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:::*Sure, if the Tucker book is trustworthy, which it is. He lists where he got the idea, and you patch the reference through. In certain reference styles, you say something like "as cited in...", but that instruction does not appear anywhere in Misplaced Pages. So just go for it. <font face="Cambria">] (])</font> 01:58, 21 April 2010 (UTC) | :::*Sure, if the Tucker book is trustworthy, which it is. He lists where he got the idea, and you patch the reference through. In certain reference styles, you say something like "as cited in...", but that instruction does not appear anywhere in Misplaced Pages. So just go for it. <font face="Cambria">] (])</font> 01:58, 21 April 2010 (UTC) | ||
::::*Eh, idea, I guess. I'll take a look. ] (]) 06:36, 21 April 2010 (UTC) |
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Further Details Needed on Reason for Shift to Judicial Body
"academics attribute its shift to an almost entirely judicial body to this increase." In my opinion that statement essentially doesn't make sense as-is. Further details are needed to clarify. In essence the statement says, "They suddenly got really big, therefore they became a judicial body." That's not an explanation of any causal relationship, it's simply a statement that two things happened at the same time. It may SEEM to be common sense, but in my opinion it's not. I feel that further details should be supplied which elaborate on the causal connection between an increase in the size of the administrative body, and it's "shift" to a more "judicial" function. Otherwise one is left confused as to what the real causes were. A great place to start might be to supply information about who specifically made this decision, if known - perhaps a King or Queen or the head of Chancery itself? How *quickly* did this shift happen? etc. —Preceding unsigned comment added by 69.127.200.152 (talk) 04:38, 12 February 2010 (UTC)
Abolition of Arkansas chancery courts
Arkansas abolished its separate chancery courts on July 1, 2001, when Arkansas Constitution, Amendment 80 , which reorganized the state judicial system, took effect. The former Chancery Courts were merged into the Circuit Courts, which heard criminal cases and actions at law pre-Amendment 80. Though some divisions of the post-Amendment 80 Circuit Courts mirror the old Chancery Courts' jurisdictions (mainly the domestic relations division, which ended up with most of the Chancery Courts' caseload), all ordinary civil actions are now heard in the civil division of Circuit Court whether they request legal or equitable relief, as in nearly all the other states. --RBBrittain 04:59, 21 August 2006 (UTC)
GA Review
- This review is transcluded from Talk:Court of Chancery/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: —Charles Edward 23:26, 27 January 2010 (UTC)
Very good overall. Just a few questions:
- The grammar of this sentence is not quite right. I am not sure if you are missing a word, or have something in the wrong tense: "Previously, under Henry VI, it had been the practice that plaintiffs in the common law courts could pursue cases not execute judgments given by the common law judges if the Lord Chancellor felt their claim was "against conscience"."
- I am unfamiliar with the word "recognizances", could that be a mispelling - or is it a legal term?
- I think there should references after these statements:
- "Coke and the other judges overruled this while Ellesmere was ill, taking it as an opportunity to completely overthrow the Lord Chancellor's jurisdiction, and Ellesmere appealed to the Monarch, who referred the matter to the Attorney General for the Prince of Wales and Francis Bacon, the Attorney General for England and Wales."
- "This bold move is seen as helping Coke lose his position as a judge, and until the dissolution of the court it was able to overrule judgments issued in the common law courts."
- "An effect of the English Civil War and resulting Commonwealth of England, particularly the "liberal" values and feelings it stirred up, was the continuous modernisation and improvement of the common law courts, something that reduced the interference of the Lord Chancellor in common law matters, except in areas where they had wildly divergent principles and law"
- "A major reform to the Court happened soon after the restoration, with the introduction of a right of appeal to the House of Lords from the Chancery. Prior to this there had been no records of appeals to the Lords, and a committee had concluded that there was no precedent to give the Lords jurisdiction over equity matters, except when problems and cases were sent directly to Parliament (as occasionally had been the case)"
- "Under Lord Eldon, the Court procedure was further reformed with a pair of orders published in 1741 and 1747, which mandated that a claimant who brought his case to court and had it dismissed immediately should pay full costs to the other side, rather than the 40s previously paid, and that parties filing bills of review should pay £50 for the privilege."
- "The 1830s saw a reduction in the "old corruption" that had long plagued the court, first through the Chancery Sinecures Act 1832 and then through the Chancery Regulation Act 1833."
- "The 1833 Act changed the appointments system so that Masters in Chancery would henceforth be appointed by The Crown, not by the Lord Chancellor, and that they would be paid wages. Through the abolition of sinecures, taking into account the wages and pension, this saved the Court £21,670 a year"
- "When the Court was a part of the curia regis, the Officers were fluid; it could include Doctors of Civil Law, members of the curia and "those who ought to be summoned". As the members of the curia ceased to sit as Officers, however, the composition of the court became more solid."
- Minor MOS issues:
- I think in the heading "Officers of the Court", "court" should not be capitalized, as it is not a proper noun
- Same with "Other Officers of the Court", I think "officers" and "court" should not be capitalized.
- I made a few minor fixes myself.
