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I have reverted the deletion of over half of the Media section. Again I agree that this section can be made more concise and can lose one of its photos, but these deletions were - although not as extreme as the prior ones to the Religion section - too great in quantity, and also removed certain content which in my view should be retained. The bulk removal of long-standing content in this way needs to be properly discussed. ] (]) 11:37, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | I have reverted the deletion of over half of the Media section. Again I agree that this section can be made more concise and can lose one of its photos, but these deletions were - although not as extreme as the prior ones to the Religion section - too great in quantity, and also removed certain content which in my view should be retained. The bulk removal of long-standing content in this way needs to be properly discussed. ] (]) 11:37, 1 June 2011 (UTC) | ||
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A1: Reliable sources support the view that the United Kingdom is a single country. This view is shared with other major reputable encyclopedias. There has been a long-standing consensus to describe the UK in this way.
A2: See the article entitled "Terminology of the British Isles". Great Britain is the name of the largest island that the UK encompasses, and is not generally used in source material as the name of the country. Indeed, Britain 2001, the "official reference book" of the United Kingdom produced by the Office for National Statistics for "British diplomatic posts" says in its foreword:
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Current copy editing
I am very concerned about the present copy editing of this article, which appears to me to be going well beyond mere copy editing to changing the emphasis in the text. There are also many 'correct' ways of writing things, and a number of the changes appear to me to have actually made the text read worse. To give a few examples of the former (I should add that I was not responsible for any of the original text in question, and so am in no way trying to preserve my own work):
- Existing: 'The United Kingdom was one of the three main Allies of World War II. Following the defeat of its European allies in the first year of the war, the United Kingdom continued the fight against Germany, which took form in these years with the Battle of Britain.'
- New: 'The United Kingdom was one of the three main Allies of World War II. Following the defeat of its European allies in the first year of the war, the United Kingdom continued to fight the Axis Powers in the Battle of Britain. '
- Existing: ' As a result of a shortage of workers, initial postwar policy was to bring in workers from Germany, Poland and throughout Europe. '
- New: 'To offset a shortage of workers, the UK initially imported workers from throughout Western Europe.'
- Existing: 'Although the new postwar limits of Britain's political role were confirmed by the Suez Crisis of 1956, the international spread of the English language meant the continuing influence of its literature and culture, while from the 1960s its popular culture also found influence abroad.'
- New: 'Although the Suez Crisis of 1956 confirmed Britain's reduced status, the rapid spread of the English language sustained the influence of traditional British literature and culture, while from the 1960s The Beatles and others carried its popular culture around the world'
- Exisiting: 'Beside Russia, France and (after 1917) the USA, the British were one of the major powers opposing Germany and its allies in World War I (1914–18).'
- New: 'The UK joined Russia, France and the United States as the major powers opposing the Central Powers in World War I (1914–18).'
If this is what 'copy-editing' means then I am strongly against an article as sensitive as this one, where text has been developed over a long period through a process of considerable discussion and development, being subjected to such a process. At a minimum I feel that the work should be done only on one section at a time, so that it can be more easily reverted and discussed as necessary.Rangoon11 (talk) 09:20, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- How does the GCE work, does the community have a choice about what articles get selected and how do we register dissidence? I don't see much wrong with some of the above, but I do agree there are problems. Why for example did the Beatles suddenly get included? And the "shortage of workers" sentence is not a revision but a change and indeed is incorrect. I suppose one point is that we can just go in and change this when finished but if so it's a bit of a waste of time. Jamesinderbyshire (talk) 10:21, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- If there's a copyedit someone disagrees with, they are perfectly in their right to revert it, as long as they provide an edit summary explaining of course. Obviously a manual revert, rather than a blanket one, would be best. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 10:39, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- I suppose the offputting thing is the sentence in the GCE tag that says "as a courtesy, please do not edit this page while this message is displayed" - maybe this tag should first be removed and a message left with the Guild. I've tried asking one of the main recent editors about it on their talk page but no response yet. Jamesinderbyshire (talk) 10:55, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think it's the guild that should be contacted, but rather the individual editor. If no edits occur for an hour or so, I believe that the tag can then be removed. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 11:25, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- I was the editor who requested the copy edit from the GOCE, as they have done well with other articles I have written recently. I felt they would be able to help with the push to improve this article, but, as has been highlighted, some of the meaning of sentences has been changed to the detriment of the article. I think for now, however, that we should watch how things pan out, and make the changes back to the original where they are due - particuarly with the sentences that have been highlighted here. I'd also like to say sorry if my request has caused any disruption, as that was the least of my intentions. Harrison49 (talk) 11:37, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- Don't think an apology for the request is needed Harrison49, we're just a bit puzzled by the process - do you know why meanings are being altered, is that considered a valid part of copyediting sometimes? Or is it just a mistaken idea of what the process entails? Jamesinderbyshire (talk) 11:45, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- It is possible that not everyone will be aware what the changes do to the emphasis of the sentences to which Rangoon11 is pointing, so a brief summary: Britain didn't just fight the Axis in the Battle of Britain, but elsewhere too; we have gone from all of Europe, specifically including Poland, to just Western Europe; the Beatles and other (bands?) really not the only means of spreading culture; Britain joining the USA as an opponent of the Central Powers in WWI implies that the US were already a ally, but they were of course the last major ally to join. I am assuming there is no intent to change meaning here, but this is really does make quite a difference to the sense of these passages. I assume that the copy editor is not really familiar with the topic, but if so it would be fine if they were just careful not to avoid changing the meaning of sentences.--SabreBD (talk) 11:50, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- Copyediting works to ensure prose is correct and consistent throughout an article, and that it follows the correct style and layout. The changes made to this article seem to be a mistake, as they have actually in some cases rewritten history. I think it is best to stop the copy edit for now, and I will contact the editor involved to ask this. Harrison49 (talk) 12:06, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- Ok thanks Harrison49. Again, no objection to copyediting as such.--SabreBD (talk) 12:30, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
Since six hours have elapsed with no further edits, I have removed the template asking people to refrain from editing while the GOCE process was under way. I would support Rangoon11 if he/she were now to revert the specific changes he/she has indicated above. On the wider issue, I note from the talk page of the GOCE editor who has made these changes that this is not the first time other editors have raised with him/her the issue of (no doubt inadvertently and in good faith) subtly altering meanings. -- Alarics (talk) 12:41, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- I am the editor in question. My intentions were good, but the results were sloppy. I apologize for the disruption and appreciate the civility of your responses. I desist... Lfstevens (talk) 16:12, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- No one doubts your good intentions and I for one appreciate the grace of your comment here, as well as your desire to improve this article. In my view with an article such as this if any copy editing is going to be done - however skilled the copy editor - it should be one section at a time, so that it is possible for the changes to be properly reviewed, discussed and reverted as necessary. I have now reverted all of the recent copy edit changes as it was simply too complicated a job to try to pick through the changes which I felt were appropriate and those which I disagreed with (either because I felt that the prior emphasis was more accurate or simply because I thought the prior wording was better or fitted the rest of the text more neatly), although in my view - I accept that these are by no means wholly objective issues - the great majority fell into the former categories. Rangoon11 (talk) 17:36, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- Hi, I am going to attempt the requested copy edit now, and will do the lead section as an example. Please let me know if you want me to continue or to stop. Regards, --Diannaa 00:11, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
- No one doubts your good intentions and I for one appreciate the grace of your comment here, as well as your desire to improve this article. In my view with an article such as this if any copy editing is going to be done - however skilled the copy editor - it should be one section at a time, so that it is possible for the changes to be properly reviewed, discussed and reverted as necessary. I have now reverted all of the recent copy edit changes as it was simply too complicated a job to try to pick through the changes which I felt were appropriate and those which I disagreed with (either because I felt that the prior emphasis was more accurate or simply because I thought the prior wording was better or fitted the rest of the text more neatly), although in my view - I accept that these are by no means wholly objective issues - the great majority fell into the former categories. Rangoon11 (talk) 17:36, 2 May 2011 (UTC)
- I am going to take this copy-edit on. There are a few steps I would like the involved editors to go through first though, in case something needs reverting and is only spotted once I have started, so that we can all agree on a starting point. Can everyone restore the edits/undo/revert to a good starting copy? I realise this may be as it was on 01-05-2011, or at some point afterwards with the good edits left in.
- Once we are all happy that the article is in a good state (Particularly sentences such as the one that seems to have at some point read that Britain was then only fighting the Axis powers in the BofB?!?) by the time I get back from work tomorrow I will then start on the copyedit.
- I appreciate this matter has dragged on but we really need to establish common ground so that I can copy-edit with the least disruption to both the article and any subsequent edits I make.
- I have added the GOCEeffort tag so that all readers and GOCE members will be aware that the article copy-edit is in once again in progress. Chaosdruid (talk) 00:15, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks Chaosdruid. I will stop. I would like to point out that there are references in the material in the note-group so you will need a more elaborate system to pull these citations out from the note group and into the reference group. Please see the material at User:Diannaa/My Templates#Ref Group Notes. An example that uses this system is Indiana class battleship. I can do this conversion when the article is not busy. --Diannaa 00:25, 10 May 2011 (UTC)
Ready to copyedit
Can some of the regular page editors, in particular those in this thread, please sign off on whether the article is ready to go (at a good copy prior to any recent problematic copy-edits)? I will leave it another 24 hours to see if anyone does change anything or signs here as no-one appears to have, so far.
- OK well, as no-one seems to have replied, I will go ahead and copyedit the page later today. Aiming to start around 14:00 UTC, though depending on when I get back from work. Chaosdruid (talk) 06:25, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
- Per my comments above, I for one would be grateful if you could just ce one section of the article at a time, to make it easier for other editors to review the changes. Rangoon11 (talk) 12:15, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
- That is how I always edit articles over 2,000 words. Normally I edit from one level 2 header to the next level two header - I would only do each separate level 3 or 4 headed section if they are rather large. Chaosdruid (talk) 23:36, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
History section - proposal for changes
In this thread, I said I would propose an expansion of the current section to cover the pre-UK period. It’s taken me so long that that thread has now been archived! Nevertheless here is a sandbox of my suggested text (plus a diff against the current version). As I said in that earlier thread, I don’t see why the UK should be any different from every other country article and cover the territory’s history prior to the state’s foundation/unification. (See, for instance, Germany, Italy, Spain, United States. ) I’ve tried to keep it very short and in fact it represents two new paragraphs (the first two) plus most of the third paragraph, but together they replace the old first paragraph. So I don’t think the net effect is to add a huge amount of text.
