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Revision as of 22:38, 16 March 2008
- The article needs to be reedited. There are many grammatical errors and grammatically
awkward sentences. In some sections (such as ‘History',) it is obvious the article was written by a nonnative English speaker. It almost sounds like a translation.
- Shorten article
- Confirm all image copyrights and licensing
- Complete references
- Continue to police for unsourced images