- Images:
- File:The Court of Chancery during the reign of George I by Benjamin Ferrers.jpg - this appears to not be public domain in the UK, the presumably main audience for the article. It won't stop this article from passing this review, but you may want to consider finding a PD images.
- File:Gal nations edward i.jpg - the source of this images is not stated on the image page. Is this a photo taken at the site, from a book, a website? Where did the uploader get it from?
- File:Court of Chancery edited.jpg - no source or description is given for this image
- There are no alt descriptions for any of the images. You should add one for each.
Marvelously written, well referenced. In my opinion this article is of near FA quality. —Charles Edward 23:26, 27 January 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks kindly! Pretty good for a single draft, ehh? :P. In regards to the above; "recognizances" are these, the Court (since it's Court of Chancery, and is referred to throughout the article as the Court to distinguish it from the CEC, CCP, CKB et al) is simply standardised, as is "Officers"; all the references capitalise it, for example, since it was an official group of positions; rather than referring to officers of the court, it's referring to Officers of the Court (of Chancery), a formal body. Ironholds (talk) 23:43, 27 January 2010 (UTC)
- I wish I could do a first draft like that! :P Takes me a month to get a article looking half decent! Looks like you resolved my questions, except the image ones. Those will definitely be asked for in a thorough FA review. I am passing the article now. Great job! Keep up the good work. —Charles Edward 00:03, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
Merge "Court of Equity?"
there's a barely-more-than-stub article on "Court of Equity."
Should that be converted into a redirect to this very lovely article? —Preceding unsigned comment added by Boundlessly (talk • contribs) 20:12, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
- I don't think so - that article, a stub though it is, is about courts of equity generally. This article is about a specific court of equity viz the Court of Chancery. – ukexpat (talk) 21:03, 28 January 2010 (UTC)
- Agreed. This is simply the most important of the historical courts; it is by no means the only one. Ironholds (talk) 06:14, 29 January 2010 (UTC)
Good work!
I've just seen this, and it looks good, a lot of effort. Wikidea 12:00, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- Thank you kindly. Apparently it was shown to Sir John Baker, and he called it "impressive". Ironholds (talk) 19:05, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- The next time I e-mail my old Oxford law tutor, Jeffrey Hackney, I will send the link to him too. – ukexpat (talk) 19:24, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- Cambridge and now Oxford? I've got the whole deck! Mind asking him for a legal history MPhil position? :P. Ironholds (talk) 19:28, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
- The next time I e-mail my old Oxford law tutor, Jeffrey Hackney, I will send the link to him too. – ukexpat (talk) 19:24, 25 March 2010 (UTC)
"Academics"
In a few places in the text, there is language along the lines "academics felt that" or "according to many academics". This language is weaselly, and stylistically uneven. Mentioning the names of the academics involved, especially if the mention of their names doesn't promote understanding of the material, seems to me to just add to the length of the text. For example, mention is made of a Margaret Avery and a Nicholas Pronay making claims, but no citations exist to tell us when or where they made these claims. This is most likely because their names were mentioned in another source, and were copied into Misplaced Pages without being properly researched. To what end are the names Margaret Avery and Nicholas Pronay mentioned? None that I can discover. So I'm going to take a stab at editing, let me know what you think. Abductive (reasoning) 15:02, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- It is not a weasel word; it is in fact the opposite, because it provides attribution of the comments. Your removal of the names was weaselly.
- Please WP:AGF. I have written a plethora of Good and Featured articles; I don't think it's much to ask you not to assume that I don't know how to do basic research.
- Both are fairly clearly cited to Tucker, P. (2000). "The Early History of the Court of Chancery: A Comparative Study". English Historical Review (Oxford University Press) 115 (463) - for future reference, an inline citation after the commentary normally indicates that's where the commentary came from. Just FYI.
- If you had done some basic googling, you would have discovered that Nicholas Pronay, for example, is a distinguished Emeritus Professor of history. I have been meaning to write articles on the two for quite a while, hence the redlinks; my apologies that I haven't. Both are clearly attributed as academics and named; that is the opposite of weasel words. Ironholds (talk) 15:45, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- I don't think that the article is improved by mentioning these academics inline. Articles in encyclopedias aren't written the same way as articles in the scholarly literature, because they are supposed to summarize. Per the WP:Make technical articles understandable guideline, editors must strive to be "understandable to the widest possible audience". Is the reader supposed to be an expert in the history of ideas? Are Avery and Pronay so influential as to have changed the world's understanding of the Court of Chancery? If yes, then they deserve to be cited on their own, not within Tucker's citation. If no, then trimming their names is consistent with WP:Summary style. Can you demonstrate that Avery and Pronay aren't primary sources in this context? (See WP:PSTS.) It is Tucker that is the secondary source; s/he is synthesizing earlier material. Abductive (reasoning) 16:46, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- In WP:Guide to writing better articles#Avoid peacock and weasel terms, it gives examples of weaselly verbiage. One example is "Critics say that...". How is this different from "Academics say that..."? As written, the text gave the impression that there was debate about the timing of the growth of the caseload. Is that really the situation? And is this (possible) debate important? That's what I meant by weaselly. Abductive (reasoning) 16:46, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- I did not accuse you of not knowing how to do basic research. But it is possible that you aren't seeing the forest for the trees; you wrote it like a scholarly essay, because you had been reading scholarly material. But scholars are directing their work at other scholars, who are interested in the people behind the ideas since it provides them with information about the validity of their statements. In an encyclopedia, such naming of people simply comes off as WP:JARGON because the reader has no such context. Abductive (reasoning) 16:46, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- It is not different. Saying "Academics say.." "Critics say.." is weaselly because it doesn't show if it's a majority view, or fringe, or who these hypothetical academics are. "Academics such as X and Y" or "Academics say X. Joe Bloggs, Professor of History at..." is perfectly acceptable because it identifies precisely who is making these statements and hypotheses.
