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== Social democrats, socialists and communists as victims == | |||
I think this aspect of the holocaust is largely ignored in this article, much like it has been largely ignored in most western litterature on the subject. This is imo systemic bias (understandable, considering the atrocities of the Soviet, but still bias), and should be corrected. | |||
Acording to the short line under "others", it says that 100,000 "communists" (i suppose other political groups are included, but how can I know?) were killed, yet this figure isn't explained (or given source), and the whole political aspect of holocaust is woefully understated considering this relatively high death count. All that is said on the matter is that there had "been attempts at sterilising them using x-rays", again without sources or further explanations. The 100,000 isn't even counted in the Death toll section, but 2,000 Jehovah's Witnesses are (thus it can't be because the number is insignificant). | |||
Someone, please expand on the subject, until it has been corrected the article is slightly POV. | |||
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Social democrats, socialists and communists as victims
I think this aspect of the holocaust is largely ignored in this article, much like it has been largely ignored in most western litterature on the subject. This is imo systemic bias (understandable, considering the atrocities of the Soviet, but still bias), and should be corrected. Acording to the short line under "others", it says that 100,000 "communists" (i suppose other political groups are included, but how can I know?) were killed, yet this figure isn't explained (or given source), and the whole political aspect of holocaust is woefully understated considering this relatively high death count. All that is said on the matter is that there had "been attempts at sterilising them using x-rays", again without sources or further explanations. The 100,000 isn't even counted in the Death toll section, but 2,000 Jehovah's Witnesses are (thus it can't be because the number is insignificant). Someone, please expand on the subject, until it has been corrected the article is slightly POV.
iw:Arabic?
It seems there is no article on the subject in Arabic WP. Hmm. ←Humus sapiens←ну? 10:24, 7 October 2005 (UTC)
- Maybe you should write it. That's the WP way, no? Ronabop 13:18, 7 October 2005 (UTC)
- There is no article on the Armenian Genocide either, and Arabic WP is much smaller than Hebrew (and much much smaller than English) WP. Thanks for pointing it out though, I'll put that on my list of things to do. But your "hmm" comment is strange, since you seem to be implying purposeful evasion. Here is an excerpt from the Arabic Israel article:
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بعد المحرقة التي تعرض لها الشعب اليهودي في اوروبا والتي ادت الى ابادة ما يتجاوز عن
٦ مليون من ابنائه وتدمير منازلهم واطاراتهم الاجتماعية وفقد ما امتلكوا من المال والثروة والبيوت بدأ لاجِئ المحرقة اليهود يبحثون عن مكان للاقامة حيث لم ترد اية دولة استيعابهم رغما عن وضعهمالانساني الخطير ولم وضع امامهم اي بديل سوى الهجرة الى ارض فلسطين.
Translation: After the Holocaust that befell the Jewish people in Europe, and that led to the extermination of over 6 million of them, the destruction of their homes and their social fabric, and the loss of their fortunes and properties, refugees of the Holocaust looked for a place to live after no other country would accept them despite their desperate humanitarian situation, and they had no choice but emigrate to Palestine.
- The article is available in German and other European languages, and that is more important than (but doesn't excuse the absence of) an Arabic version. Ramallite 13:47, 7 October 2005 (UTC)
Repeated vandalism by 83.131.*
An anonymous editor or editors continues, once every day or so, to replace the paragraph on Croatian participation in the Holocaust with the same incorrect (and grammatically wrong) information* (example). The user stopped responding to my queries on the Talk page above, where I attempted to explain both why the information is wrong and suggests paths for moving forward. I am not sure the proper resolution path for this, especially as the editor continues to come in from many IP addresses. Does anyone have any suggestions? --Goodoldpolonius2 18:45, 19 October 2005 (UTC)
- Have you already tried solutions suggest at Misplaced Pages:Vandalism#Dealing_with_vandalism? Personally contacting an admin about this might also help. zerofoks 19:36, 19 October 2005 (UTC)
Freemasons as Holocaust victims?
The introductory definition states that
The Holocaust is the name applied to the systematic state-sponsored persecution and genocide of various ethnic, religious and political groups during World War II by Nazi Germany and its collaborators.
(emphasis added)
I removed the (poorly edited) note on The_Holocaust#Victims stating that Freemasons were particular victims of the Holocaust.