However, there seems to me to be some obvious omissions which should be corrected for the post-Union period, and I’ve also added those. These include, in particular, an expanded 19th century paragraph, and paragraphs on the Atlee and Thatcher “revolutions”, which I really think need to be covered. On the other hand I've taken out some text eg I think the paragraph on Northern Ireland was far to long. I’ve also added a separate etymology section as I’ve always found the way the name issue was covered previously was rather confusing. DeCausa (talk) 23:39, 14 May 2011 (UTC)
Discussion on whether to include pre-Union period
See also: Talk:United Kingdom/Archive 23 § History sectionI am happy with the Etymology and Since the Acts of Union sections. Frankly, I am unhappy about the history section going back into prehistory, because we have other articles to deal with the period before the creation of the United Kingdom. I should much rather each article dealt with its own topic, with links between them as necessary. Moonraker2 (talk) 09:04, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- But almost every Misplaced Pages country article does that. Why would the UK article be out of step with that? Random examples: Italy#History goes back before 1861; and there's also Tuscany#History and History of Tuscany. Germany#History goes back before 1871 and there's also Bavaria#History andHistory of Bavaria. It's the normal pattern, and all country articles begin in pre-history. I don't think the UK article should be unique. (talk) 09:20, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Italy and Tuscany aren't the best examples, as they existed in early forms under the Roman Empire. Germany identifies itself with the Holy Roman Empire, which was the "first Reich" in the numbering which led to the third. The UK was plainly created in 1801 (and even those in denial on that matter date it from 1707). In principle there is no harm at all in a short section headed "before the creation of the United Kingdom" or some such, but in my view its main purpose should be connectivity with other articles. The more it expands, the more the tendency for it to compete with the real article for the period. The logic of that applies to Bavaria, too, although that is another medieval entity. Moonraker2 (talk) 09:31, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Not really. Italy didn't exist as a state under the Roman empire, and HRE is pushing it since it included Italy and is famously "not an Empire, or Holy or Roman". But in any event there is a very full article on the Holy Roman Empire (in fact series of articles) which surely goes against your argument? That would mean the Germany article should start post-HRE (and I don't understand your comment about Bavaria) Spain is another example.... In fact, I think every single WP country article covers the history prior to the founding of the state and covers predecessor states, and often begins with the first human habitants. The overlap with other articles in this way is the way it is supposed to work per WP:Summary style. DeCausa (talk) 09:48, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- DeCausa is indeed correct that the United Kingdom is currently an anomaly in the way its history articles are arranged. For another country with a clear starting point, Canada, in which about half of its history section predates Canada. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 09:54, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Would I be right in thinking that one issue for consideration here might be that some might reasonably argue that articles about the histories of England, Scotland, Wales, etc., have in some way a priority over articles about the UK? There is a case that, unlike Canada for example, it is the articles about the UK's constituent countries which should hold the main content - hence, perhaps, the anomaly. Unlike elsewhere, those countries continue to exist as countries (not sovereign states, of course). Obviously I'm aware that raising this issue might open up a new can of worms (so in that sense I apologise for doing it), but it's worth taking into account. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:06, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think they still hold the"main content" - after all this is very short compared to the "consituent country" history articles. A second point is that there are "UK-wide" themes that won't necessarily be as clear in the individual country articles eg the Insular Celts, the Norman influence across the whole of the BI, the expansionism of the English monarchs accross the whole BI, the breadth of the Reformation, and the BI-nature of the "English" civil war, and which also go to explain to some extent the UK today (not just the constituent parts). DeCausa (talk) 10:12, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- There's absolutely no reason that the history sections of the UK and its constituent countries would be organised differently from Canada and its constituent provinces and territories. Whether something is called a country, a state, a sovereign state, a province, a region, or a continent, it deserves a comprehensive covering of its entire history. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 13:29, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I wasn't particularly suggesting it be organised differently. What I was suggesting was that, where there are existing lengthy articles on aspects of each of the constituent countries, there is a need to make the best use of links and "see also" headings here, rather than having lengthy sections of text which overlap unnecessarily with - and may either duplicate, or be at variance with - those in other articles. Ghmyrtle (talk) 13:42, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Agreed (with Chipmunkdavis). The History section of this article is currently far shorter than those of peer nations, and anomalous in starting at the formation of the state. I strongly support the addition of the proposed new text. Rangoon11 (talk) 13:47, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- GHMyrtle, I don't believe two and a half paragraphs are lengthy. Also, I don't think readers who want an overview of "British history" find it convenient that prior to the eighteenth century they have to look at four different articles in parallel, each of which really are lengthy. DeCausa (talk) 13:56, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not really arguing against that - I was simply pointing out (particularly to editors who may come from elsewhere in the world, or forget) that the UK is not simply "one country" in quite the same sense that other countries are. Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:00, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Country is just a word. The current discussion has nothing to do with whether a country should have a certain amount of history, and how much should be given to other countries. The discussion is about whether this history section of the United Kingdom includes the period before it was fully established. I say that it does. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 14:09, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I'm not really arguing against that - I was simply pointing out (particularly to editors who may come from elsewhere in the world, or forget) that the UK is not simply "one country" in quite the same sense that other countries are. Ghmyrtle (talk) 14:00, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- GHMyrtle, I don't believe two and a half paragraphs are lengthy. Also, I don't think readers who want an overview of "British history" find it convenient that prior to the eighteenth century they have to look at four different articles in parallel, each of which really are lengthy. DeCausa (talk) 13:56, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Agreed (with Chipmunkdavis). The History section of this article is currently far shorter than those of peer nations, and anomalous in starting at the formation of the state. I strongly support the addition of the proposed new text. Rangoon11 (talk) 13:47, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I wasn't particularly suggesting it be organised differently. What I was suggesting was that, where there are existing lengthy articles on aspects of each of the constituent countries, there is a need to make the best use of links and "see also" headings here, rather than having lengthy sections of text which overlap unnecessarily with - and may either duplicate, or be at variance with - those in other articles. Ghmyrtle (talk) 13:42, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- There's absolutely no reason that the history sections of the UK and its constituent countries would be organised differently from Canada and its constituent provinces and territories. Whether something is called a country, a state, a sovereign state, a province, a region, or a continent, it deserves a comprehensive covering of its entire history. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 13:29, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think they still hold the"main content" - after all this is very short compared to the "consituent country" history articles. A second point is that there are "UK-wide" themes that won't necessarily be as clear in the individual country articles eg the Insular Celts, the Norman influence across the whole of the BI, the expansionism of the English monarchs accross the whole BI, the breadth of the Reformation, and the BI-nature of the "English" civil war, and which also go to explain to some extent the UK today (not just the constituent parts). DeCausa (talk) 10:12, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Would I be right in thinking that one issue for consideration here might be that some might reasonably argue that articles about the histories of England, Scotland, Wales, etc., have in some way a priority over articles about the UK? There is a case that, unlike Canada for example, it is the articles about the UK's constituent countries which should hold the main content - hence, perhaps, the anomaly. Unlike elsewhere, those countries continue to exist as countries (not sovereign states, of course). Obviously I'm aware that raising this issue might open up a new can of worms (so in that sense I apologise for doing it), but it's worth taking into account. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:06, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- DeCausa is indeed correct that the United Kingdom is currently an anomaly in the way its history articles are arranged. For another country with a clear starting point, Canada, in which about half of its history section predates Canada. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 09:54, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Not really. Italy didn't exist as a state under the Roman empire, and HRE is pushing it since it included Italy and is famously "not an Empire, or Holy or Roman". But in any event there is a very full article on the Holy Roman Empire (in fact series of articles) which surely goes against your argument? That would mean the Germany article should start post-HRE (and I don't understand your comment about Bavaria) Spain is another example.... In fact, I think every single WP country article covers the history prior to the founding of the state and covers predecessor states, and often begins with the first human habitants. The overlap with other articles in this way is the way it is supposed to work per WP:Summary style. DeCausa (talk) 09:48, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
Comments on draft text
Hmmm, it's trending slightly too long for me, but I think in general it's good. The prose with the many brackets feels unwieldy in some places too, but that's minor. I like the Etymology section a lot, and perhaps it could be further adjusted to perhaps explain the term "Britain" and "Great Britain" etc slightly more since that issue keeps arising. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 07:27, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, I thought the length would get that sort of feedback. But to be honest it's comparable in length to most of the other major country articles. IMHO the section is too short given its significance, but I suspect that's a minority view. DeCausa (talk) 08:10, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I usually object much more strongly to length, and to be honest, it's longer than the majority of the highest rated country articles. On the other hand, most of the higher rated articles are of countries with less of a written history, and due to this I wouldn't object to this article's section being slightly longer. Perhaps ask ChaosDruid if they would give it a look over as well, or if we put it in we could be making some of their work pointless. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 08:26, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I really like it. It deals well with the etymology (although we can consider including something brief - if that is possible - on "Britain") and with the very long pre-history of the UK. Not surprisingly I see a few typos and consistency tidy-ups (damn we just had this copyedited) and there is my largely private beef on templates resulting in a US style of footnotes, but apart from that my only issue are the very short paragraphs towards the end, which look a bit untidy and are discouraged at FA status. I can see some of this might be resolved but its easier to edit than describe. Good work, its a big improvement over the current coverage and I hope we can post it soon.--SabreBD (talk) 08:36, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- To me, the Etymology section would be clearer if the chronology ran forward, rather than backward. The brief sentences in the History section about the legislation setting up the UK could also, more logically, be included in the previous section to reduce duplication, although I recognise that would raise the issue of whether the section contents would then go beyond simply "Etymology". Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:28, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I see your point but I think it would mix up history and the name issue, and I think it would have to result it being repeated again in the history section to make the flow of the "story" coherent. DeCausa (talk) 10:08, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Well, I'm not very sure what to do about this. Shall i do a bold edit and see waht happens? DeCausa (talk) 19:05, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
- I see your point but I think it would mix up history and the name issue, and I think it would have to result it being repeated again in the history section to make the flow of the "story" coherent. DeCausa (talk) 10:08, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- To me, the Etymology section would be clearer if the chronology ran forward, rather than backward. The brief sentences in the History section about the legislation setting up the UK could also, more logically, be included in the previous section to reduce duplication, although I recognise that would raise the issue of whether the section contents would then go beyond simply "Etymology". Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:28, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I really like it. It deals well with the etymology (although we can consider including something brief - if that is possible - on "Britain") and with the very long pre-history of the UK. Not surprisingly I see a few typos and consistency tidy-ups (damn we just had this copyedited) and there is my largely private beef on templates resulting in a US style of footnotes, but apart from that my only issue are the very short paragraphs towards the end, which look a bit untidy and are discouraged at FA status. I can see some of this might be resolved but its easier to edit than describe. Good work, its a big improvement over the current coverage and I hope we can post it soon.--SabreBD (talk) 08:36, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- I usually object much more strongly to length, and to be honest, it's longer than the majority of the highest rated country articles. On the other hand, most of the higher rated articles are of countries with less of a written history, and due to this I wouldn't object to this article's section being slightly longer. Perhaps ask ChaosDruid if they would give it a look over as well, or if we put it in we could be making some of their work pointless. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 08:26, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, I thought the length would get that sort of feedback. But to be honest it's comparable in length to most of the other major country articles. IMHO the section is too short given its significance, but I suspect that's a minority view. DeCausa (talk) 08:10, 15 May 2011 (UTC)
Copy edit May 2011
During the copyedit a few things came to light which may need attention (I have removed bulleted "vote" style headers, this detracts from the bullet points which are possible problems to fix.):
- Lead
- "It is a country in its own right and consists of four smaller countries:" - This was reverted by an editor to read:
- "It is a country in its own right and consists of four countries:" with the summary "redundant". I fail to see how the second example is more clear than the first. Including smaller IMO gives more clarity - though I would welcome the editor explaining why they think it is more clear without it :¬)
- "Smaller" is redundant because you could not have a country that consists of four larger countries. They must by definition be smaller, so there is no need to say so. -- Alarics (talk) 05:29, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- I removed "smaller" from the "four smaller countries" - I consider "smaller" to be redundant here, as any parts forming a greater whole would have to be smaller. Daicaregos (talk) 12:08, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- Points taken, the issue for me was the use of country and countries in such a small sentence which read as if the sentence had been chopped up from a longer previous version. I note the discussion below and am sure you will all find the best way to deal with it.
- I removed "smaller" from the "four smaller countries" - I consider "smaller" to be redundant here, as any parts forming a greater whole would have to be smaller. Daicaregos (talk) 12:08, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- "Smaller" is redundant because you could not have a country that consists of four larger countries. They must by definition be smaller, so there is no need to say so. -- Alarics (talk) 05:29, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- Geography
- Rivers (para3) - The main rivers are given followed by a sentence that lists the principal rivers. Should the three main rivers be repeated? Perhaps "The other principal rivers are..."
- "The topography of Scotland is distinguished by the Highland Boundary Fault" (para 4) - could this be better put by using "demarked" or similar instead of distinguished?
- Climate
- "Summers are warmest in the south east of England, being closest to the European mainland, and coolest in the north." - It would be better to give an explanation as to why being close to the European mainland causes the hotter south-east summers.
- "Snowfall can occur in winter" - has it ever NOT snowed in the UK during winter? I would agree that snowfall in spring can or cannot occur though.
- Administrative divisions
- "On 13 March 2008 the executive agreed on proposals to..." (para3) - What executive? It is not mentioned earlier in the para, nor can I see any mention of it in the section.
- Moved NI para to the end of the section, most of the other sections follow the order: England, Scotland, Wales, NI.
- Politics
- "The UK has a parliamentary government based on the Westminster system that has been emulated around the world" (para 2) - The UK parliamentary system is the basis for the Westminster system, rather than being based on it. I suggest "The UK has a parliamentary government that has been emulated around the world using the Westminster system". If one looks at the article on the Westminster system it clearly states "modelled after the politics of the United Kingdom".
- "It is the ultimate legislative authority" (para 2) - What is? The previous two sentences talk of "two houses" and "royal assent". I would imagine that this refers to the UK parliament but it is unclear and could do with clarifying.
- Government
- "and the Liberal Democrats, who won between them 622 out of 650 seats available" - This reads as if the Liberal Democrats won the 622 seats. I have split the sentence.
- Devolved national administrations
- "can vote, sometimes decisively, on matters affecting England that are handled by devolved legislatures for their own constituencies." - Unsure whether this adequately explains the point. They can vote on matters affecting England although their own constituencies are not affected by these votes due to their devolved legislatures.
- "the assembly can now legislate" (para3) - which one? Welsh or National?
- Law and Criminal justice
- "The Scots legal system is unique in having three possible verdicts for a criminal trial: "guilty", "not guilty" and "not proven"" - Is this entirely correct? There is the option in English law of the jury saying the law is wrong (Jury nullification I believe) which would give English trials three possible outcomes also.
- Transport
- Surfaced vs paved - the Road surface article says "Road surface (British English) or pavement (American English)..."
- Miles vs. Kilometres - why do the conversions have kilometres first? The linked article Transport in the United Kingdom has "X miles (Y km)", as I would expect in an article on the UK?
- "There are 394,428 kilometres (245,086 mi) of paved roads running throughout the UK, with a motorway network of 3,519 kilometres (2,187 mi). There are a further 213,750 kilometres (132,818 mi) of paved roads." - this is a little confusing as it seems to read that there are another 213,750 in addition to the 394,428.
- "In that period the three largest airports" - is this correct? This appears to refer to area or size rather than volume of traffic, if it is referring to traffic volume it should state so "In that period the three most used airports were..." or similar.
- Education
- "the provision of Welsh-medium..." (para4)- If this refers to the Welsh language it could perhaps be made more clear. At present it seems to refer to a medium level of education.
- Healthcare
- "which is 0.5 percentage points below..." and "about one percentage point below..."- Is this not the same as "which is 0.5% below..." and "about 1% below..."?
- Literature
- "'British literature' refers to literature associated with the United Kingdom" - I think it needs clarifying somewhat as "associated" is a vague term (without wishing to attract accusations of pedantry) and an American book on London could be seen as UK literature by this definition.
- Music
- ", Spice Girls, ..." - I thought they were more commonly called "the Spice Girls"? (I have always heard them on Radio 1, for example, referred to as " by the Spice Girls" rather than " by Spice Girls")
- "Acts from Liverpool have had more UK chart number one hit singles per capita (54) than any other city worldwide." - This would mean that there have been 23,862,000 (441,900 x 54) hits from Liverpool!?! It is possible that either the per capita should be removed, or that the sentence should read "...one hit singles sales per capita..."
- Sport
- Cricket - I have changed it to read "Cricket was invented in England." - After reading the linked main and other Wiki articles as well as several other sources, there is no mention of any other country claiming its invention.
- General notes
- There is a mix of {{ndash}}, &ndash and —. These should be ratified into one preferred method.
- Official government positions, such as member of parliament or prime minister, are only capitalised under certain circumstances - Misplaced Pages:Manual_of_Style#Titles_of_people. See also: User:Chaosdruid/usefullinks/GOCEconv § MoS_for_capitalisation_of_political_titles, and User:Chaosdruid/usefullinks/MOSconv § Capitalization_of_.22Congress.22.2C_.22Parliament.22.2C_etc.
