Jeppiz (talk) 10:33, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- I didn't dig up anything. Your comments were posted yesterday, but I see now that you must have been being quoted by tgeorgescu who is the one who posted them. Why he feels the need to quote others, I don't know, but I apologize for misunderstanding and thinking it was you. Jenhawk777 (talk) 16:58, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Jenhawk777, my apologies in return, I didn't see my old comments had been cited earlier yesterday. Jeppiz (talk) 17:09, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- No problem. Jenhawk777 (talk) 18:41, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
- Jenhawk777, my apologies in return, I didn't see my old comments had been cited earlier yesterday. Jeppiz (talk) 17:09, 24 December 2022 (UTC)
Joshua Jonathan I think your changes to the burial section are really well done. I fixed a few typos, added a short paragraph on historical texts, and one to the empty tomb section, and otherwise, I think it's good. Thank you for your work and for your commitment to a quality encyclopedia. Bravo. Jenhawk777 (talk) 14:17, 27 December 2022 (UTC)
DO not merge Empty Tomb of Jesus and Burial of Jesus!
Will whoever merged these two articles please demerge them - there was no discussion that I'm aware of for this major move.Achar Sva (talk) 13:04, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- Already done. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 13:06, 25 December 2022 (UTC)
- Thanks mate :) Achar Sva (talk) 00:36, 26 December 2022 (UTC)
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Post-resurrection appearances of Jesus
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
A few months ago one user deleted the content of the article Post-resurrection appearances of Jesus and replaced it with a redirect to Resurrection of Jesus#Biblical accounts, without any previous discussion, claiming in the edit summary that it was "same topic, same coverage". This is unacceptable and it should never happen again. SanctumRosarium (talk) 21:22, 14 April 2023 (UTC)
- What exactly is "unacceptable"? To cover the same topic on two separate pages, and force editor's to do the same edit twice? Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 04:07, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
- As in: having the same discussion at two places: Talk:Post-resurrection appearances of Jesus#Redirect. Please stick to one thread}}. Joshua Jonathan -Let's talk! 04:10, 15 April 2023 (UTC)
First to see resurrected Jesus
The first to see Jesus after his resurrection was Mary of Magadala. 65.186.177.151 (talk) 03:56, 17 April 2023 (UTC)
Bad grammar
Does anybody else realize that this sentence lacks a subject?
In secular and liberal Christian scholarship asserts that religious experiences, such as the visionary appearances of Jesus and an inspired reading of the Biblical texts, gave the impetus to the belief in the exaltation of Jesus as a "fulfillment of the scriptures," and a resumption of the missionary activity of Jesus's followers.
I think the word "Christian" could be changed to "Christianity", and then "scholarship" would become the subject of the sentence. But as it stands, "In secular and liberal Christian scholarship" is a prepositional phrase, and the sentence has a predicate but no subject. Kk.urban (talk) 17:48, 7 August 2023 (UTC)
WP:UNDUE copying from Vision theory of Jesus' appearances
These edits diff copied a large chunk of text from Vision theory of Jesus' appearances, with the argument
The previous layout seemed very unbalanced with two blocks of arguments on why the resurrection was just down to visions without much relation to the topic of Christology. I pasted sections from the Vision theory of Jesus' appearances page to balance out the points from both sides of the debate.
This is WP:UNDUE. The section Resurrection of Jesus#Christ-devotion explains that the devotion of Jesus as Christ was a most significance change in the attitude of the disciples, and it explains that religious experiencez played a significant role in this change. Singling-out the notion of visionary experiences bypasses this change, and the relevance of religious experience; instead, the focus is shifted to an apology of Christian beliefs.
The article already refers extensively to a limited number of Christian apologists; in the lead, the orthodox view is stated first, where-after the liberal and secular view is stated; the section Resurrection of Jesus#Foundation of faith states:
For orthodox Christians, including some scholars, the resurrection is taken to have been a concrete, material resurrection of a transformed body. Craig L. Blomberg argues there are sufficient arguments for the historicity of the resurrection.
In secular and liberal Christian scholarship, the post-resurrection appearances are often explained as subjective visionary experiences in which Jesus's presence was felt, as articulated in the vision theory of Jesus's appearances. In the twenty-first century, modern scholars such as Gerd Lüdemann have proposed that Peter had a vision of Jesus, due to severe grief and mourning. Ehrman notes that "Christian apologists sometimes claim that the most sensible historical explanation for these visions is that Jesus appeared to the disciples."
That suffices; not everyone in this world is Christian. Joshua Jonathan - Let's talk! 07:58, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- The section goes out of its way to argue for the vision hypothesis. While I'm all for it being put forward, there should at least be some comment by critics of the said hypothesis to make the section more inclusive. Divus303 (talk) 13:25, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- For example, it cites Craig Blomberg as saying there are sufficient arguments, but it doesn't cite any, meanwhile the article cares to go out of its way to argue for the vision hypothesis. That's WP:UNDUE. Divus303 (talk) 13:34, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- That orthodox/conservative Christians believe in a bodily resurrection is made overly clear in the article; the liberal point of view, let alone the non-Christian (atheist) view is largely neglected. Copying the whole Criticism-section of the Vision-article is undue apologetics. Joshua Jonathan - Let's talk! 15:02, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- You miss my point. I'm all for representing non-Christian views, but that section was just a constructed argument on why Ehrman thinks it was down to purely visions, and as I pointed out about Blomberg, there is no balance. There should either be separate arguments representing both sides of the debate, a paragraph noting scholars sceptical of Ehmrman under his argument (such as Wright), or simply remove the debate altogether and simply state that some scholars argue for the vision hypothesis or bodily resurrection. If any point of view is neglected it is in fact the Christian one, since you're not allowing points in favor of it. Divus303 (talk) 19:25, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
- That orthodox/conservative Christians believe in a bodily resurrection is made overly clear in the article; the liberal point of view, let alone the non-Christian (atheist) view is largely neglected. Copying the whole Criticism-section of the Vision-article is undue apologetics. Joshua Jonathan - Let's talk! 15:02, 22 November 2023 (UTC)
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