My reasons are as follows:
- I believe the introductory definition makes it clear that actual victims of the actual Holocaust are those who were targets in the genocide, not simply all victims of nazi propaganda and persecution. The article on genocide clearly defines the act as "systematic killing of substantial numbers of people on the basis of ethnicity, religion, political opinion, social status or other particularity." (emphasis added). Whether "substantial number" is a term that can objectively be applied to other groups listed in The_Holocaust#Victims (such as Africans) is probably also a controversial issue. I scanned the talk archives for related discussions and it seems the usage and difference of the terms "target" and "victim" has been problematic, and no conclusion has been come to. However, it is my opinon that all those listed in The_Holocaust#Victims should also be able to be identified as targets (for genocide) in the nazi plans.
- The link provided by User:Grazon in this revision (deleted by me and later reinstated in some unrelated revert action, I believe) does only list examples of nazi propaganda and vague references to persecution against Freemasons. There are no mentionings of actual nazi plans to single out Freemasons for the systematic killing in the genocide.
If you disagree with my decision, please discuss this matter here first before reverting the section again. zerofoks 19:33, 19 October 2005 (UTC)
I have a new source which states
"In 1934, Leo Muffelmann, the Grand Master and founder of the Symbolic Grand Lodge of Germany, died as a direct result of his incarceration in a concentration camp." http://bessel.org/naziartl.htm
He was not the only Mason sent to a camp
grazon 22:01, 23 October 2005 (UTC)
- No, I am afraid the death of one (!) high-ranking member of an organization generally not approved by the nazis won't do. You could argue that one member might be enough as long as he is targeted because of his group membership but then the question is why there aren't more widespread persecution of Freemasons in the Holocaust. It is more likely, as the facts make it seem, that this man was singeled out for being in a position of power if anything. If there is factual record of a general, widespread or at least planned act of genocide against Freemasons, please present it.
- Also, please sign your contributions with 4 tildes (~~~~) on talk pages as explained here: Misplaced Pages:Sign_your_posts_on_talk_pages --zerofoks 22:24, 23 October 2005 (UTC)
- 1) he was not the only Mason sent to the camps
- 2) I am signing my posts can you see this? grazon 22:29, 23 October 2005 (UTC)
grazon 22:29, 23 October 2005 (UTC)
VfD
Are we really supposed to take this VfD seriously? Should we wait until it failed or remove the note immediately? Str1977 22:55, 24 October 2005 (UTC)
- I added a speedy deletion tag to the linked page, hopefully an admin will delete it. Ramallite 23:10, 24 October 2005 (UTC)
- We can remove the note immediately, the Misplaced Pages:Guide to deletion says: Nominations that are clearly vandalism may be discarded. --Goodoldpolonius2 00:03, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
Syntax leap
I deleted the following clause (in bold), which was part of the reverted deletions:
- (These views are not accepted as credible by mainstream historians) and disregard a substantial historical record on the Holocaust.
The author of this clause should specify what he meant by that. Currently the connection to the rest of the text is unclear.
Str1977 19:13, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
- I am not sure what the original intent was, but added substitute text, and a source, backing up the lack of credibility. --Goodoldpolonius2 23:22, 25 October 2005 (UTC)
Ok by me, Polonius, even if it is not what the author intended. If he cares, he may comment. If he doesn't, I don't care either. Thanks. Str1977 16:49, 26 October 2005 (UTC)
I feal this article could be improved a lot not really with facts. --☺Adam1213☺ Talk+|WWW 07:59, 31 October 2005 (UTC)
Shoah
I inserted Shoah in the intro and then thought better of it as the note in etymology appears as a first reference. Is "became the standard Hebrew term for the Holocaust" accurate or is it better to say "...for the Jewish aspect/component/etc. of the Holocaust"? Marskell 19:48, 2 November 2005 (UTC)
Bored of the Holocaust?
I dont know about you guys, but what would you say to a Holocaust in the media section refering to over-exposure compared to any other event in human history? This much is undeniable, even for Westerners, yes?
I mean, every year you have a Holocaust Memorial Day. In Western Europe and the US. Let me tell you something. Here in China we don't care about this thing. That is part of your history, not ours. That's right, 1.2 billion people who don't care about the holocaust. Do you think the 1 billion odd people in India care about the holocaust or even know about it? What about the 800 million people in Indonesia? Or the 1 billion odd people in South America? The hundreds of millions of people in Africa? None of these people attatch such reverence to this one event yet you Westerners do. It is laughable. Ignore the crimes of all the world as evidenced by Africa and try to artificially stamp the Holocaust into history so it will never be forgotten.
Well let me tell you one last thing: most of the world never cared in the first place. And eventually, your grandchildren will not care either. It is the way of the world. Eventually, all things are forgotten no matter how many films the Jewish movie moguls make on the subject.