- I appreciate that there may be some issue over the use of commas:
- "One, two and three" were the most prevalent and I have unified them. It is also the British style.
- There are a couple of "The somethings, One, Two and three, were blah blah". This is grammatically correct when all three terms are incidental to the sentence.
- "On 1 Month Year, this happened" is incorrect. It should read "On 1 Month Year this happened"
- For further info on these matters, and many others, feel free to have a look at the tabs from User:Chaosdruid/usefullinks. There are a lot of MoS and GOCE links which you may find useful
- There is no need to be so dogmatic about commas. It is wrong to say that the comma in "On 1 Month Year, this happened" is incorrect. What is the case is that the comma may be unnecessary, depending on the context. I think it depends on what words the "this happened" clause starts with. If it starts with a "the", the comma is certainly redundant because it is obvious to the reader that what follows is the subject, but it doesn't do any actual harm. It is all a matter of what assists instant comprehension. As for "One, two and three", a comma is indeed redundant after "two" but if the elements in the sentence are much longer, and especially where an element itself contains an "and" (for instance because it is itself a list nested in the larger list), a comma is desirable. Each case should be judged on its merits. -- Alarics (talk) 05:42, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- Except that this is a copyedit, one part of which is to fix punctuation errors and being grammatically correct, as well as following MoS, is important.
- In the case of "Date," the comma is not being used to join two separate but related points in a sentence, as the date is the specific time that the next few words occurred, and is therefore redundant.
- In case you had not noticed the last point you raised is the second bullet point (where I talk about that very example and say it is correct).
- I am looking at each individual sentence, this is a copyedit not some AWB pass, nor am I running any scripts. I am spending a great deal of time on this as I want to be proud of an article on my own country - and especially want it to be grammatically correct as it will obviously be used as a reference for many students and school-children, thus perhaps being "so dogmatic" about commas is merely getting punctuation right?
- There is no need to be so dogmatic about commas. It is wrong to say that the comma in "On 1 Month Year, this happened" is incorrect. What is the case is that the comma may be unnecessary, depending on the context. I think it depends on what words the "this happened" clause starts with. If it starts with a "the", the comma is certainly redundant because it is obvious to the reader that what follows is the subject, but it doesn't do any actual harm. It is all a matter of what assists instant comprehension. As for "One, two and three", a comma is indeed redundant after "two" but if the elements in the sentence are much longer, and especially where an element itself contains an "and" (for instance because it is itself a list nested in the larger list), a comma is desirable. Each case should be judged on its merits. -- Alarics (talk) 05:42, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
- Several sections seem to have used differing orders of listing Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland. It may be that some were done alphabetically, "England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales", whereas others were ordered as "England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland" - seemingly by number, size or perceptions of importance. I have unified them to follow the structure from the lead and first two sections: "England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland".
- An editor has reverted my edit from "- and the BG Group" to "and BG Group", I do not consider that their edit is correct. In normal English we would not leave the word "the" out, in American grammar they do. As this is an English article I think it should be put back to my edit but I will leave it to the normal editors to decide which should be used.
- Sorry but you're wrong - please take a look at their website (). The reference is to BG Group plc as a (UK registered) corporate entity, which is one single thing - that single entity does own a group of subsidiary companies but is not itself a group. Rangoon11 (talk) 00:03, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
- No I am not, my opinion is my opinion - how can it be wrong? Moreover if it is singular then the "the" is even more appropriate. I have already given my opinion and have stated that I leave it up to the editors to decide. There is no need to continue defending your argument by saying that I am wrong as it will be consensus that decides the outcome. As it stands, without the "the", my opinion is that the sentence is left wanting. Chaosdruid (talk) 18:17, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think you are both right. If the reference is meant to be to the holding company of the Group it should be without a doubt without the "The". This is the Companies House search result which is the ultimate authority for company names. It's definitely "BG Group plc". However, if the reference is to the whole group of companies not specifically the holding company, then normal practice is to include the "The". It's not clear which it's meant to be. On the one hand, omitting the "plc" suggests it's the whole group. On the other hand, the pipe link is to BG Group plc - suggesting the holding company. DeCausa (talk) 19:19, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- No I am not, my opinion is my opinion - how can it be wrong? Moreover if it is singular then the "the" is even more appropriate. I have already given my opinion and have stated that I leave it up to the editors to decide. There is no need to continue defending your argument by saying that I am wrong as it will be consensus that decides the outcome. As it stands, without the "the", my opinion is that the sentence is left wanting. Chaosdruid (talk) 18:17, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- Sorry but you're wrong - please take a look at their website (). The reference is to BG Group plc as a (UK registered) corporate entity, which is one single thing - that single entity does own a group of subsidiary companies but is not itself a group. Rangoon11 (talk) 00:03, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
Finished. Chaosdruid (talk) 04:54, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
It is a country in its own right and consists of four smaller countries:
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"In its own right" sounds rather odd. Would it not be better if we simply had the first sentence of the article say.... "The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland (Commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a country and sovereign state off the north-western coast of continental Europe" That way the sentence about consisting of four countries would no longer need to state the United Kingdom is a country. At present that is the first place where the UK is called a country in the article, where as this is a rather important bit of information that should be in the first sentence. The fact there is a FAQ on this page pointing out the UK is a country highlights this. BritishWatcher (talk) 09:05, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
Haven't we been over all that many times before? I thought the consensus after a great deal of argument was for "a country consisting of four countries", the source for which is, or was, the Downing Street website, IIRC. -- Alarics (talk) 12:44, 16 May 2011 (UTC)
It's back to the pre-Chipmunkdavis rewrite, sort of, I suppose. Does that cover all the issues? Chipmunkdavis (talk) 00:17, 17 May 2011 (UTC)
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Use of a footnote to try and 'balance' status of NI
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Re this revert by revert by Ghmyrtle, who referred to the fact this footnote's content was "agreed at talk page", I'd really like to know where tbh. Because it's complete garbage. Using footnotes rather than main text links to refer readers other Misplaced Pages articles for more information for understanding POV disputes? WTF? Using footnotes to deliver the NPOV balancing info rather than simple explanatory text? Since when did that become good practice? Using footnote claims in the present tense tied to a single 1991 reference to use the lede of this article to suggest to readers that somehow referring to NI as a country might reveal you as a terrorist? Since when did this sort of flagrant coatracking of footnotes fly as how we deal with NPOV? I'd like some answers, directly, or I'll be reverting, on the basis that 'see talk page' is not a legitimate defence of such flagrant violations of the MoS or NPOV. MickMacNee (talk) 14:11, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
(outdent) I am not disagreeing with the content, but I find the format (link to subpage), shall we say, "unusual" at best. Suppose I print this — link gone, refs gone, no information. Choyoołʼįįhí:Seb az86556 16:19, 19 May 2011 (UTC) Using a link to another WP article as source? That is a no go I think. If "the United Kingdom Government refers to the four parts as 'countries' constantly" as someone claimed in the above mentioned discussion and if this claim applies to referring to Northern Ireland as "country" too, there clearly are many good reliable sources at hand? Why not using them? And the link to a talk-subpage looks like a wikilink to an article. "Unusual" is friendly for that. What unexperienced user is to understand that? Adornix (talk) 16:24, 19 May 2011 (UTC) MickMacNee: You haven't raised any serious policy points. The footnote gives extra information on the text. This solution had the support of pretty much all the regular editors and is the product of consensus after a very lengthy debate. You have no consensus to change it - although, of course it's open to you to try to gain consensus for you view. DeCausa (talk) 17:01, 19 May 2011 (UTC)
Please try to cut down on the one mass block statements Mick and the comemnting on editors, i think your putting editors off altogether leaving just you yourself argueing your point. I'm not even reading your recent comments due to the poor formatting and verbosity of it, and it would appear no-one else is either - however by looking closer at your opening statement which is far shorter i think i can finally figure out what your on about. If the content of the footnote is such a problem for you then why not propose a rewording? If you don't like a 1991 source being used in present tense then why not suggest changing the tense of content of the footnote as such: "With regard to Northern Ireland, the descriptive name used has been stated in the past as being "controversial, with the choice often revealing one's political preferences."". Is that not a less verbose, less disruptive and easier going way of handling the issue rather than ranting and making threats of making chages regardless of other editors? If a wikilink to a sub-page of a talk-page, which is simply a list of sources a no-no, then its a no-no, however it is in the form of a article, just in the wrong namespace. If it was possible to be created as an actual article would it meet your criteria Mick for wikilinking? RA has already removed it anyways. In fact if you wish we can cram every single reference for country into the footnote which to be honest is overkill and rediculous but if it needs to be done. Personally i would rather not have the footnote, however compromises were made by all for the greater good of the article, whether you see it or not. Mabuska 00:12, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
RebootRight. Well, to satisfy the 'formatting' concerns, and to see if there really is some discussion about to break out here, here is a selection of suggested starting points, in handy bullet point form:
As far as any further nit-picking of my writing style goes, I will not be tolerating any further pretences of there being an existing, well argued, defended, or even defensible consensus, or that I am required to discuss anything here in order to get this article to comply with NPOV, a core policy, if we don't start to see some substantive progress on the above points. MickMacNee (talk) 01:26, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
The 'what policy' issue
Is that enough to be getting on with? I do not want you to be misled into thinking that these are the only parts of policy that support me, these are just the ones that I found first, and believe are enough as a starting point. I won't be so dramatic as to ask you to come up with in return a line and paragraph that would support the use of a footnote in this way (and it's not like I haven't asked already), but I hope you might understand my skepticism if you can't, particularly when you have already described my concerns as "overblown nonsense", and you are after all, still restoring the content on the claim that there was a long debate on the issue, which surely must have covered these key points of policy, to be held up by you as a valid consenus? Valid enough to edit war to maintain. MickMacNee (talk) 12:30, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
GoodDay's suggestion
Replace the sentence with "United Kingdom is a country, consisting of England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales". This version doesn't require a footnote. This article is about the UK. The descriptive 'country' is handled in the intros of England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales. -- GoodDay (talk) 10:58, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
The rationale given for depriving readers of the notable fact that England, Scotland and Wales are countries is that the descriptive 'country' is handled in the intros of England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales. A similar rationale could apply to 90% of this article, yet that information is included here. That is because it is relevant and notable. That England, Scotland and Wales are verifiably countries is also relevant and notable. It should be noted in this article. Daicaregos (talk) 13:03, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Ghmyrtle's suggestionHow about (in para 2): "The United Kingdom consists of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland. It is a unitary sovereign state governed under a constitutional monarchy and a parliamentary system, with its seat of government in the capital city of London. There are three devolved national administrations, each with varying powers, situated in Belfast, Cardiff and Edinburgh; the capitals of Northern Ireland, Wales and Scotland respectively..." Ghmyrtle (talk) 12:22, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
I know we can't mandate other editors, but it is reasonable to ask for agreement from the editors involved here as there is a substantial overlap. Now once I have worked through daughter's anthropology essay I intend to make it to Cardiff to catch up on St Fagins folk museum with the camera and then show Celtic Solidarity from 1700 onwards against the evil midlanders so I will not be online again until tomorrow. Doubtless other editors have other things to do this weekend as well so I suggest we aim to try and reach conclusions on this over the weekend, but don't do anything precipitate until there is a clear consensus. We may of course have to cross check the Welsh wikipedia as well as the German, and maybe we should throw in a few others while we are at it --Snowded 09:01, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
That England, Scotland and Wales are countries which, with Northern Ireland, comprise the UK is notable. Introducing this article without noting that, fails to provide readers with information to help them understand the subject. Unless and until an improvement to the existing text is agreed, no change should be made to the Introduction. No-one could refute that England, Scotland and Wales are verifiably countries. That they are should be noted in the Lead. Daicaregos (talk) 09:56, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
As with GoodDay's proposal i support Ghmyrtle's. However Northern Ireland musn't be alone in special treatment if any is giving, there are some who describe the other parts of the UK as other things than countrys. Mabuska 11:48, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
A different proposal from GoodDayMy two-cents (or two-pence), what is written below by GoodDay,
Deja vu: let's return to 'sanity'The above sub-threads (with near agreements and then falling through) was the background before we ended up with the footnote. It's not perfect, it has problems but it does a reasonable job and it had broad consensus support. This whole thing has only re-opened because MickMacNee burst in here with some unsubstantiated and somewhat wild objections which no one actually has said they agree with. My suggestion is ignore him, retain the existing compromise and let everyone go back to doing something more constructive. The alternative, IMHO, is the endless debate that we had before. And frankly, for what purpose? DeCausa (talk) 13:44, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Why are any editors, opposing my proposal? The sentence I propose is certainly undisputable & needs no footnote. Holy smokers, it's either that proposal or the compromise - constituent countries. GoodDay (talk) 16:33, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Using the legal definitions contained in Black's Law Dictionary for a Sovereign State and a non-Sovereign State one may write the following two statements show below, (i). the United States of America is a Sovereign State composed of 50 non-Sovereign States, (ii). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Sovereign State composed of 4 non-Sovereign States of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. In this vein-of-thought ... why not use statement (ii). for the lede of the United Kingdom article? It would satisfy all concerned. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 02:08, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
The United kingdom is a country and always have just look at any other encyclopediaChaosname (talk) 20:03, 22 May 2011 (UTC) How important is the "country" issue?As far as I can tell, the main issue now boils down to whether the reference to E/W/S/NI being countries should be in the lead (Daicaregos and Jeanne) or whether it should come out per the "GhMyrtle proposal" and have its own section explaining it in the main body of the article (most others, I think). Daicaregos' view expressed above is, I believe, that this is such an important aspect of the United Kingdom that it should be noted in the Lead. But, IMHO, this is primarily a semantic issue. There is no generally agreed meaning of the word "country" (eg see this Economist article and the widely differing dictionary definitions: OED; Merriam-Webster; Macquarie). It's entirely up in the air what it means and what its significance is. To add to that, giving significance to the word "country" appears to be a parochial UK issue. For example, the equivalents in other languages, the German "Land" and romance "Pays", "pais" etc are used, without controversy, for all sorts of territories that have nothing to do with "nationhood" (for want of a better word) as well as non-sovereign "countries" and sovereign states. Other words carry the implications that we seem to be attaching to country - particularly "nation" e.g. the disputed use of the word for Catalonia. Even in the anglophone world, it's "nation" not "country" which is important (e.g. this CBC article about Quebec). I think what is missing from those that want to keep it into the lead is some evidence of why it is so important given that the word "country" doesn't have any agreed meaning (which is a different question to evidence of usage). DeCausa (talk) 11:51, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
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Hmmm ... The German Language Misplaced Pages seems More Accurate
Ironic ...
