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Article set up

I believe the 'Harvard reference' is necessary, for the material is presumably copyrighted. What I've used for this article is almost exclusively the summary of Meltyukhov's book. I'll try to add soon more material covering the Soviet offensive plans (from the corresponding chapter).

Please report me before revising. Constanz - Talk 18:17, 19 January 2006 (UTC)

Quote in "Had the Soviet assault taken place"

Could you check the sources for the final quote by Meltyukhov? It seems to me that

"have lead to"

should be

"have led to",

and

"than it occurred in 1945."

should be

"than it acquired in 1945."

Shenme 00:17, 20 February 2006 (UTC)

1.I've misspelt, it should be 'have led to'. 2. The phrase in Russian is presumably a bit different ('than it really happened/occured in 1945'). Acquired is basically OK, it gives the meaning. May-be we could replace direct quotation there with reference to the author's point. Constanz - Talk 08:32, 23 February 2006 (UTC)

% must be wrong

When the axis invaded on june 21 they hade around 4.3 million men but on the page it says 81.6%=1.4 million so the % or the numbers are wrong

(Deng 15:12, 15 March 2006 (UTC))

And of course you are the person who knows it better than Russian historian Mikhail Meltyukhov.:)--Constanz - Talk 14:59, 16 March 2006 (UTC)

What are you talking about If you look at YOUR own post on the eastern front talk page YOU are the one who posted this graph

And YOU gave this source

Source: Мельтюхов М.И. Упущенный шанс Сталина. Советский Союз и борьба за Европу: 1939-1941 (Документы, факты, суждения). — М.: Вече, 2000. Page 478, table 47 --

And dont delete this graph again just because it proves that you are wrong and it proves it so completly either you are wrong in this articleor you are wrong on the eastern front talk page article because 81,6% cant be 1.4 million if 100% is 3.3 million germans and 1 million axis allies (Deng 18:35, 17 March 2006 (UTC))

The problem is still here, there are 3 graphs in WIKI that I have found and all of them show 3 diffrent things. Someone needs to find out which one is correct and fix the other 2. (Deng 00:58, 22 March 2006 (UTC))

No need to 'fix' anything here, as the article is about Meltyukhov's research results. because 81,6% cant be 1.4 million if 100% is 3.3 million germans and 1 million axis allies -- what do you refer to? -- where have I posted such figures and percentages? --Constanz - Talk 11:35, 23 March 2006 (UTC)

Scroll up and look I explained it all no more then a few lines up, and dont play the fool when I explained it the first time you deleted the graph from the talk here with the comment " why post it here? " And to answer why post it here is because to show where you posted it the first time and to show that the graphs dont match. But the fact reamis you give 2 diffrent graphs and they dont match at all and that is why I posted the other graph here so that you can see that they dont match att all.(Deng 12:32, 24 March 2006 (UTC))

I should thank you for vigilance; yes, I hadn't marked that this table shows only a strip of border. the high numbers of Soviet troops is due to fact that Red Army had concentrated there; as Meltyukhov believes, in order to deliver strike against Wehrmacht. --Constanz - Talk 08:25, 25 March 2006 (UTC)

The chart in the article appears to be misleading to me

Where on earth is Ostrolenka? I can see why German forces south of the Carpathians do not matter, but unless Ostrolenka is on the Baltic Sea shore (which I doubt, but I can not find it on a map), there would be more German forces that could enter into combat in Poland/East Prussia in reaction to a strike against German forces in the sector covered by the graph. Andreas 15:42, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

Confusion indeed (it looks as if one has to look up the original again...). See map: http://feefhs.org/maps/ruse/poland3.jpg, where Ostrolenka can be found near Lomzha (larger script).--Constanz - Talk 16:21, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

The text before this table 59 says (my/babelfish poor translation):In accordance with the Soviet operational plan basic events had to unroll at the front from Ostrolenka to the Carpathians, where the troops of the Southwestern front and left wing of West would have delivered main attack on the enemy troops. The ratio of the forces of sides at the front of Ostrolenka - the Carpathians is shown in Table 59, data of which testifies that Soviet army had located forces, capable of accomplishing the tasks assigned to them. Troops of the North Western and right wing of Western front had to The forces of Northern Front were prepared for the offensive against Finland, and Southern Front - against Rumania. However, first priority measures were the actions of the Red Army on the Soviet-German boundary from Baltic to the Carpathians. (op cit, c.503)--Constanz - Talk 16:32, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

Thanks for digging. In that case I would say the chart is misleading (and very cleverly chosen to be so!), since he ignores the whole of AG North and AG Centre's 9th Army to the north of Lomzha. A strength of three armies (18, 16, 9) and two Panzer Groups (4 and 3), with 631 tanks in Panzergroup 4 alone. These forces where directly on the already very long northern flank of Pavlov's forces in the Bialystok salient. If you have not done so already, I suggest getting 'The initial period of war' by Glantz, to get an idea of the placements. I do not find it credible to neglect these German forces, and to presume they would remain inactive. Andreas 20:05, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