So: a section about media over-exposure of the Holocaust, and also, to perhaps get some perspective on this: how the Holocaust is viewed outside of Western countries. Or does that lie outside your comfort zone? — Preceding unsigned comment added by 86.138.213.215 (talk • contribs)
- The way to eliminate systemic bias is to improve other articles not dis-improve this one. If you want a Holocaust viewpoints outside of the west it shouldn't consist of something idiotic like "most of the world never cared in the first place." Nor, I think, is this place for a tirade about Jewish movie moguls.
- Indonesia has 200+ million people, incidentally. Marskell 16:11, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
- And South America some 350 million people. It's interesting to know that a person so concerned about history is so inaccurate about present-day reality. Especially the blatantly racist vandals. --jpgordon∇∆∇∆ 17:26, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
- Ignore the troll -- he was doing this to a dozen articles on every subject, and has apparently already been blocked. --Goodoldpolonius2 17:37, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
- To clarify, 86.138.213.215 was responsible for the above vandalism. Superm401 | Talk 18:10, 6 November 2005 (UTC)
Hitler's Two Incompatible Aims
Sebastian Haffner's The Meaning Of Hitler(Wiedenfeld and Nicolson) ISBN 0297775723 of 1979 p143 concludes :
- In short, in December 1941 , within a few days , Hitler made his final choice between the two incompatible aims which he had pursued from the outset - German domination of the world and the extermination of the Jews . He abandoned the former as unattainable and entirely concentrated on the latter. (on 30 November it had still been a a few days too early for that.) Moreover he now accepted Germany's total defeat with all the possible consequences as the price of being able to carry out at last the extermination of the Jews throughout Europe , a plan which had long made his mouth water .
I believe I had included a very brief reference to Haffner's thesis in the Hitler article, but it is essential as understanding here ...This thesis of Haffner's developes from German defeat at the Battle of Stalingrad , which was the turning of the tide . Anyway , I will tell editors that there was a continuous and clear reference by Nazi street gangs throughout Germany from at least 1931, of literally "perish the Jew" . It is artificial to consider the origin of the Holocaust from a verbal order in 1942 , as it is artificial to ignore the reality of a purely verbal order . My pennyworth aside is that Hitler learned some circumspection in his dealings from powers that existed and thrived upon purely verbal orders . However , Haffner explains:
- To Hitler , during the last three and a half years of war , the war had become a kind of race which he was still hoping to win . Who would reach his goal sooner, Hitler with the extermination of the Jews or the Allies with their military overthrow of Germany .
EffK 23:08, 11 November 2005 (UTC)
- User note: User:EffK is also User:Flamekeeper
I do not understand the quoted paragraph to be arguing that the origina of the Holocaust lay in a verbal command in 1942, or a realization in 1941 — only that after a certain point in WWII, the war against the Jews came to take priority over the war against everyone else; this does not mean that the war against the Jews didn't exist earlier, indeed, it assumes it was already going on. Lucy Dawidowitz I believe makes a similar argument. Slrubenstein | Talk 23:17, 11 November 2005 (UTC)
- I must say, I'm a little confused myself. Does this article assert the "final solution" became the main war aim only in 1941 or 1942? I don't think so, so I'm not sure what the criticism is. And I'd really dispute any author suggesting the Nazis were only doing X in Y year based on Z motivation. Neat solutions are neat, but inter-war German history is not. Marskell 23:29, 11 November 2005 (UTC)
You may dispute any author suggesting the Nazis were only doing X in Y year based on Z motivation. Frankly, I might too. Alas, it is entirely irrelevant that you or I would dispute this, because our own views don't count (see Misplaced Pages:No original research. If there are reputable published scholars who make such claims (that you or I would dispute) their views, and their reasons/evidence, ought to be included in this article along with a proper citation. And if there are reputable published scholars who make different claims (including the claim that inter-war German history is more complicated), then those claims should be included, properly sourced too. The article should not "assert" any one claim or argument; it ought to provide an account of various verifiable respected (even if contentious, disputed, or rejected) scholarly views, along with proper citation. Slrubenstein | Talk 23:42, 11 November 2005 (UTC)
The verbal is an aside that I contribute . Is it not the case that we are lacking direct Hitlerian order towards impementation of the genocide at the Wannsee moment, or any other ? Slrubenstein I commend .EffK 08:06, 12 November 2005 (UTC)
- Now I'm more confused: Slrubenstein, I was agreeing with you. Of course, we should not 'assert' any one claim or argument. Marskell 10:08, 12 November 2005 (UTC)