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| * Better explain democratic elections in early 1950s (put details in History article). Could someone add a paragraph to flesh this out? How were democratically held elections implemented? The Shah was reinstated, the article states, but does not explain how he had lost power... | * Better explain democratic elections in early 1950s (put details in History article). Could someone add a paragraph to flesh this out? How were democratically held elections implemented? The Shah was reinstated, the article states, but does not explain how he had lost power... | ||
| * Fix the nonfactual reference to the Bush administration’s plans to use nuclear force. These plans are not only unconfirmed, but also alleged. Furthermore, the source article is post dated. | * Fix the nonfactual reference to the Bush administration’s plans to use nuclear force. These plans are not only unconfirmed, but also alleged. Furthermore, the source article is post dated. | ||
| * Give more information about main cities besides Tehran. | |||
| * Add coverage about refugess e.g. from Iraq and Afghanistan, in Demographics. | * Add coverage about refugess e.g. from Iraq and Afghanistan, in Demographics. | ||
| * Add boundary disputes to 'Geography and climate' section, e.g. from CIA: | * Add boundary disputes to 'Geography and climate' section, e.g. from CIA: | ||
Revision as of 14:08, 4 April 2007
- The article needs to be reedited. There are many grammatical errors and grammatically awkward sentences. In some sections (such as ‘History',) it is obvious the article was written by a nonnative English speaker. It almost sounds like a translation.
- Consolidate Government section into one long section describing the federal government, deferring "main article" links to the main Politics in Iran article
- Add brief coverage of current student reform efforts
- Better explain democratic elections in early 1950s (put details in History article). Could someone add a paragraph to flesh this out? How were democratically held elections implemented? The Shah was reinstated, the article states, but does not explain how he had lost power...
- Fix the nonfactual reference to the Bush administration’s plans to use nuclear force. These plans are not only unconfirmed, but also alleged. Furthermore, the source article is post dated.
- Add coverage about refugess e.g. from Iraq and Afghanistan, in Demographics.
- Add boundary disputes to 'Geography and climate' section, e.g. from CIA:
- ex. Iran protests Afghanistan's limiting flow of dammed tributaries to the Helmand River in periods of drought; Iraq's lack of a maritime boundary with Iran prompts jurisdiction disputes beyond the mouth of the Shatt al Arab in the Persian Gulf; Iran and UAE dispute Tunb Islands and Abu Musa Island, which are occupied by Iran; Iran stands alone among littoral states in insisting upon a division of the Caspian Sea into five equal sectors
- Confirm all image copyrights and licensing
- Continue to police for unsourced images