I checked Mueller-Hillebrand. Panzergruppe 2: 950 tanks, not 900 as Melthyukhov states. Panzergruppe 3: 783. Panzergruppe 4 862 (not 631). Additional to that up to 377 Sturmgeschuetze (total present in the Wehrmacht in June 44, not all of them would have been in Poland or East Prussia). Even including the forces from the Soviet Baltic Military District you get nowhere near 8.7:1 anymore. So much just for the AFVs. Then there are the man and guns. Then there is the fact that German guns had a higher calibre (105 vs 76mm as standard divisional, 150 vs 122 as heavy divisional), therefore higher destructive power. Etc. etc. The table is, in my view, deliberately misleading. Andreas 20:58, 20 April 2006 (UTC)

It seems so, yes. I have to re-read this chapter again, which is not an easy job. It seems that I've summarised the ideas correctly, so the confusion has to be attributed to the author. BTW, Ostrolenka is also spelled Ostroleka, but it seems the latter and the former are still the same place.--Constanz - Talk 08:50, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

The paragraph before In accordance with the Soviet operational plan basic events had to unroll:

However, picture will be incomplete, if we do not attempt to represent at least hypothetically, how could the events have developed, if Soviet management had carried out its initial plan and attacked Germany on June 12, 1941. At this time German troops completed preparation for the operation "Barbarossa" and concentration at the Soviet boundaries, where in the strip from the Baltic to the Black Sea was already expanded to 81,6% of divisions out of those, which it was provided to the evening of June, 21. On June 10 the divisions of the first echelon began to be secretly derived in 30 km near-boundary strip. Remaining troops either were in motion to the East or awaited their turn for the transfer in the camps. Luftwaffe also was completing redislocation after Balkan campaign. Wehrmacht had neither defensive nor offensive group, and Soviet attack at this moment would have placed it to a very complex situation and would have made it possible to raid its forces into parts. (Мельтюхов 2000:502-503) --Constanz - Talk 09:22, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

The Ostroleka-Carpathian strip was the place were Soviet leadership had (according to Strategic Devlopment plan etc) planned to deliver the main strike. This probably gave the author a pretext to give table representing only troops in the particular region. Meltyukhov's book includes this graph: http://militera.lib.ru/research/meltyukhov/s07.gif. --Constanz - Talk 09:32, 21 April 2006 (UTC)

Some removals

Hi, could you add more specific citations so as to ensure it doesn't look like your original research? I've removed as source the webpage with not reference for their figures. --Constanz - Talk 10:08, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

I can do that, but it will be a while, since I have just come out of hospital. Andreas 13:18, 24 July 2006 (UTC)

According to guidelines, we have OR, if the contribution

1. introduces an analysis or synthesis of established facts, ideas, opinions, or arguments in a way that builds a particular case favored by the editor, without attributing that analysis or synthesis to a reputable source;

I think you may be near to the definition in some cases:

• Additional to those tanks are up to 377 Sturmgeschütze, the total number present in the Wehrmacht in June 41, although not all of them would have been in Poland or East Prussia),
• Also to consider are the additional men and guns...
• The table as presented by Melthyukhov is not fully capturing the reality of the situation north of the Carpathians. (if so, it's better to argue on talk and remove the table,avoding value judgements. Naturally, here is only my citation from the study, and as such, is maybe torn out of context.)

• The Mechanized Corps also lacked motor vehicles and artillery tractors which would have been necessary to conduct a deep operation. is in need of citation.

Also:

• The same applied to manpower, which ranged from 43% at 14th Mechanized Corps to 67% at 6th Mechanized Corps did not have reliable sources, and a comparison to German counterparts would have been worthful.--Constanz - Talk 10:45, 22 July 2006 (UTC)

Actually, I cannot understand why does it seem that M. suggests Red Army had concentrated to this strip, whereas he has yet written ‘’However, in case of Red Army’s invasion to German controlled territories, the concentration on Southern regions was comprehensible, since a strike in that direction, would have cut Germany off from the basic allies and Romanian oils. Whereas main assault in the north-western direction would have led to the collision with main forces of German army and it would have required the breakthrough of fortified areas. ‘’(Meltyukhov 2000:381) In fact, the current table and his graph seem to cover the very strike through fortified regions (?)