- When you say " This is most likely because their names were mentioned in another source, and were copied into Misplaced Pages without being properly researched.", you accuse me of not knowing how to properly research. There is context; Academic X and Academic Y. Surprise - they're academics! Ironholds (talk) 18:38, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- I have to agree with Ironholds here. The names are better attributed inline. This situation is different from "Critics say"; the purpose of that part of the MOS guideline goes hand in hand with avoiding criticism section, according to WP:Controversy. The point of the policy is to avoid vaguely referring "some people said", but to be clear and say "John Doe said". —Charles Edward 18:45, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Indeed, which is what I think I've done. As you say, the point of the policy is to avoid "some bloke said" and, where possible, replace it with "Mr Bloggs, an expert on the subject, said" or remove it entirely. Ironholds (talk) 18:47, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- But why is it important to identify precisely the people behind this (possible) debate? What is your evidence that it is controversial, or that this controversy needs to be in a summary? The bloke who is saying the synthetic statement is Tucker. I don't think you have sufficiently addressed my points above, nor made an effort to see my point of view. Let's see if anybody else has an opinion. Abductive (reasoning) 18:49, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- It is not a controversy; it is simply providing attribution. Turner did not do the research; he is in turn citing somebody. Saying that Turner maintains X, that would be inappropriate. Where a study or piece of research has been done to individuals, attributing that research to others is incorrect. Ironholds (talk) 18:53, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- So then the best thing to do would be to read what they said directly, paraphrase it, and cite them directly using the standard referencing formats (in other words, the way Tucker is cited.) Abductive (reasoning) 19:06, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Except I don't have access to their original articles. The options are therefore what I've done, or what you are suggesting, which would be to improperly attribute work. We'd be saying "Turner says X", when he doesn't. Ironholds (talk) 19:13, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Well, then it can't be Verified. And there is a guideline out there that says reference styles must be consistent within an article. What I suggest is using a word other than "says", such as Tucker "showed" or "established" or "examined". Abductive (reasoning) 19:28, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Except I don't have access to their original articles. The options are therefore what I've done, or what you are suggesting, which would be to improperly attribute work. We'd be saying "Turner says X", when he doesn't. Ironholds (talk) 19:13, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- So then the best thing to do would be to read what they said directly, paraphrase it, and cite them directly using the standard referencing formats (in other words, the way Tucker is cited.) Abductive (reasoning) 19:06, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- It is not a controversy; it is simply providing attribution. Turner did not do the research; he is in turn citing somebody. Saying that Turner maintains X, that would be inappropriate. Where a study or piece of research has been done to individuals, attributing that research to others is incorrect. Ironholds (talk) 18:53, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- But why is it important to identify precisely the people behind this (possible) debate? What is your evidence that it is controversial, or that this controversy needs to be in a summary? The bloke who is saying the synthetic statement is Tucker. I don't think you have sufficiently addressed my points above, nor made an effort to see my point of view. Let's see if anybody else has an opinion. Abductive (reasoning) 18:49, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Indeed, which is what I think I've done. As you say, the point of the policy is to avoid "some bloke said" and, where possible, replace it with "Mr Bloggs, an expert on the subject, said" or remove it entirely. Ironholds (talk) 18:47, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Except he didn't "show" it, because that implies he did work on it. He didn't establish it, because that definitely established he did work on it. He didn't examin it, because that implied he considered it in more than a passing way, which he didn't. The language you've provided gives exactly the impression I'm criticising - that Tucker did the work. Ironholds (talk) 19:31, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Okay, so then he had so little to do with it that the others need credit. But do they need to be named inline? I say no. If you have Tucker's book, you are allowed to use his Literature Cited section to reconstruct the appropriate refs and place them in the article in a way consistent with all the other refs--as footnotes. Abductive (reasoning) 19:50, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- So it's appropriate to reference something to a reference used in a reference? Ironholds (talk) 21:15, 20 April 2010 (UTC)
- Sure, if the Tucker book is trustworthy, which it is. He lists where he got the idea, and you patch the reference through. In certain reference styles, you say something like "as cited in...", but that instruction does not appear anywhere in Misplaced Pages. So just go for it. Abductive (reasoning) 01:58, 21 April 2010 (UTC)
- Eh, idea, I guess. I'll take a look. Ironholds (talk) 06:36, 21 April 2010 (UTC)