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* Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been ''comandante''? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things? * Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been ''comandante''? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things?
* "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized * "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized
* '''Fix discrepancy of Fidel Castro's letter to FDR. He was born in Aug 1926 but the letter is dated Nov 1940, which means he was 14 when he wrote it. But in the letter and the caption it says he is 12.''' ]
*Shorten abstract. Move relevant material to body of article. (intro shouldn't be so long; especially as to obscure index) *Shorten abstract. Move relevant material to body of article. (intro shouldn't be so long; especially as to obscure index)
*Some paragraph have no ]

Revision as of 01:41, 6 February 2008

  • Improve the Embargo section
  • Get a peer review
  • Remove material well represented elsewhere - ie. much of the Foreign relations material. (see Foreign relations of Cuba)
  • Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been comandante? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things?
  • "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized

* '''Fix discrepancy of Fidel Castro's letter to FDR. He was born in Aug 1926 but the letter is dated Nov 1940, which means he was 14 when he wrote it. But in the letter and the caption it says he is 12.'''

  • Shorten abstract. Move relevant material to body of article. (intro shouldn't be so long; especially as to obscure index)
  • Some paragraph have no Intro!