And according to Zhukov proposal may 15, 1941:

The immediate task is to break German army east of river Visla and in the Krakow direction to cross the boundary on river Narev, the Visla and to seize the area of Katowice, for which:

a) to deliver the main strike by the forces of South-Western Front in the direction of Krakow, Katowice, to cut Germany off from its southern allies;

b) the deliver the supporting strike by the left wing of Western Front to the direction of Warsaw, Demblin with the purpose of tying the Warsaw group and seizing Warsaw,--Constanz - Talk 07:59, 23 July 2006 (UTC)

Now I can't understand what does this talk on Southern version of assault indicate. According to graphs by M., there is small diference between these two variants. --Constanz - Talk 09:50, 23 July 2006 (UTC)

Another note

I've got another suggestion: let us try to keep this article confined to M.'s book, as far as it's possible. I've recently read a study that supports some of his crucial points (with the view of military planning), but also disagrees with the possible outcome of a Soviet assault. I'd rather not bring in too much citations from the source; I think a section on the reception of the book (outside Russia) should be added (although there's not much heard about any reception at all, in case we omit Eastern Europe and, alas, IHR guys, who have read the book and probably concluded that it proves the existence of a global masonic-Zionist conspiracy...)--Constanz - Talk 13:20, 25 July 2006 (UTC)

Notability problems

I am uneasy about this long article. It discusses in full, exhausting detail a book which has made almost no impact at all outside Russia, has never been translated into English, and has not even been reviewed by respectable Western scholars in the field (Glantz, Overy, etc.). Given that the book supports a highly controversial claim that the Soviet Union was preparing to invade Germany in 1941, a claim not supported by any respectable Western scholar, we may be on very shaky ground here.

Should Misplaced Pages be the vehicle to advance in extreme detail the viewpoint of obscure authors, especially when it is this controversial? What is the justification for having such an exhaustive article on this subject?

At this point, I am leaning towards greatly condensing the text in this article and incorporating it into the Mikhail Meltyukhov article. That article is essentialy a stub, so there is plenty of space. Balcer 01:05, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

To be more specific, let's consult Misplaced Pages:Notability (books). Here are the criteria it lists that can justify having an article about a particular book:

• 1. The book has been the subject of multiple, non-trivial published works whose sources are independent of the book itself, with at least some of these works serving a general audience. This includes published works in all forms, such as newspaper articles, other books, television documentaries and reviews. Some of these works should contain sufficient critical commentary to allow the article to grow past a simple plot summary.
• 2. The book has won a major literary award.
• 3. The book has been made or adapted with attribution into a motion picture that was released into multiple commercial theaters, or was aired on a nationally televised network or cable station in any country.
• 4. The book is the subject of instruction at multiple grade schools, high schools, universities or post-graduate programs in any particular country.
• 5. The book's author is so historically significant that any of his or her written works may be considered notable, even in the absence of secondary sources.

Obviously the book not not satisfy criteria 2 to 5. I am doubtful it satisfies criterion 1, as the number of reviews of the book is small to say the least.

So, I am leaning towards listing this article about the book for deletion as failing notability requirements. Balcer 01:21, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

I don't see a "notability" problem here. Clearly, this is an interesting book, on an important topic. Why the personal attack on Mikhail Meltyukhov ("obscure author", "no impact at all", etc)? It looks like the author is known enough to have a WP article on him, and the book definitely had some impact -- otherwise we wouldn't be talking about it, would we? I say let's keep the article, and make it even better, not suppress it. Turgidson 03:26, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

The fact that it is an interesting book on an important topic has nothing to do with notability. The fact that the author has a biography article on Misplaced Pages does nothing for notability either. Misplaced Pages criteria for book notability are very clear and I listed them above. Please provide specific evidence that it fulfills some of those criteria, if you believe the article should not be deleted. Balcer 03:33, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

Look, I just stated my opinion, you stated yours -- this is not an AfD debate, and I'm not here to respond to your demands, which I find unreasonable. You want to suppress the article (for whatever reason), go ahead and start an AfD. I maintain my position that it's better to develop such an article (in which a lot of work has been put already by many editors, and which covers an interesting, notable topic), than expending time and energy in trying to delete it. Turgidson 03:49, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

I don't want to start an AfD just yet because I want to give other editors a chance to provide evidence that the book is in fact notable, without the time pressure of a formal AfD process.

Any content worth preserving from this article can be moved to other more suitable articles. I already mentioned the article about the author, which cries out for expansion. We could move content to an article devoted to the book's subject, maybe German-Soviet conflict in counterfactual history, or Hypothetical Soviet pre-emptive strike on Germany in 1941 (these are working titles, I am sure something better can be devised). Those articles would not violate Misplaced Pages notability guidelines, and would be comprehensive in presenting both arguments for and against various theories. In its present state the article lists Metlyukov's theories without any counterarguments.

Misplaced Pages notability guidelines exist for a good reason. Let's apply them. Balcer 04:17, 2 June 2007 (UTC)

Goodwin's law

Stating that he got a positive review from the Holocaust denial institution is totally unacceptable as it present his entire scholarship as friendly to the Holocaust denial, a gross lie. If the institute is of such credibility that it is considered to be a HD-institution, its reviews are not worthy to be cited at all. Piotrus should have then just removed the info about this review from the article which I will do now for him. That he instead made this edit just casting shadow on the scholar is not only gross violation of NPOV, and example of WP:TE but violates WP:BLP as well. --Irpen 05:25, 4 June 2007 (UTC)

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