http://de.wikipedia.org/Vereinigtes_K%C3%B6nigreich#Geschichte
seems more accurate than
http://en.wikipedia.org/United_Kingdom
I have to chuckle. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 20:23, 20 May 2011 (UTC)
- The German language article's section headed Geschichte does have some problems which we should perhaps correct. "...für rund 350 Jahre von den Römern besetzt" could be "rund 360 Jahre". "Die keltische Urbevölkerung wurde in die westlichen Randgebiete verdrängt" is an old-fashioned view of the matter. The consensus now is that most Britons stayed where they were and became anglicized. "1066 eroberten französisierte Normannen aus der Normandie die Insel und prägten sie für die folgenden Jahrhunderte." The Normans initially conquered only England, and not even the whole of what we now think of as England. "...mit dem Königreich Irland, das von 1169 bis 1603 mehr und mehr unter englische Kontrolle geraten war." Isn't 1603 an odd date to choose, here, as the process was a continuing one, rather culminating in Oliver Cromwell? Moonraker2 (talk) 08:36, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- Hello Moonraker2. I have been studying on my own all of the 53 living Indo-European Languages and some of the dead ones (i.e., Old English, Old Norse, Latin, Ancient Greek, and Sanskrit). If you want to go to the German Language page and argue in German ... Looss! ... be my guest. I would be most entertained to watch. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 12:16, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- Kein schlechter Gedanke :-) The german article obviously needs some correction. Adornix (talk) 19:25, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
- Hello Moonraker2. I have been studying on my own all of the 53 living Indo-European Languages and some of the dead ones (i.e., Old English, Old Norse, Latin, Ancient Greek, and Sanskrit). If you want to go to the German Language page and argue in German ... Looss! ... be my guest. I would be most entertained to watch. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 12:16, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
Official langauge
I reverted an editor's changing of the status of english (in the infobox) as the UK official language. I'm not certain if I was correct in doing this. PS: the editor has since restored his edit. GoodDay (talk) 19:23, 21 May 2011 (UTC)
A re-written Intro, ignoring the current group-consensus of avoiding “constituent” and “British Isles”
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Fellow Wikipedians (where are all of you!);
The United Kingdom consists of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland. It is a unitary sovereign state governed under a constitutional monarchy and a parliamentary system, with its seat of government in the capital city of London....
Matt Lewis (talk) 23:14, 22 May 2011 (UTC) Comments I strongly oppose mentioning the four constituent parts of the UK in the first paragraph. The current wording is acceptable. Although as we now have the fact it is a unitary sovereign state in the second sentence, i believe this article should be made more in line with other articles about countries and actually say the UK is a country in the first sentence. We dont need to say sovereign state twice, however its clear some people need reminding the United Kingdom is a country, so saying it several times cant hurt. BritishWatcher (talk) 23:36, 22 May 2011 (UTC)
The United Kingdom is a country, there's no need to hide that fact. England, Scotland, Northern Ireland & Wales can be described as constituent countries, there's no need to prevent that. British Isles can be used, it's not prohibited. The worst thing that can be done? giving in to the cries "it might offend someone". GoodDay (talk) 00:26, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
I'm not happy with this on a simply readability basis. I don't see the point of saying "is a sovereign state consisting of four constituent countries" in the first paragraph, but then waiting to the second paragraph to say "the United Kingdom consists of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland". They're disjointed, with no obvious connections. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 03:28, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
I think its a step backwards, introducing controversy on several fronts, I also agree with Chupmunkdavis--Snowded 04:35, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
Point of information: the former UK Prime Minister, Tony Blair, described the UK thus: as a "voluntary union between two countries" --Mais oui! (talk) 07:12, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
Step backwards: concur with Chipmunkdavis and Snowded. DeCausa (talk) 09:25, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
Making wholesale changes to the Intro here, while it is being discussed, is not helpful. Especially as other changes were made at the same time. I remember seeing that edit and assuming it only related to Euros in payphones. I have reverted pending conclusion of these discussions. The CIA are not our only source. Daicaregos (talk) 15:51, 23 May 2011 (UTC) There are a lot of positions that have been discussed over time and the article has evolved to handle different points of view. Staring again from scratch, introducing or ommitting words which are known to be controversial is a retrograde step. As far as I can see reading the above Ghmyrtle, myself and DeCausa were working through a solution which did not use country in the lede, but had proper piplinks and a later section on Countries (and now possibly identity. That built on what we have already agreed. Some editors think that it is critical that country is in the lede sentence; a view I can understand but I don't think its necessary and having a more elaborate section later will actually be better as it will be read as opposed to skimmed over. I'd suggest we go back to working through that one and see if we can agree. OR we outline two or three proposals and then get some structure to this.--Snowded 16:03, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
In their “About Britain” section, Visit Britain, a quango responsible to the Department for Culture, Media and Sport, have sub-sections on History, Religion, Government, Cities and Countries; similar to Wiki's Introduction. Their Countries section begins with Britain: “Britain is full of contrasts; whichever direction you travel you will find a wide variety of landscapes and diverse cultures to explore. England, Wales, Scotland and Northern Ireland are all unique countries with their own customs, cultures and tradition.” It is inconceivable that they would be allowed to define Britain in those terms without the consent of the DCMS. They obviously consider that that uniquness is important enough to describe Britain that way to foreign visitors. It is notable, and should be in the lead of this article. Daicaregos (talk) 18:15, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
ProtectionI've requested protection for this article, as an edit-war has sprung up, over these last few hours. GoodDay (talk) 18:39, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
The C-Word and National identity (yet another proposal, but I'm not holding my breath)No one who has a concern to put "country" in the lead has really articulated why it's so important. Well, let's face it we all know why: because they want the recognition of "country status", as they see it, up front. I and others, are of the opinion that "country" doesn't mean that much and not much is really achieved by using the word. My suggestion is to tackle the issue of national recognition in the body of the article head on, and not coatrack it on the word "country". I think the important thing to recognize is the individual "natioanl identities" and the British national identity and not the spurious status of country. I suggest below a subsection which could go in a number of places. This obviates the need to get hung up on "country",and we can have the Ghmyrtle solution for the lead. However, the lead could, somewhere, have the sentence. "National identity in the UK is complex, and beside a British identity, a numbr of other national identities exist including English, Welsh, Scottish and Northern Irish." In the body of the article I suggest a sub-section headed "National identity": Although there is a single citizenship, that of the United Kingdom, the historical origins of the UK and long-standing cultural distinctions, has led England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland to be described as "countries within a country". With this comes a complex sense of national identity. In England, Scotland and Wales, people can consider themselves as just British, as both British and English, Scottish or Welsh (as the case may be), or not British at all. Surveys have indicated that about a third of Scots consider themselves as Scottish and not British. Although the majority view themselves as British and Scottish, most consider they are Scottish first. In Wales, there is a similar tendency, although the proportions that do not consider themselves British or British second to Welsh are smaller. In England, however, the majority consider themselves as British first and almost half feel equally British and English.' In Northern Ireland, national identity is further complicated by the existence of two communities: Nationalist and Unionist. "British" is seen as an identity largely equated with unionism. Equally, nationalists largely see themselves as having an Irish national identity. Other identities are also used: "Northern Irish" is often seen as more "neutral" and tends to be chosen by the under-45s and the identification "Ulster" tends to be selected more frequently by Protestants than Catholics. In a recent survey of Northern Irish people, as a first preference, 37% considered themselves British, 29% preferred Northern Irish and 26% chose Irish. In another survey, 22% did not consider themselves British at all.
Sorry can't help with the 'note' problem - they are always difficult on discussion pages. I have to say that the real taboo 'C Word' is "constituent" - not 'country'. I do like "sovereign state" for the UK and I think that it is solves half the issue. To insert 'country' as well for the UK in the same area is not just overkill imo, but technically quite difficult with all the other stuff that needs to be said. I don't mind whether we use "constituent country" for the England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales, or avoid using a label for them in the Intro at all. I DO think that those nations (and that word has and will never been enough DeCausa) will all benefit from using "constituent country" though, and so it makes some sense using it here at UK too. Even using "constituent country" just here (and not at Wales etc) is better than just "country" for the home nations - as that will never settle. I think that using the perfectly-legit 'Sovereign state' for UK really is the key. British Watcher might find himself relatively on his own in his insistence for 'country' over it, and I'm sure GoodDay will settle for 'Sovereign State' for the UK providing Wales et al aren't called 'countries' in the same article. A few years ago, after I started Countries of the United Kingdom (due to the Welsh talk-page 'is a country that is part of the United Kingdom' compromise), someone suggested recreating the 'Identity' section in here (he said there was nothing like it), but there was an edit-involved admin around who didn't believe in 'multiculturalism' or indeed the Countries of the UK article at first - and I didn't quite fancy the challenge at the time. I've been aware that the Identity section there has changed quite a lot (certainly at one point the NI parts became subtly less neutral) - I'm not sure how it fares now, as I deliberately don't look at it when I re-enter Misplaced Pages (in part because I digress from my editing intentions enough as it is, but also because I know it will suck me right back in). Perhaps it's time to re-visit the idea, along the lines above. We will still need to sort out the shop window though - the UK Intro will always be the UK Intro (even when it's weirdly called the 'lede'). Matt Lewis (talk) 16:46, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
Notes
DeCausa (talk) 15:19, 23 May 2011 (UTC) Edit Warring and structureOK we have two editors, Mick and Off2Rio who thinks its OK to edit the article to impose their version while discussion is taking place. Its a clear failure to follow WP:BRD especially when the current version has itself resulted from multiple discussions. At the same time we need to find a way of making progress here. At the moment I can see three proposals: (i) The Ghymrtle proposal as modified by myself and DeCausa (ii) Matt's complete rewrite and (iii) the status quo. Can I suggest we get those summarised and then structure for comment? --Snowded 18:49, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
I wrote this because I feel it is what the Intro would probably look like without prejudice. What about it without the British Isles?.. The United Kingdom (fully titled United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and commonly termed United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a sovereign state consisting of four constituent countries, situated in an archipelago off the north-western coast of continental Europe. The UK covers the whole island of Great Britain and the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland, along with a number of smaller islands near its coasts. Waters that surround the UK are the Atlantic Ocean west of Northern Ireland, the Irish Sea between Ireland and Great Britain, the North Sea in the east towards Scandinavia, and the English Channel before the European mainland in the south. The UK has just the one land border with another sovereign state, between Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland.
