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How do I get user: James W. von Brunn on Misplaced Pages website. Also I have a letter from Professor Revilo Oliver pertaining to Willis Carto that I want to attach. ??????? How do I get user: James W. von Brunn on Misplaced Pages website. Also I have a letter from Professor Revilo Oliver pertaining to Willis Carto that I want to attach. ???????
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== ] ==

The article on ] contains a subsection for ], and it is a general definition. In condensed-matter physics, the term ''composite fermion'' has a definite meaning unlike what is given on the fermion page. I created a ] in my user space. I have also created a ] on an important physicist in the subject.

Would it be appropriate to have a disambiguation notice for the two definitions? I would appreciate any feedback on these articles, and any suggestions for them to qualify for full articles.

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user :James W. von Brunn

How do I get user: James W. von Brunn on Misplaced Pages website. Also I have a letter from Professor Revilo Oliver pertaining to Willis Carto that I want to attach. ??????? James von Brunn (talk) 22:18, 10 May 2009 (UTC)

Pentecostalism

I and a few other editors have substantially improved the article from the doctrinal point of view. However, the history sections are lacking and we haven't done much work there. I would like a review to give us a different perspective on what we should add, expand, remove, and/or rearrange. Thanks. Ltwin (talk) 04:27, 17 May 2009 (UTC)

Adyar

I made some substantial edits to the page Adyar against the three problem areas - references, wikification, peacocking. I think I've kinda taken care of these. Can I get some feedback before I remove the tags? -SpacemanSpiff (talk) 02:02, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

New Entry for Semantic Designs

http://en.wikipedia.org/User:Clinternet/Add_new_entry

Any assistance on this post would be greatly appreciated. I cannot yet upload an image so the logo piece does not work. I am also confused on how to create the Topic to indicate the company.

thanks, CH —Preceding unsigned comment added by Clinternet (talkcontribs) 22:36, 18 May 2009 (UTC)

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