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During the Kargil War in 1999, the then 26-year-old Major Jose was tasked with planning and executing a special mission to disrupt enemy lines of maintenance. This operation aimed to capture the Gultar Mother base, a critical administrative hub for infiltrating enemy forces. During the Kargil War in 1999, the then 26-year-old Major Jose was tasked with planning and executing a special mission to disrupt enemy lines of maintenance. This operation aimed to capture the Gultar Mother base, a critical administrative hub for infiltrating enemy forces.
Jose and his team faced numerous challenges, including scaling ice walls and engaging in close-quarters combat with enemy soldiers. Despite the unknown number of enemy combatants and the treacherous terrain, Jose led his team with courage and determination. With the support of artillery fire, they successfully repelled enemy forces and secured their objectives. Jose and his team faced numerous challenges, including scaling ice walls and engaging in close-quarters combat with enemy soldiers. Despite the unknown number of enemy combatants and the treacherous terrain, Jose led his team with courage and determination. With the support of artillery fire, they successfully repelled enemy forces and secured their objectives.
During the assault on Sando, while fixing the rope on an ice wall, Major Prince Jose, SM was hit by an enemy artillery splinter. He tumbled 300 feet down the slope and was unconscious for half an hour. When he regained consciousness, he suffered memory loss for about 15 minutes. Despite his injuries, he rejoined his unit and continued to fight. <ref>{{cite web |url=https://indiankanoon.org/doc/1703223/ |title=Maj Prince Jose vs Union Of India on 11 July, 2008 |date=11 July 2008 |publisher=Kerala High Court |access-date=23 December 2024}}</ref> During the assault on Sando, while fixing the rope on an ice wall, Major Prince Jose, SM was hit by an enemy artillery splinter. He tumbled 300 feet down the slope and was unconscious for half an hour. When he regained consciousness, he suffered memory loss for about 15 minutes. Despite his injuries, he rejoined his unit and continued to fight. <ref>{{cite web |url=https://indiankanoon.org/doc/1703223/ |title=Maj Prince Jose vs Union Of India on 11 July, 2008 |date=11 July 2008 |publisher=Kerala High Court |access-date=23 December 2024}}</ref> . <ref>{{cite news |title=Kargil hero battles Army injustices, injuries |newspaper=The Times of India |date=2004-10-01 |issn=0971-8257 |access-date=2024-12-18}}</ref>





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Kargil War Veteran, Major Prince Jose, Sena Medal

Kargil WarSainik School KazhakootamThiruvananthapuramSena MedalSena MedalRaid (military)Militant

9 Para (Special Forces)

Major
Prince Jose
Sena Medal
File:Https://commons.wikimedia.org/File:Army winter dress.jpgMajor Prince Jose, SM - Kargil war veteran
RankMajor
Unit9 Para (Special Forces)
Battles / warsKargil war (OP Vijay), OP Rakshak (Kashmir Insurgency), OP Prince (Awarded Sena Medal)
AwardsSena Medal Gallantry, Wound Medal
Alma materSainik School Kazhakkoottam, Kerala, College of Military Engineering (Pune), Military College of Mechanical and Electrical Engineering (Secunderabad), University of Petroleum and Energy Studies, (Dehradun)

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  2. "My Story: 'After Half An Hour Of Unconsciousness, I Led An Assault On Zulu Top And Defeated The Enemy In Kargil War' - The Logical Indian". thelogicalindian.com. 2020-07-25. Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  3. Kerala, Honorable High Court (11 July 2008). "Maj Prince Jose vs Union Of India on 11 July, 2008". https://indiankanoon.org/doc/1703223/. {{cite web}}: External link in |website= (help)CS1 maint: url-status (link)
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  5. "A war veteran raring to go again". The Times of India. 2020-07-26. ISSN 0971-8257. Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  6. "പാക്ക് ചതിച്ചുവടുകളെ അങ്കമുറകൾ കൊണ്ട് ഞെട്ടിച്ച ഇന്ത്യ; കാർഗിലിലെ മലയാളിപ്പെരുമ". പാക്ക് ചതിച്ചുവടുകളെ അങ്കമുറകൾ കൊണ്ട് ഞെട്ടിച്ച ഇന്ത്യ; കാർഗിലിലെ മലയാളിപ്പെരുമ (in Malayalam). Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  7. "Sainik School Old Boys Association". sskzmoba.org. Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  8. "Sainik School Old Boys Association". sskzmoba.org. Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  9. "ശ്വാസം മാത്രമുള്ള ആ 15 മിനിറ്റ്, മറക്കാനാവില്ല; രാജ്യാഭിമാനമായ കാർഗിലിലെ മലയാളിവീര്യം". ശ്വാസം മാത്രമുള്ള ആ 15 മിനിറ്റ്, മറക്കാനാവില്ല; രാജ്യാഭിമാനമായ കാർഗിലിലെ മലയാളിവീര്യം (in Malayalam). Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  10. "'മൈനസ് 9 വരെ തണുപ്പ്, രാത്രിയിൽ തീപ്പെട്ടിക്കൊള്ളി കത്തിക്കാതെ നടത്തം'; കാർഗിൽ എന്ന കോരിത്തരിപ്പ്". ‘മൈനസ് 9 വരെ തണുപ്പ്, രാത്രിയിൽ തീപ്പെട്ടിക്കൊള്ളി കത്തിക്കാതെ നടത്തം’; കാർഗിൽ എന്ന കോരിത്തരിപ്പ് (in Malayalam). Retrieved 2024-12-18.
  11. Win Life Like a Warrior (2024-05-07). Meet Kargil War Hero Ready For Action: Maj Prince #winlifelikeawarrior. Retrieved 2024-12-18 – via YouTube.
  12. Major ( Dr.) Mohommed Ali Shah ( Veteran) (2024-12-06). 9 PARA SF,Hardcore Para Commando Maj Prince Jose,SM: International TEDx speaker Maj(Dr)Mohd Ali Shah. Retrieved 2024-12-18 – via YouTube.
  13. Kazhaks 90 (2024-07-31). Major Prince Jose SM | Kargil War Hero | Kargil Vijay Diwas Speech at Indian Embassy, Bahrain. Retrieved 2024-12-18 – via YouTube.{{cite AV media}}: CS1 maint: numeric names: authors list (link)
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