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	** '''17th-18th centuries'''. 200 years of history are missing.		** '''17th-18th centuries'''. 200 years of history are missing.
	** '''Late 18th – end of 19th century'''. The riots of 1848 and the great fire of 1850 might deserve a mention.		** '''Late 18th – end of 19th century'''. The riots of 1848 and the great fire of 1850 might deserve a mention.
			** '''Krakau, Austria'''. The long time until 1918, in which the town was part of Austria, requires better coverage with neutral wording (Cracow or Krakau, not Kraków)
	** '''20th century to the present'''. Strikes and socialist movements of the interbellum might deserve a mention. No history after the construction of the steel mill in 1949.		** '''20th century to the present'''. Strikes and socialist movements of the interbellum might deserve a mention. No history after the construction of the steel mill in 1949.
	* '''Geography and climate'''. Add info about environment pollution.		* '''Geography and climate'''. Add info about environment pollution.

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There are still minor problems with grammar and style. The article might benefit from copyediting by the League of Copyeditors.
Polish pronuncation is given in IPA and English – in Merriam-Webster transcription. Converting M-W to IPA would be good for the sake of consistency. BTW, in Polish pronuncation, shouldn't the final w be unvoiced ()?

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Factual errors

Late 18th – end of 19th century.
- Kraków became part of Galicia during the Third Partition, after Kościuszko Uprising.
- It became part of the Duchy of Warsaw in 1809 when part of Galicia was annexed due to the Treaty of Schönbrunn.

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Etymology. Add info that Kraków is a possessive form.
History
- Early Kraków.
  - Kraków as part of the Great Moravian Empire and Kingdom of Bohemia before it was conquered by Mieszko I.
  - How Kraków became a bishopric see. Saint Stanislaus might deserve a mention.
  - How Kraków became a capital city after Bretislaus's invasion.
- 17th-18th centuries. 200 years of history are missing.
- Late 18th – end of 19th century. The riots of 1848 and the great fire of 1850 might deserve a mention.
- Krakau, Austria. The long time until 1918, in which the town was part of Austria, requires better coverage with neutral wording (Cracow or Krakau, not Kraków)
- 20th century to the present. Strikes and socialist movements of the interbellum might deserve a mention. No history after the construction of the steel mill in 1949.
Geography and climate. Add info about environment pollution.
Districts. Beside the info about internal administrative division, the article should also describe Kraków's place within the administrative division of the entire country, viz. that it is the seat of not only the Lesser Poland Voivodship, but also of two counties (powiat grodzki Kraków and powiat krakowski). The concept of powiat grodzki should be briefly explained.
Landmarks. Some info could be moved from the Districts section.
Economy. IT services offshoring is the only branch of economy really described. Industry (Huta im. Sendzimira, Elektrociepłownia Kraków, Philip Morris, etc.), agriculture, commerce, tourist industry and other should also be mentioned.
Parks. A little more about Błonia, a unique stretch of meadows wedged into the city center, could be added.
Religion. Entire section missing. As a bishopric for over 1000 years, a place connected with the lives of many saints, as well as of Pope John Paul II, a site of important shrines including Divine Mercy at Łagiewniki and Holy Cross at Mogiła, Kraków is an important Catholic center. It also attracts many Jewish pilgrims as a formerly important site of Jewish scholarhip.