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| *The article needs to be reedited. There are many grammatical errors and grammatically | *The article needs to be reedited. There are many grammatical errors and grammatically awkward sentences. In some sections (such as ‘History',) it is obvious the article was written by a nonnative English speaker. It almost sounds like a translation. | ||
| awkward sentences. In some sections (such as ‘History',) it is obvious the article was written by a nonnative English speaker. It almost sounds like a translation. | |||
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| *Confirm all image copyrights and licensing | *Confirm all image copyrights and licensing | ||
Revision as of 23:13, 22 March 2008
- The article needs to be reedited. There are many grammatical errors and grammatically awkward sentences. In some sections (such as ‘History',) it is obvious the article was written by a nonnative English speaker. It almost sounds like a translation.
- Shorten article
- Confirm all image copyrights and licensing
- Complete references
- Continue to police for unsourced images