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Starting review ] ] 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC) Starting review ] ] 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC)
* With the proviso that Earwig is running in degraded mode now due to Too Many Requests, no problems found with copyvios.
* None of the items under ] apply.
* Per ], the lead section should summarize the rest of the article, not introduce new material.
** "application programming interface (API)" is not mentioned in the article (at least not by that name)
** The lead is heavy on material from ''History'' and almost completely ignores the ''Background'', "Mechanism'', and ''Privacy concerns'' sections, so the most important points from those sections should be added.
*Prose:
** {{tq|became an official Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) draft}} no need to say "official"
** {{tq|The header was meant ... User-Agents became ... this information is used}} The change of tense here is jarring.
** {{tq|In 2020, Google announced their intention to deprecate user-agent (UA) strings ... }} This is a statement about what happened in 2020 cited to a paper published in 2023. Are you sure that's the right reference?
** {{tq|Brave also raised concerns about the initial proposal ... }} Likewise, this is a source published in 2019 talking ostensibly talking about events that happened in 2020.
** {{tq|As of May 2024, over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints}} It's now September; are there any more recent sources for this?
**{{tq|Since the adoption of Client Hints by major browsers}} you should say which browsers support it.
**{{tq|overall adoption of Client Hints across the internet was low}} this seems at odds with earlier statements like {{tq|over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints}}

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Nominator: Sohom Datta (talk · contribs) 19:54, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: RoySmith (talk · contribs) 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

Starting review RoySmith (talk) 01:27, 16 September 2024 (UTC)

  • With the proviso that Earwig is running in degraded mode now due to Too Many Requests, no problems found with copyvios.
  • None of the items under WP:GAFAIL apply.
  • Per MOS:LEAD, the lead section should summarize the rest of the article, not introduce new material.
    • "application programming interface (API)" is not mentioned in the article (at least not by that name)
    • The lead is heavy on material from History and almost completely ignores the Background, "Mechanism, and Privacy concerns sections, so the most important points from those sections should be added.
  • Prose:
    • became an official Internet Engineering Task Force (IETF) draft no need to say "official"
    • The header was meant ... User-Agents became ... this information is used The change of tense here is jarring.
    • In 2020, Google announced their intention to deprecate user-agent (UA) strings ... This is a statement about what happened in 2020 cited to a paper published in 2023. Are you sure that's the right reference?
    • Brave also raised concerns about the initial proposal ... Likewise, this is a source published in 2019 talking ostensibly talking about events that happened in 2020.
    • As of May 2024, over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints It's now September; are there any more recent sources for this?
    • Since the adoption of Client Hints by major browsers you should say which browsers support it.
    • overall adoption of Client Hints across the internet was low this seems at odds with earlier statements like over 75% of all traffic on the internet supports client hints