Matt Lewis (talk) 20:11, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
How about: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland (commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a country that includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland, and many smaller islands, located off the north-western coast of continental Europe. Created originally by negotiated political union, the sovereign state today comprises the countries of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland, which is the only part of the UK that shares a land border with another sovereign state—the Republic of Ireland. Apart from this land border the UK is surrounded by the Atlantic Ocean, the North Sea, the English Channel and the Irish Sea. This version describes the UK as a country in the first line, emphasises the UK is the sovereign state, and also refers to the four countries of the United Kingdom. Perhaps a footnote about Northen Ireland could explain that the term country is disputed in its case. That's my contribution - now off to bed! Cheers Fishiehelper2 (talk) 22:50, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
If there is a footnote it must IN NO WAY have sectarianism mentioned in it. That polemical nonsense of a 'political controversy' over the impossible-to-answer country/province 'officiality' issue is outrageous here (and dodgy as hell). Sovereignty first - it's the Intro of the UK for pete's sake. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:03, 23 May 2011 (UTC)
Using the legal definitions contained in Black's Law Dictionary for a Sovereign State and a non-Sovereign State one may write the following two statements show below, (i). the United States of America is a Sovereign State composed of 50 non-Sovereign States, (ii). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Sovereign State composed of 4 non-Sovereign States of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. In this vein-of-thought ... why not use statement (ii). for the lede of the United Kingdom article? It would satisfy all concerned. Once again ...this article with remain perpetually dead-locked until the Status England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland of being just internal Administrative Divisions of the United Kingdom i.e., the Country ... other parts not-Country, is reflected in the text. Oi. This is frustrating. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 01:44, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
If certain editors want to continue to dig in their heels, then fine. The rest of us, should ignore them & adopt Ghymrtle's proposal for the lead. GoodDay (talk) 11:56, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Ghmyrtle (talk) 12:53, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Removing so-called 'political controversy' over NI being a 'country' from a UK Introduction footnote“With regard to Northern Ireland, the descriptive name used "can be controversial, with the choice often revealing one's political preferences." Just before the page was locked, RA made it a direct quote. OK. the United Kingdom article is not locked with what I consider to be a sectarian edit in a footnote leading from it's introduction. I can see no great reason for it other than to keep NI nationalist politics in the limelight as far as I'm concerned. I say this because I've not heard any other reasoning for the offensive line other than;
Matt Lewis (talk) 10:33, 24 May 2011 (UTC) Much of that doesn't make sense. The statement that "nationalism does not EQUAL sovereignty" in an NI context is very silly. I'm not a Irish nationalist, nor do I have any sympathy with sectarianism. There's a very simple and obvious point: the objective of Irish nationalism remains - regardless of the Belfast agreement - a 32-county Ireland. That's not a controversial or sectarian statement. A substantial minority of Northern Irish people vote for a party that has that as this as its objective. That's not a controversial or sectarian statement. That party on its website says, in terms, Ireland is one nation and one country. That's not a controversial or sectarian statement (that that is their position, not the SF statement of course). I don't see what is controversial or sectarian about reflecting these facts of life (however unpalatable) in this article somewhere. Now I'm off to the Balkans.... DeCausa (talk) 11:00, 24 May 2011 (UTC
@Matt, you saying I know "little about the subject" is a little like me saying "you are an idiot". It's a fairly meaningless name-calling exercise. However, what I am severely pissed off about is you saying I have "clear a Irish nationalist bias". Because of that, I feel I can call you a fucking idiot (with the attendant block risk for WP:NPA). You have a tiresome and petty POV to push - but nevertless your statement annoys me. I'll explain why, and it annoys me also that in order to do so I have to explain my personal political views, which I shouldn't have to. Firstly, I'm English. Secondly, I think that nationalism is a ludicrous piece of nonsense dreamed up in the 19th century. Thirdly, I believe the "nation state" is a myth sold to the gullible. Fourthly, I don't care if the part of London I live in was part of a state that was ruled from London, Ballymena, Cardiff, Brussels, Washington or Paris, so long it was run well. Fifthly, and most to the point, the concept of a "United Ireland" is a ludicrous concept and I see no reason why it should ever happen. Sixthly, I neither care whether the UK separates into its constituent parts nor stays together. In conclusion, I believe "nation" is a myth and I feel no loyalty or sympathy with any so-called "national" grouping. Got it? DeCausa (talk) 21:08, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
This should really be a 'smell the coffee' time for you RA: I have genuinely always seen Northern Ireland as a country (why wouldn't I?), as have most British people my age (40). Do younger people see it any less so? I doubt it. I grew up with the Troubles forever in the UK news, and whether the word 'province' was mentioned or not (as 'the Principality' used to be for Wales), NI was always the British country the Irish wanted back. Just as it was the footballing country that used to have George Best in it. Did the Irish in the 70's and 80's (or even now) bother thinking as technically as you do about its origins? I doubt it somehow. Like it or not they knew what it really was, despite all the various diplomatic phraseology the British used during transition. The British split Ireland into two separate countries, so one could become independent, and the other - full of people who hade been British Irish for centuries - could pretty much run itself: Northern Ireland was always the most fully devolved UK country. The British never ever intended to give it back, and they kept that particular area because it been full of British for centuries. So they made a 'British Ireland' in the north of the island of Ireland, and called it "Northern Ireland". They created a new country in the legitimate non-sovereign sense - and if the Republic of Ireland accepted that better at the time, and the Irish republican minority in Northern Ireland wasn't so large - nobody would be remotely questioning that obvious fact. You just live in the world that you personally want to see, RA. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:57, 24 May 2011 (UTC) behaviourMatt, between your edit waring against established consensus and the personal attacks on other established editors there is more than enough above to get you warned if not blocked. No one wants to do this but we are not going to make progress unless you lay of the polemic. Can we have an undertaking on that please? --Snowded 06:27, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
Should we keep the current introduction and focus on a new section that tackles the country/nationalities issue in detail?Whilst i think the current wording is slightly odd the status quo is probably as clear as it is going to get without watering it down completely avoiding terms which would be counter productive or going into extensive detail about the formation of the UK. At present the introduction... 1)States the UK is a sovereign state in the first sentence of the first paragraph. 2)States "It is a country....." in the second sentence of the first paragraph. 3)Repeats the UK is a country in its own right and consists of the four countries in the second sentence of the second paragraph. Ill support keeping the status quo if others are reasonably ok with it. Its certainly not ideal but then clearly the situation is not ideal. BritishWatcher (talk) 10:51, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Proposals based on the current 1st parag, a later identity section, and some 2nd parag rewordingI'm happy enough with what exists now, provided the footnote goes and a separate section is created. At very least the sectarianism has to be removed from the footnote. I personally think that the world "countries" is crying out for "constituent" next to it - it just reads so oddly without it. The word is simply made to measure.. Look at,
Compared to,
Best for most neutral people surely is this shorter version; A) It is a country consisting of four constituent countries: England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales. But perhaps this might sweeten the gravy?; B) It is a country in its own right and consists of four united constituent countries: England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales. Well it does make some sense. Does anyone support A or B here? Matt Lewis (talk) 20:23, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
"Pre-scribe" the word "Country" ... a Modest ProposalHere we go... Using the legal definitions contained in Black's Law Dictionary for a Sovereign State and a non-Sovereign State one may write the following two statements show below, (i). the United States of America is a Sovereign State composed of 50 non-Sovereign States, (ii). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Sovereign State composed of 4 non-Sovereign States of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. In this vein-of-thought ... why not use statement (ii). for the lede of the United Kingdom article? It would satisfy all concerned.
(iia). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a composed of of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. (iib). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a composed of of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. Using this underlying structure one has the following, (iia). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Country composed of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. (iib). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Sovereign State composed of 4 non-Sovereign States of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. (yep) (more to come). ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 16:15, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Why can't we just keep it simple without any ambiguous terms or complex mumbo-jumbo - The United Kingdom consists of England, Scotland, Northern Ireland and Wales. Mabuska 21:09, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
(iia). the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland is a Country composed of England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland. This would work. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 21:34, 24 May 2011 (UTC)
Another breakAt the risk of repeating myself, can I propose either of the following as an improvement to the current wording? Indications of support for (or reasoned arguments against) these wordings would be welcome. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:27, 25 May 2011 (UTC) OPTION A:
Greater context?
Rather than simply stating that the UK is made up of countries as bald fact or leaving the statement out of the introduction, maybe a way forward would be to put the situation in context a little. For example:
--RA (talk) 20:43, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
It's another slant for sure, but uses "Principality" before Wales, making it seem 'less' than a Kingdom somehow - so I'll wager it won't be liked. I've suggested something above you might like above though. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:51, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
Although I'm content with either options A or B above (it's not important enough to do otherwise) I support this with my 1st preference vote if it were AV. DeCausa (talk) 21:56, 25 May 2011 (UTC)
Ghmyrtle Option A and "sovereign country"
Sorry to bring this up again, as it is a minor point, but I don't want to have to argue about re-editing this again, if we are considering this can we please have the tidier?: OPTION A:
It also has the virtue of making the four parts of the UK clearer, which I (think) everyone would agree is no bad thing.--SabreBD (talk) 12:09, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
Attempting to integrate the proposalsThis wording is my attempt to integrate what seems to be suggested by my, RA's, Rangoon11's and BritishWatcher's proposals - with a few tweaks to avoid duplication:
Ghmyrtle (talk) 12:53, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
Northern Ireland" comprises the countries of England, Scotland, Wales and Northern Ireland…" Hmmm. Now, we've been through the reliable sources (at least on Talk:Northern Ireland), so let's just take litmus test of what 'sounds right'. Consider the following:
None of those sentence sit very well. Compare with:
All of these are on far firmer ground, regardless of whether Scotland is sovereign or not. And that's the problem. It appears that Northern Ireland is being whipped into this "country" issue for the benefit of other parts of the UK regardless of whether the appellation "country" is suitable for it or not. The very specific and unique history of Northern Ireland within the UK should not be obtusely ignored simply because it is inconvenient. England, Scotland and Wales are all considered countries because they represent specific and identifiable nations. They were countries before the United Kingdom and have kept that distinctiveness within the UK. Northern Ireland does not have that same history. It doesn't represent a specific and unique nation and it has no history of being a country in its own right. Yes, it is possible to doggedly refuse to accede this point by pointing to questions that appear on census forms or some other whatnot. On the other hand, sources that specifically address Northern Ireland and precisly the question of what to call it say otherwise. For example:
This is represents specific challenges but ignoring it does not make it go away and does not do the subject justice. --RA (talk) 20:35, 26 May 2011 (UTC) It is clearly true that Northern Ireland has no history of being a country in its own right. However, in the context of the constitutional history of United Kingdom, it does represent a specific and unique nation: the Kingdom of Ireland. (Remember, the Crown of Ireland Act 1542 is still very much in effect in NI).Ivor Stoughton (talk) 00:20, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
The language here ("hmmm" etc) and all the incorrect stuff (this is over at NI talk too) is a huge hindrance to following this talk page in my opinion. The tone isn't right at all, as it is so dismissive of the (almost-full) majority of people in this discussion who accept the many NI "country" sources. Can't we keep this at NI? Matt Lewis (talk) 22:06, 26 May 2011 (UTC) Tweak for NI
With a sub-section in main body along the lines of the old footnote. DeCausa (talk) 21:25, 26 May 2011 (UTC)
Sovereign State and "countries within a country".The United Kingdom (fully titled United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and commonly termed United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a sovereign state in the archipelago situated off the north-western coast of continental Europe. The UK comprises the whole island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland, and a number of smaller islands around its coasts. Waters that surround the UK are the Atlantic Ocean in the west, the Irish Sea (between Ireland and Great Britain), the North Sea in the east, and the English Channel between the European mainland in the south. The UK has only one land border with another sovereign state, between Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland. The United Kingdom consists of four "countries within a country": England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales....
Sovereign country and "countries within a country"The United Kingdom (fully titled United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland and commonly termed United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a Sovereign country that shares the archipelago off the north-western coast of continental Europe. It consists of four "countries within a country": England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales. The UK comprises the whole island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland, and a number of smaller islands around its coasts. Waters that surround the UK are the Atlantic Ocean in the west, the Irish Sea (between Ireland and Great Britain), the North Sea in the east, and the English Channel between the European mainland in the south. The UK has only one land border with another sovereign state, between Northern Ireland and the Republic of Ireland.
Something missing, something differentIf the lead notes that Britain can stand, pars pro toto, for the UKoGB&NI, it seems at best unhelpful not to state that England can do likewise. There seem to be sufficient sources disputing the idea that the UK0GB&NI is a unitary state to make the inclusion of this factoid in the lead questionable. If union state were found to be the commoner term - I do not believe that it is, but I haven't devoted much time to the question - this would allow the question of how to describe the components of the union to be nearly avoided by simply enumerating them as parts of the union state. The red-linkiness of that term is easily resolved since it is widely discussed. Taking ghmyrtle's text as the basis, a very quick draught incorporating these two points would look something like:
Just a thought. Angus McLellan (Talk) 00:33, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Here's what Vernon Bogdanor has to say on this question:
http://www.gresham.ac.uk/lectures-and-events/devolution-and-the-territorial-constitution Ivor Stoughton (talk) 13:43, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
Angus has made the most astute and constructive contribution to this "debate" (sic) for donkeys years. I duly expect it to be savaged by the usual suspects who know zilch about the topic of the UK's constitution. That in itself ought to be a pointer to intelligent Users to step in now and over-ride the dafties. However, this being Misplaced Pages, I duly expect the UK lede and article to be a hilarious mess for many happy years to come. --Mais oui! (talk) 04:01, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
The next step?It seems to me that we are at something of an impasse, in relation to the specific issue of how the introductory section describes the UK and E/S/W/NI. Take these statements (they are not suggestions for the wording of the text, just principles for consideration):
It seems to me that some editors prefer using wording type 1, and some prefer wording type 2, but there is less support for wording type 3 or type 4. Is that a fair assessment, taking into account all the discussion above? And, if it is a fair assessment, is there any point in continuing the debate between the two approaches (1 and 2) here, or is there a case for requesting some form of mediation involving uninvolved editors? Ghmyrtle (talk) 12:21, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
You missed an option. 5) The United Kingdom is a sovereign state and country comprising of EWSNI. (ie UK = Country, but we do not call ESWNI countries). I support option 1 though, with it clearly stating the UK is a country and sovereign state. Along with saying EWSNI are countries, we may as well say this as the other articles describe them as countries but it is good if it includes an explanation like initially formed...... etc BritishWatcher (talk) 17:44, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
I am now quite confused by all this. Is there a specific proposal now on the table for discussion? Personally I would not object if the article were left as it stands now, though it's obviously not ideal. -- Alarics (talk) 08:03, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
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FAQ says that the United Kingdom is a country NOT a "Sovereign state"
Q1: Is the United Kingdom a "country"? A1: Reliable sources support the view that the United Kingdom is a single country. This view is shared with other major reputable encyclopedias. There has been a long-standing consensus to describe the UK in this way.Chaosname 10:51, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- The UK is a country; it is also a sovereign state. There's no need for FAQ to say that it's a sovereign state, because that is unquestionable and presumably unquestioned. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:57, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) FAQ does not say the United Kingdom is a country NOT a "Sovereign state". It just says it's a country. Country and sovereign state are not synonyms. But neither are they mutually exclusive. A territory may be a country but not be a sovereign state. And a territory may be a country and a sovereign state. Daicaregos (talk) 11:04, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
What i meant was that in the entry should say that United kingdom of great britain is a country not (United Kingdom of great britain is a sovereign state)Chaosname 11:20, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- Can I suggest that you read the extremely long discussion higher up this page, all about the wording of the introductory paragraphs, and then reconsider your position. Ghmyrtle (talk) 11:26, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- The UK is a country. England, Wales, Scotland & Northern Ireland are constituent countries. GoodDay (talk) 18:31, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- Is 'constituent' an adjective in the above statement? Fishiehelper2 (talk) 18:59, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
e/c lol! I wonder where "constituent country" is used on Misplaced Pages? There are plenty of sources for it and the UK 'countries', but it's one of those terms that is only used in certain circumstances - ie when it needs to be. Nobody uses it without very-specificaly referencing the UK - ie nobody says "Scotland is a constituent country (full stop)."! It is only used to clarify in situations like this very article. Except on Misplaced Pages, where it isn't allowed to be used. Matt Lewis (talk) 20:28, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- So the answer to the question is? Let me repeat it: Is 'constituent' as used in the phrase 'constituent country' an adjective? Cheers Fishiehelper2 (talk) 21:05, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
- Of course "constituent" is an adjective here. "country" is 'noun modifier' in this use of "constituent country" - but noun modifiers are still nouns, they just modify another noun (in this case, the UK). A noun modifier is a noun that is part of something else: they don't have values attatched to them though. In the UK we happen to have countries that are part of a single subsuming country.
