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| :*"Μη μου τους κύκλους τάραττε - Do not disturb my circles" - en dash needed rather than hyphen | :*"Μη μου τους κύκλους τάραττε - Do not disturb my circles" - en dash needed rather than hyphen | ||
| :*"300 degrees Celsius (572 degrees Fahrenheit)," - degrees Fahrenheit should be abbreviated | :*"300 degrees Celsius (572 degrees Fahrenheit)," - degrees Fahrenheit should be abbreviated | ||
| :* Some dates ranges have hyphens rather than dashes. ] 20:33, 10 September 2007 (UTC) | :* Some dates ranges have hyphens rather than en dashes. ] 20:33, 10 September 2007 (UTC) | ||
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Archimedes
self-nom This is currently a Good Article, and has been through Peer Review. --♦IanMacM♦ 06:40, 10 September 2007 (UTC)
- Comment These minor stylistic fixes needed:
- Some hyphens in reference titles should be en dashes
- I think some image captions are missing full-stops at the end. They seem to be complete sentences.
- "Μη μου τους κύκλους τάραττε - Do not disturb my circles" - en dash needed rather than hyphen
- "300 degrees Celsius (572 degrees Fahrenheit)," - degrees Fahrenheit should be abbreviated
- Some dates ranges have hyphens rather than en dashes. Epbr123 20:33, 10 September 2007 (UTC)