- "constituent country/ies (of the UK)" is basically another way of putting "UK country" (noun/noun modifier) - the two nouns just happen in this case to be different occurences of the same value: a country.
- Scotland is a constituent (adj).. country (nm).. of the UK (n).
- Scotland isn't a "constituent country" full-stop (ie without the "of the UK").
- The UK countries are "constituent countries".. but always of the UK.
- Just look at how the sources use it: "constituent counties" and "united Kingdom" Google search, and "constituent countries" and "uk" Google search.
- You could even pipelink each word to their respective articles, like with the 'Sovereign country' example above (though I do personally find doing this a bit extreme, but 'needs must' if this is the best way forwards). Perhaps this common usage could be better described in the constituent country article. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:24, 27 May 2011 (UTC)
imo it's best described as four countries within one nation (aka sovereign state). Governments and boundaries come and go, but countries are more permanent concepts encompassing a much longer history. "There will always be an an England" - and Scotland and Wales and Ireland (Northern or otherwise) - and the UK is only the current sovereign state. Some conflate the definitions of 'country' and 'nation', but the point is that one exists on a more permanent basis than the other. I think we can all agree that the UK is the current 'sovereign state' and go from there. England, Wales and Scotland have been sovereign states in the past, and they're clearly considered separate and unique countries (in the sense of area and people). Northern Ireland might be considered its own country, or part of Ireland. Is that the real issue here? Flatterworld (talk)
Edits by AgadaUrbanit, DeCausa and Ghmyrtle made this morning (28 May 2011)
As this talkpage is a nightmare to navigate, I thought it would be helpful to just draw together and highlight the edits made this morning, and the reason for them. Ghmyrtle and myself yesterday (subsequently concurred with by Alarics) were taking the view that the discussion was not heading to any sort of resolution and maybe we should just settle for what is currently in the Lead (which had been stable for a couple of months) even though it's not ideal. It was thought, however, that the footnote should come out and be put in some form in the main body of the article, combined with the etymology section I proposed (part of my suggested revisions of the History section set out in this thread: Talk:United Kingdom#History section - proposal for changes). I therefore posted a draft sub-section. AgadaUrbanit then made a bold edit putting it in. I then added the draft of the new History section (since the etymology proposal makes for a lot of repetition without it) and Ghmyrtle then removed the footnote. Although the new sections will clearly need tweaking, the hope is these additions provide enough context to enable the Lead to be now left alone. I hope this can receive consensus support. DeCausa (talk) 10:01, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- What else can you do? There are certain editors here, who are more concerned about their own preferences, then the article itself. Not accepting "United Kingdom is a sovereign state, consisting of England, Northern Ireland, Scotland and Wales", was disruption on their part. Each & everytime, this discussion flair ups, it's own their stubborn heads. GoodDay (talk) 10:24, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- There you go again, GoodDay, making sweeping, unsubstantiated comments about other editors' purported motives without evidence to back up your claims save that they happen to disagree with you. Regarding stbborn heads, err..... your constant monotonous refrain on this talk page speaks volumes.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 11:00, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Please stop this childish squabbling. We have arrived at a compromise solution that surely most people can live with. Let us leave it at that. -- Alarics (talk) 11:19, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Good move guys - thanks --Snowded 11:35, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Please stop this childish squabbling. We have arrived at a compromise solution that surely most people can live with. Let us leave it at that. -- Alarics (talk) 11:19, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- There you go again, GoodDay, making sweeping, unsubstantiated comments about other editors' purported motives without evidence to back up your claims save that they happen to disagree with you. Regarding stbborn heads, err..... your constant monotonous refrain on this talk page speaks volumes.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 11:00, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- A request: let's keep this thread short and to the point. Just indicate whether you can live with this or not. No need for rebuttals, smart comments etc that's all been done to death (including by me). DeCausa (talk) 12:17, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. -- Alarics (talk) 12:53, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- No -- GoodDay (talk) 13:10, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. -- DeCausa (talk) 13:23, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. -- Daicaregos (talk) 14:06, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. -- Rangoon11 (talk) 14:07, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- --Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 14:09, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- --SabreBD (talk) 14:26, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes-- Carson101 (talk) 14:52, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes --Snowded 15:03, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- Bjmullan (talk) 15:12, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- Mabuska 16:54, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- Ghmyrtle (talk) 16:59, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- Fmph (talk) 18:28, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- MilborneOne (talk) 18:56, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- AgadaUrbanit (talk) 20:39, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes -- AJRG (talk) 20:52, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes.. -- to losing the footnote - fine (that was my own issue with it, though it's not a great read I agree). However I do see issues with the new section, but I'm taking a few days off now, so I'll contribute when I return if need be. At least the offending line is out of the introduction - but there still needs to be work on it, per all my comments above. Quotes can be useful, but they don't patch every issue: and here we have a catagorical statement (in the "can") - within quotes! (as if a pop star said it about his love life!) But at least the stuff is in the article now, and I'm sure the right prose will eventually sort things out. Matt Lewis (talk) 21:29, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- No --- England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland are not countries. They are Administrative divisions of the United Kingdom, which is point-in-fact, the country. The UK is not a mini-European Union which is essentially the spirit-of-text ... as it stands now. This smacks of Abuse of notation. Anyways, I shall wait until this flairs up again, and it will. It will. ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 01:51, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes - Im a bit late but i do support this solution. The wording is not ideal but its a reasonable compromise to maintain a stable article. Although i do think a sentence or two on nationality should also be dealt with in that section, explaining people can identify as English, Scottish, Welsh, Irish, Northern Irish and British, but legally all from UK are of British nationality / citizenship and the situation with Northern Ireland where they can be Irish citizens too. BritishWatcher (talk) 17:12, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I support those suggestions.Rangoon11 (talk) 18:09, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I've gone ahead and added in a couple of sentences. DeCausa (talk) 12:25, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Summary It seems that most of the major contributors to this lengthy debate have given there support to the recent changes. There are a few who are unhappy with what we have at the moment, but it seems that we have a general and wide consensus. Mentions in dispatches particularly to Ghmyrtle and DeCausa for patience above and beyond the call of duty. If an editor has further points on this part of the article please open up a new thread below and keep in mind the hard fought consensus we have here. Everyone else bookmark this when it goes to the archives, I expect it will rise again.--SabreBD (talk) 09:46, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I've gripes about it, but since it's 18-2 in favour, I'm not interested in continuing the discussion. 'Til next time. GoodDay (talk) 10:19, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I support those suggestions.Rangoon11 (talk) 18:09, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- People need to seriously stop calling what goes on at this talk page the forming of 'consensus'. This lastest round included, it is at best just a series of long and rambling discussions involing the 'regulars' making and repeating ad nauseum the same largely POV points, and which always bizarrely seems to end in a vote or other exercise in 1-member-1-voice form of accounting. There's not a single thing about that process which is encouraged on Misplaced Pages if the goal is to actually form WP:CONSENSUS. The fact that as ever the process has not a single element of independent review or summarisation, and has been as ever completely lite on policy, guideline or reference to common good practice on other peer reviewed articles, only underscores that. And right to the end we still bizarrely had claims that keeping the footnote was acceptable, due to the rather obvious fact that these unproductive rambling sessions more often than not end up with no discernable support for doing anything, so leaving the article in a state in which it could never become Featured because it's such a giant policy violating crap bag, somehow turns out to be the 'consensus'. It cannot be so, by definition. The current version still has major issues, but at least they are now out in the open in plain text, and can at some point be addressed cluefully and independently and without tedious claims that it is the 'consensus' version that can be repeatedly edit warred over to maintain. It's not, and thus it cannot. MickMacNee (talk) 11:52, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
I think we can mark this thread as closed. Any objection? DeCausa (talk) 17:52, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- It depends what you intend to show by closing it. If you mention the c-word, I will of course object. If you want to close it without having to respond to the above post, I suggest you use some other wording. MickMacNee (talk) 18:38, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Everyone but you can see there's consensus. So I don't care what it says. DeCausa (talk) 18:49, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- But I appear to be the only person who has ever seemingly read WP:CON before I feel able to claim to see a 'consensus'. You can not care about whatever you like, you don't care what WP:CON says just like you didn't care what the MoS and WP:NPOV said about the use footnotes. This is Misplaced Pages, and such willfull ingorance of basic good practises will only get you so far. And tinkering with pages that will never be Featured, is it, I'm afraid. I'm almost tempted to put this up for FAR, to demonstrate what would happen to it. It would be ripped apart. MickMacNee (talk) 18:54, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Everyone but you can see there's consensus. So I don't care what it says. DeCausa (talk) 18:49, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Anyways...I'm going to mark this closed (without comment) unless anyone else objects. DeCausa (talk) 19:05, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- ah, I was forgetting you have to include a summary when you close. Well, I'm not going to get into a childish squabble with you about the summary, and SabreBD has already provided a sumary anyway. I don't think anyone can be bothered to respond to your last posts, so this will just be archived in due course. DeCausa (talk) 20:51, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
"An archipelago"
This is the language presently in the lede: "The country is part of an archipelago that includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands". I'm concerned this is a bit misleading. The country includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands. The archipelago in question includes rather more geography. Doesn't this sentence suggest that the archpelago is coterminous with the territory of the country? Ivor Stoughton (talk) 22:12, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Which part of is part of do you find misleading? AJRG (talk) 22:40, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- What I find misleading is that it says the country is part of an archipelago, then goes on to describe the archipelago in geographic terms that would be accurate for the country, but conveys oddly incomplete information about the archipelago. A similar-in-kind statement would be "Scotland is a country that is part of the island of Great Britain, which includes the northern-third of the island of Great Britain."Ivor Stoughton (talk) 23:51, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- It would be easier if we used British Isles. GoodDay (talk) 23:10, 28 May 2011 (UTC)
- Well, that is the name of the archipelago in question, yes. So we could say: "The country occupies the major part of the British Isles archipelago, including the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands." We could also leave the archipelago out all together and simply say "The country includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands." Ivor Stoughton (talk) 01:48, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Changing "that" to "and" in the current text would resolve the issue. I would advise against adding the term "British Isles". Ghmyrtle (talk) 07:39, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. Although, it's always sounded a rather odd statement, and not particularly useful/notable. What's wrong with just saying "The country comprises the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller adjacent islands".
- That looks OK to me. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:17, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- OK with me. AJRG (talk) 10:25, 29 May 2011 (UTC)U
- Yes, that would solve the problem. If we decide to keep "archipelago" per Daicaregos below we should hyperlink to the specific archipelago rather than to the article describing what an archipelago is in general terms.Ivor Stoughton (talk) 17:06, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- OK with me. AJRG (talk) 10:25, 29 May 2011 (UTC)U
- That looks OK to me. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:17, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes. Although, it's always sounded a rather odd statement, and not particularly useful/notable. What's wrong with just saying "The country comprises the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller adjacent islands".
It would be a shame to lose that information. It could be moved into the preceding sentence, where it would make more sense: The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland (commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a sovereign state that is part of an archipelago off the north-western coast of continental Europe. Daicaregos (talk) 10:53, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I disagree. A state is a political construct and an archipelago is a physical feature, and I think it would be better if the two were not combined in a single sentence. The text refers to islands, and I don't think it adds much information to use the particular term "archipelago". Ghmyrtle (talk) 11:37, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- The north-western coast of continental Europe is a physical feature, not a political construct, but the two have been combined already in the same sentence. Daicaregos (talk) 11:42, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Archipelago - whilst technically correct - just sounds slightly OTT to describe something that is adequately covered anyway by the text in the rest of the sentence. I assume it went in at some point in lieu of the-islands-that-must-not-be-named.
- "Archipelago" reads like a feeble attempt to avoid offending certain editors & readers. The 'pedia frowns on practicing censurship, so we should use "British Isles". GoodDay (talk) 12:48, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Archipelago - whilst technically correct - just sounds slightly OTT to describe something that is adequately covered anyway by the text in the rest of the sentence. I assume it went in at some point in lieu of the-islands-that-must-not-be-named.
- The north-western coast of continental Europe is a physical feature, not a political construct, but the two have been combined already in the same sentence. Daicaregos (talk) 11:42, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
We should actually state what the archipelago is called.. Its the British Isles. However there has been a crusade on wikipedia to rid the term by certain editors. BritishWatcher (talk) 17:00, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
"The UK is part of an archipelago known as the British Isles." — Preceding unsigned comment added by Flatterworld (talk • contribs) 19:14, 29 May 2011
I would suggest: ''The country is part of an archipelago and includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands." Ivor Stoughton (talk) 21:57, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- That seems alright to me, though I am not altogether sure why we need to use the word 'archipelago' at all. Does it really add anything useful? -- Alarics (talk) 22:09, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I don't like linking from "archipelago" to "British Isles", which seems to contravene WP:EGG - that is, someone clicking on the word "archipelago" would expect to go to an article about archipelagos in general rather than one about a specific one. So, I think I will change that. But personally I see no benefit in linking to either archipelago or British Isles in the introduction. It may be necessary to refer to "BI" in the Terminology section. Ghmyrtle (talk) 22:19, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Don't hide "British Isles" via pipe-link, as it's irrelevant as to wheter it offends anyone. GoodDay (talk) 22:16, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Not sure that WP:EGG weighs against linking to the specific archipelago, as the context of the usage in the sentence very obviously refers to a specific archipelago, rather than archipelagos in general. The policy seems to be that a reader "should not be surprised" after clicking on a link. Do you mean to suggest that a reader would be surprised when, after reading that the U.K. is "part of an archipelago", they clicked on a link that took them to the article about the archipelago of which the U.K. is part? But it does seem odd that the BI aren't mentioned in an article about the U.K. Surely we are concerned first with accuracy, not whether accurate information "offends anyone"? Ivor Stoughton (talk) 22:52, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- I agree, it is bizarre not to mention the British Isles anywhere. The term exists whether anyone likes it or not, and it has a clearly recognised meaning which is in perfectly respectable use. It is our job to document what is the case, not what some people would like to think is the case. -- Alarics (talk) 22:58, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- My suggestion would be to remove the unnecessary mention of the archipelago from the introduction (which already mentions "island.. off the.. coast of Europe"), and to refer to the "British Isles" terminology question in the Terminology section. That would give all the necessary information. I have made no mention anywhere of anything "offending" anyone - that was GoodDay's unsubstantiated allegation. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:37, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. Ghmyrtle, would you mind posting a draft for the archipelago change? AgadaUrbanit (talk) 10:11, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I would change the second sentence to read: "The country includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands." Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:26, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- That seems fine to me. Not sure that the Terminology section is the place to refer to the British Isles. As it is a geographical term, I think the Geography section would be the place to do it. Ivor Stoughton (talk) 14:12, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I would change the second sentence to read: "The country includes the island of Great Britain, the north-eastern part of the island of Ireland and many smaller islands." Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:26, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Sounds good to me. Ghmyrtle, would you mind posting a draft for the archipelago change? AgadaUrbanit (talk) 10:11, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- My suggestion would be to remove the unnecessary mention of the archipelago from the introduction (which already mentions "island.. off the.. coast of Europe"), and to refer to the "British Isles" terminology question in the Terminology section. That would give all the necessary information. I have made no mention anywhere of anything "offending" anyone - that was GoodDay's unsubstantiated allegation. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:37, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I agree, it is bizarre not to mention the British Isles anywhere. The term exists whether anyone likes it or not, and it has a clearly recognised meaning which is in perfectly respectable use. It is our job to document what is the case, not what some people would like to think is the case. -- Alarics (talk) 22:58, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
- Not sure that WP:EGG weighs against linking to the specific archipelago, as the context of the usage in the sentence very obviously refers to a specific archipelago, rather than archipelagos in general. The policy seems to be that a reader "should not be surprised" after clicking on a link. Do you mean to suggest that a reader would be surprised when, after reading that the U.K. is "part of an archipelago", they clicked on a link that took them to the article about the archipelago of which the U.K. is part? But it does seem odd that the BI aren't mentioned in an article about the U.K. Surely we are concerned first with accuracy, not whether accurate information "offends anyone"? Ivor Stoughton (talk) 22:52, 29 May 2011 (UTC)
Great Britain
An IP tried to insert "Great Britain" as one of the alternative names for the UK, which was reverted. And I put into the new terminology section that Great Britain is never used to mean the UK. However, I'm having second thoughts on that. I think it is quite clear that there is substantial foreign (particularly American) usage of Great Britain to mean the UK. Merriam-Webster has GB as a synonym for UK. Also, footnote 6 in Terminology of the British Isles, curiously supposedly supporting the statement that GB is never UK says "Great Britain", New Oxford American Dictionary: "Great Britain: England, Wales, and Scotland considered as a unit. The name is also often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom." There is also the issue of the Olympics team - although that is explicable because pre-2004, the GB Olympic Association didn't technically include Northern Ireland. So that's a just a historical hangover.
I think we need to recognize this usage, and explain it as it is something that clearly crops up. I suggest the following change in the new Terminology section:
- The United Kingdom is often referred to by the short-form name of Britain. Great Britain normally refers only to England, Scotland and Wales, and, particularly in the UK, is not favoured as an alternative name for the United Kingdom. (REF:Guardian Unlimited Style Guide, Guardian News and Media Limited, 2007). However, some foreign usage, particularly in the United States, uses Great Britain as a synonym for the United Kingdom (REF: Merriam-Webster.) (REF:New Oxford American Dictionary: "Great Britain: England, Wales, and Scotland considered as a unit. The name is also often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom.")
- In addition, Britain is also sometimes used as an abbreviation for Great Britain, meaning only England, Scotland and Wales,(REF:ref name= citizenship/) as in the 1947-1997 nationalised corporation British Railways, which never included Northern Ireland.
DeCausa (talk) 10:38, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I don't have sources to proove it, but I've often heard the United Kingdom called Great Britain. GoodDay (talk) 10:48, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Clearly the statement that Great Britain is never used is wrong but it not as common as it was in the 19th Century. Certainly Obama in his recent interview with the BBC used the term Great Britain three times rather then the United Kingdom. But as DeCausa has said this just needs to be explained in the terminology section. Not convinced that British Railways was so named because it covered only the island of Great Britain it was just like most thing associated with the UK and uses the description British. MilborneOne (talk) 11:02, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, there's the issue that "British" can mean pertaining to the United Kingdom. DeCausa (talk) 11:05, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- The BBC style guide (Great Britain) states that Great Britain is a geographical term. It also stresses the need to be accurate, particularly when discussing matters relating to only England, Scotland and Wales. Daicaregos (talk) 11:13, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Dont disagree that it the current view about usage of Great Britain but you cant go back and change history or stop foreigners like US presidents from using the term. As has been suggested this just needs to be explained in the terminology section. MilborneOne (talk) 11:18, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Agreed. Also, Britain meaning UK is not "accurate" but it is widely accepted and sanctioned by governmental use. There's never any strict right and wrong in this, we just need to record usage. DeCausa (talk) 11:21, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I've gone ahead a made a bold edit (and added something on national identity as well as discussed above) DeCausa (talk) 12:23, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Google Books has the author of one of those sources (Life in the United Kingdom: a journey to citizenship) as "Great Britain, Home Office". Wonder if the Home Office appreciated the irony. Daicaregos (talk) 12:50, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Dont disagree that it the current view about usage of Great Britain but you cant go back and change history or stop foreigners like US presidents from using the term. As has been suggested this just needs to be explained in the terminology section. MilborneOne (talk) 11:18, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- The BBC style guide (Great Britain) states that Great Britain is a geographical term. It also stresses the need to be accurate, particularly when discussing matters relating to only England, Scotland and Wales. Daicaregos (talk) 11:13, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, there's the issue that "British" can mean pertaining to the United Kingdom. DeCausa (talk) 11:05, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Clearly the statement that Great Britain is never used is wrong but it not as common as it was in the 19th Century. Certainly Obama in his recent interview with the BBC used the term Great Britain three times rather then the United Kingdom. But as DeCausa has said this just needs to be explained in the terminology section. Not convinced that British Railways was so named because it covered only the island of Great Britain it was just like most thing associated with the UK and uses the description British. MilborneOne (talk) 11:02, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- "I've often heard the United Kingdom called Great Britain" says GoodDay. I haven't often, but I have very occasionally - but only by people who don't know what they are talking about. Do we have to validate everybody who ever says anything, however incorrect? The fact that officially "Great Britain" means England, Scotland and Wales is surely shown once and for all by the fact that the full proper title of the UK is "The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland". If "Great Britain" already included Northern Ireland, there would be no need to put "and Northern Ireland". -- Alarics (talk) 19:57, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- You could say the same thing about Britain, which after all is just a contraction of GB - it's just more widely used in the UK. I think that 2 dictionaries equating UK with GB and widespread "incorrect" use in the US justifies a mention. DeCausa (talk) 20:33, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- "I've often heard the United Kingdom called Great Britain" says GoodDay. I haven't often, but I have very occasionally - but only by people who don't know what they are talking about. Do we have to validate everybody who ever says anything, however incorrect? The fact that officially "Great Britain" means England, Scotland and Wales is surely shown once and for all by the fact that the full proper title of the UK is "The United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland". If "Great Britain" already included Northern Ireland, there would be no need to put "and Northern Ireland". -- Alarics (talk) 19:57, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think the OED puts it quite well:
- "Great Britain: England, Wales, and Scotland considered as a unit. The name is also often used loosely to refer to the United Kingdom."
- Yes, it's inaccurate, but it is used "loosely" ... but then so too is Britain — which is the co-terminous island (contrary to our article, but that's another matter). --RA (talk) 20:36, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
Couple of comments
Just reading the first sentence there are two footnotes included for the statement: '(commonly known as the United Kingdom, the UK or Britain) is a sovereign state' - first of all one of the links is dead and should probably be removed for that reason, but also as per WP:REF footnotes are only needed for 'adding or restoring material that is challenged or likely to be challenged' - none of that information should be remotely contentious. Thus I propose that these two footnotes are removed as this will also improve the accessibility and simplicity of the page.
Secondly the statement 'Northern Ireland is the only part of the UK that shares a land border with another sovereign state—the Republic of Ireland' is similarly uncontentious but is footnoted not once but twice, and one of the footnotes regards to the proposal for border checks which seems unnecessarily politically provocative for what is a simple matter of geography. Thus these two footnotes should also be removed.
I don't think these proposed edits should be particularly controversial but I think that they could help improve the look and read of the page.
Trumpkin (talk) 15:10, 30 May 2011 (UTC)
- Now that we have the section on Etymology and Terminology, which covers those points, it does seem to me that those footnotes can be removed from the introduction, and the references added to the new section as appropriate - but I haven't checked the details of what the refs say, and we need to make sure that they support the terminology used in the text. Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:10, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- One link is dead and the other is to a page on the EU website about EU institutions - I can't figure out its relevance. Probably both can just go. DeCausa (talk) 09:41, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Much better, thanks. Trumpkin (talk) 00:13, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- One link is dead and the other is to a page on the EU website about EU institutions - I can't figure out its relevance. Probably both can just go. DeCausa (talk) 09:41, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
232K bytes?
The article is over double the recommended length. I realise I've added to it with the etymology and the pre-Union history sections, but is there any way we can take an overall look at this? There does seem to be some sections that have, arguably, disproportionate length/detail, and personally I don't believe the history section comes into that category. Some observations:
- There's nearly 100K bytes (almost half the article) in Culture and Demographics. I haven't made detailed comparisons with other country articles, but superficially that seems nuch heavier than most. It certainly seems excessive when compared to the sections on the Economy and Foreign Affairs. Because of that, the article appears, IMHO, "out of balance".
- Administrative Divisions seems to have far too much detail. I can't imagine that there are many general readers who have an interest in Newport being a unitary authority.
- Dependencies should be a couple of lines since they're not actually part of the UK.
- The last issue is trickier, and I'm sure it's been discussed before. In many sections there's separate parts on each of the four countries, which is fine. But it appears to have driven up the byte count because the notability is at the E/W/NI/S level rather than the UK level. In particular, Religion, Education, Literature, Admin. Divisions, Sport and Geography seem to each get unnecessary length becxause of it. It's not a question of omitting the varying issues from each of the countries, but the level of depth.
To be honest, I'm not expecting much to come out of this, but I thought I would just toss it out to see if there was any appetite to do anything about it. DeCausa (talk) 13:13, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- The country articles are a bit of a special case and there are many that are longer than this one. Having said that I do agree that some of the sections are overlong. For me, the Sport, Media, Religion, Education, Migration, Economy (the opening block of text) and Administrative divisions sections/sub-sections are all about a paragraph too long (Sport is actually about two paragraphs too long in my view). I also agree that trying to name check all parts of the UK has caused problems in some sections, notably Literature (although I am reasonably happy with the overall length of that section). However I think these issues are best dealt with section by section, rather than in a single push to reduce the number of words in the whole article. I should add that I agree that the History section is fine for length, in fact I would personally like to see it expanded further - it is far shorter than those of comparable countries and still misses out a lot of things that it really should include. Rangoon11 (talk) 13:28, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes, I agree on history. Just as a comparison I've taken a look at Germany which is an FA (and with at least as long/complex/rich history, culture etc). It's at 118KB, with 25KB on history (UK, 23KB) but 36KB on Demographics and culture (compared to the UK's 100KB). I've also just checked through all the FA country articles and they are mostly in the 100KB-140KB range with the highest at 150kb. DeCausa (talk) 13:40, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It is my default position to agree with pretty much anything that might make the article a little bit more concise, although I also would like to avoid reducing the history section. I agree that sometimes it is the product of basically having to describe four systems. My other suggestions would mainly be in the culture section. There is just too much of an attempt to list famous people here, whereas in an article like this a few leading lights to illustrate major movements would be more productive. The list of scientific inventions is a case in point but there are others. There are links to other articles and anyone interested can go to those pages. However, no doubt there will be objections since different editors place different emphasis on the sections.--SabreBD (talk) 14:58, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It seems to me that we should prioritise the information that needs to be in this article rather than other articles, while seeking to keep a proper balance. We should summarise shared history here, for instance, but pre-union history is best summarised in the articles on the history of each of the countries. Bear in mind that other (sovereign) countries, generally, don't have the in-depth articles on each of the (constituent) countries that we have. In principle, areas for reduction should be those sections where there are reasonable to good separate articles on "X in the UK", "Y in England", "Z in Scotland", etc. If the section on topic "Q" contains an unnecessarily long paragraph on, say "Q in Wales", and we have a separate article on "Q in Wales", then the section here should be reduced. I'm sure that's broadly the principle you're adopting anyway. Ghmyrtle (talk) 15:11, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- File size: 901 kB - Have come across this problem before. The simplistic solution would be to remove all the listed names in the Culture section. This is a main article we have no need at all to list ever famous person that is from the UK. As seen at Canada#Culture the section can be greatly reduced if you eliminate all those names. Instead of a list of names on this page why not link to the pages that is a list.Moxy (talk) 15:14, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Names of significant people are very important and their bulk removal would not just be simplistic but completely wrong and would anyhow make little difference to overall length. The Literature section is a possible exception to this, where there has been too much effort to name check authors from all parts of the UK. Bloated sections such as Sport - twice as long as it should be in my view - Media, Religion, Education, Migration and Administrative divisions should be cut back, offering scope for a substantial reduction in the total size of the article. However I do feel that this is best done section by section, in fact I feel that to be the only practical approach. Rangoon11 (talk) 15:56, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think we can have a blanket removal. For example, in the literature section it would be odd not to mention Shakespeare, but do we really need to note that Marlowe and Jonson "added depth". Surely it would be best just to say Shakespeare is the most famous product of the Renaissance in English drama. I concur that this can only done case by case - although there can be general principles.--SabreBD (talk) 16:17, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes that particular sentence is banal and meaningless. However I would like to see the whole section restructured, with the 'Welsh' and 'Scottish' paragraphs removed and reference to the most notable Scottish and Welsh authors included in the current 'English' para - I would only keep Arthur Conan Doyle, Robert Louis Stevenson, Robert Burns, Dylan Thomas and the reference to King Arthur, all the rest would go. Rangoon11 (talk) 16:29, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think the question first is whether there is recognition/desire for approx 100kb to come out of the article to bring it within the FA range, or not. If not, then that's fine the odd trim here or there will always improve readibility. If there is such a recognition/desire, then something much more systematic and swingeing will be needed. DeCausa (talk) 16:36, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- For me that is too prescriptive an approach and also too specific in terms of amount to be reduced. An attempt to bulk remove content will in any case get immediately bogged down, will make discussion on this page impossible, and is not, in my view, the right way to deal with issues which require careful consideration. Let's take it section by section. In my view the right place to start is Sport, which is where the greatest single amount of bloat exists. Rangoon11 (talk) 16:46, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Well, my view of Sport is that only the first para is needed. And while we're in that part of the article I think we can get rid of the whole Symbols section. DeCausa (talk) 16:54, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- For me that is too prescriptive an approach and also too specific in terms of amount to be reduced. An attempt to bulk remove content will in any case get immediately bogged down, will make discussion on this page impossible, and is not, in my view, the right way to deal with issues which require careful consideration. Let's take it section by section. In my view the right place to start is Sport, which is where the greatest single amount of bloat exists. Rangoon11 (talk) 16:46, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think the question first is whether there is recognition/desire for approx 100kb to come out of the article to bring it within the FA range, or not. If not, then that's fine the odd trim here or there will always improve readibility. If there is such a recognition/desire, then something much more systematic and swingeing will be needed. DeCausa (talk) 16:36, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes that particular sentence is banal and meaningless. However I would like to see the whole section restructured, with the 'Welsh' and 'Scottish' paragraphs removed and reference to the most notable Scottish and Welsh authors included in the current 'English' para - I would only keep Arthur Conan Doyle, Robert Louis Stevenson, Robert Burns, Dylan Thomas and the reference to King Arthur, all the rest would go. Rangoon11 (talk) 16:29, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think we can have a blanket removal. For example, in the literature section it would be odd not to mention Shakespeare, but do we really need to note that Marlowe and Jonson "added depth". Surely it would be best just to say Shakespeare is the most famous product of the Renaissance in English drama. I concur that this can only done case by case - although there can be general principles.--SabreBD (talk) 16:17, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Names of significant people are very important and their bulk removal would not just be simplistic but completely wrong and would anyhow make little difference to overall length. The Literature section is a possible exception to this, where there has been too much effort to name check authors from all parts of the UK. Bloated sections such as Sport - twice as long as it should be in my view - Media, Religion, Education, Migration and Administrative divisions should be cut back, offering scope for a substantial reduction in the total size of the article. However I do feel that this is best done section by section, in fact I feel that to be the only practical approach. Rangoon11 (talk) 15:56, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- File size: 901 kB - Have come across this problem before. The simplistic solution would be to remove all the listed names in the Culture section. This is a main article we have no need at all to list ever famous person that is from the UK. As seen at Canada#Culture the section can be greatly reduced if you eliminate all those names. Instead of a list of names on this page why not link to the pages that is a list.Moxy (talk) 15:14, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It seems to me that we should prioritise the information that needs to be in this article rather than other articles, while seeking to keep a proper balance. We should summarise shared history here, for instance, but pre-union history is best summarised in the articles on the history of each of the countries. Bear in mind that other (sovereign) countries, generally, don't have the in-depth articles on each of the (constituent) countries that we have. In principle, areas for reduction should be those sections where there are reasonable to good separate articles on "X in the UK", "Y in England", "Z in Scotland", etc. If the section on topic "Q" contains an unnecessarily long paragraph on, say "Q in Wales", and we have a separate article on "Q in Wales", then the section here should be reduced. I'm sure that's broadly the principle you're adopting anyway. Ghmyrtle (talk) 15:11, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It is my default position to agree with pretty much anything that might make the article a little bit more concise, although I also would like to avoid reducing the history section. I agree that sometimes it is the product of basically having to describe four systems. My other suggestions would mainly be in the culture section. There is just too much of an attempt to list famous people here, whereas in an article like this a few leading lights to illustrate major movements would be more productive. The list of scientific inventions is a case in point but there are others. There are links to other articles and anyone interested can go to those pages. However, no doubt there will be objections since different editors place different emphasis on the sections.--SabreBD (talk) 14:58, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
I support the general principle of trimming the article down to essentials. It is far too long at present. Several of the ideas mooted above seem sensible to me. -- Alarics (talk) 07:34, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Let's hope something comes out of this. Many good ideas have been brought forward above. The Germany article recently lost about 40KB during FAR, a good example of how country articles can be reduced. The idea of removing the lists is a good one, especially as they remain unsourced. Perhaps we should aim for all subsections being about 2 paragraphs long. I remember when the sports section had level three headers for different sports... sigh. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 07:43, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- It's not totally clear to me from some of the comments whether the FA criteria is something everyone thinks should be pursued. I suspect with the way things work on this page, even if that is accepted, it's going to be a painful process to reach agreement. I'm not sure of the WP processes involved, but is it possible to have a GA Review, and get some outside "objective" help/suggestions/perspectives on this (and I'm sure other issues)? DeCausa (talk) 08:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Isn't FA a step too far? It should reach GA first. Peer review would be a good start. Daicaregos (talk) 09:19, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Whatever we do is doing to be painful and tedious for those involved, and I'm not sure any process will ever reach "agreement" - there are always going to be some editors unhappy about the inclusion or exclusion of particular words like "country" or "archipelago", or the emphasis placed on some aspects at the expense of others. In principle, there's no harm, in my view, in getting outside views. Personally I've never been very impressed by the GA process (let alone FA), but if that's the way to go (and obviously has been used before, most recently here) we should try it and be prepared for the flak from all sides. Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:26, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you just want some advice before/instead of going to GA or FA then we could go to Misplaced Pages:Peer review, but don't expect a response soon, there is quite a backlog. Personally I would like to get this article to FA status, despite my faith in these processes often being shaken by bizarre comments and results, basically because readers need some way of distinguishing which articles are reliable. It might also provide a focus amid all the inevitable differences of opinion.--SabreBD (talk) 09:39, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Just to test the water I've done a bold cut-back on Religion, and is what I think we should do on much of culture and demographics. DeCausa (talk) 10:04, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- GA and FA requirements are quite similar, and obviously GA is a stepping stone to FA, so aiming for FA requirements is fine as a goal. GA is more subjective anyway, you just have to please one random GA reviewer. FA's go through a vote with input from many FA regulars who have experience. I like the religion cut, although single paragraph subsections are quite unprofessional. I think I've moved most religion information to the main article before, but it's worth double checking. Shifting most of this information to the main articles would definitely be useful for them. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 10:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- What was interesting in that (for me anyway) is that I actually had to add information to what was there before. There was not much in the way of overall UK percentages or a general sourced statement on the relatively secular nature of UK society. Wood for trees. (sorry for being unprofessionalon the single paragraph!) DeCausa (talk) 10:21, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, Rangoon reverted it. I did a few other sections and no doubt they'll get reverted as well. I guess the article will stay bloated. DeCausa (talk) 11:27, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is never going to be easy, but, inevitably we cant run at this - other editors need to be carried with the process. Inevitably we will end up discussing each section.--SabreBD (talk) 11:45, 1 June 2011 (UTC
- Quite. Any major change will be a long and painful process. The question is whether there are enough editors sufficiently motivated to improve it radically, via the necessary but extremely tedious and time-consuming process of getting agreement to every wording change. It's almost worthwhile someone starting the whole article anew, producing a shorter version in a sandbox, and then seeing whether it does the job better than the current version. Ghmyrtle (talk) 11:51, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I doubt a shorter sandbox will receive much support. We have two sections below which discuss individual sections. Should we start with those? Subsection by subsection? Chipmunkdavis (talk) 14:00, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Quite. Any major change will be a long and painful process. The question is whether there are enough editors sufficiently motivated to improve it radically, via the necessary but extremely tedious and time-consuming process of getting agreement to every wording change. It's almost worthwhile someone starting the whole article anew, producing a shorter version in a sandbox, and then seeing whether it does the job better than the current version. Ghmyrtle (talk) 11:51, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is never going to be easy, but, inevitably we cant run at this - other editors need to be carried with the process. Inevitably we will end up discussing each section.--SabreBD (talk) 11:45, 1 June 2011 (UTC
- GA and FA requirements are quite similar, and obviously GA is a stepping stone to FA, so aiming for FA requirements is fine as a goal. GA is more subjective anyway, you just have to please one random GA reviewer. FA's go through a vote with input from many FA regulars who have experience. I like the religion cut, although single paragraph subsections are quite unprofessional. I think I've moved most religion information to the main article before, but it's worth double checking. Shifting most of this information to the main articles would definitely be useful for them. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 10:08, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Just to test the water I've done a bold cut-back on Religion, and is what I think we should do on much of culture and demographics. DeCausa (talk) 10:04, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- If you just want some advice before/instead of going to GA or FA then we could go to Misplaced Pages:Peer review, but don't expect a response soon, there is quite a backlog. Personally I would like to get this article to FA status, despite my faith in these processes often being shaken by bizarre comments and results, basically because readers need some way of distinguishing which articles are reliable. It might also provide a focus amid all the inevitable differences of opinion.--SabreBD (talk) 09:39, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Whatever we do is doing to be painful and tedious for those involved, and I'm not sure any process will ever reach "agreement" - there are always going to be some editors unhappy about the inclusion or exclusion of particular words like "country" or "archipelago", or the emphasis placed on some aspects at the expense of others. In principle, there's no harm, in my view, in getting outside views. Personally I've never been very impressed by the GA process (let alone FA), but if that's the way to go (and obviously has been used before, most recently here) we should try it and be prepared for the flak from all sides. Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:26, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Isn't FA a step too far? It should reach GA first. Peer review would be a good start. Daicaregos (talk) 09:19, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- It's not totally clear to me from some of the comments whether the FA criteria is something everyone thinks should be pursued. I suspect with the way things work on this page, even if that is accepted, it's going to be a painful process to reach agreement. I'm not sure of the WP processes involved, but is it possible to have a GA Review, and get some outside "objective" help/suggestions/perspectives on this (and I'm sure other issues)? DeCausa (talk) 08:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
The Germany article as a model
I've just read through Germany and I can see why it's got FA. It's easy to read, interesting, an overview but with key information. Frankly, the UK article doesn't come anywhere near it, IMHO. The level of detail in much of the UK article makes it really quite turgid as well as not complying with WP:Summary style. I suggest we use Germany as a very rough and ready (and I mean rough and ready) rule of thumb guide as to the amount of material that should be in each section. I think this makes sense not just because it's FA but also because it's the most comparable FA country article to the UK in terms of size/complexity/cultural background/length of history etc. It's federal nature also gives much greater variations in "systems" than our 4 in the UK (as well as only being united since 1871). DeCausa (talk) 15:13, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Personally, FA or not, there is much about the UK article that I prefer. Yes there are some good things about the Germany article and one of those is the concise nature of some of its sections as compared to this article- Education, Religion and Sports are all of a length that I would support here. However just because it is an FA does not mean it is perfect - it is very far from it - and nor does it mean that its approach should be slavishly followed either. There is much that is good in this article, and which has developed over a long time through the contributions of many editors. Let's not throw the baby out with the bathwater. Rangoon11 (talk) 15:29, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think individual preferences are the point. Obviously every editor has his point of view as to how things should be, but no one editor can impose their point of view. That's why there's consensus best practice like FAs. DeCausa (talk) 17:15, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Ye Gads! Modelling the United Kingdom of Great Britain and Northern Ireland on the Germany article ... are you mad? ArmchairVexillologistDonLives! (talk) 18:07, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't think individual preferences are the point. Obviously every editor has his point of view as to how things should be, but no one editor can impose their point of view. That's why there's consensus best practice like FAs. DeCausa (talk) 17:15, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
Sport
Following on from the above topic ... it was suggested that only the first paragraph is needed for the Sport section; so I read it. The first sentence is not sourced. When you read it you'll see why. It says, "Major sports, including association football, rugby league, rugby union, rowing, boxing, badminton, cricket, tennis, darts and golf, originated or were substantially developed in the United Kingdom and the states that preceded it." Is it really likely that no-one hit each other, or were capable of propelling their boats before the Brits showed them how to do it? A complete re-write is in order here. Daicaregos (talk) 17:09, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It is fairly well known that all of those sports did indeed originate in the UK or its predecessors - in the sense of the formalised, rule based activities which now go by those names - but I agree that a citation should be added. It shouldn't be hard to find one. The main problem with this section is its length, and I suggest that that be the core focus of discussion. In this article there is currently considerably more text on cricket and rugby than on the UK's foreign relations. Rangoon11 (talk) 17:13, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I look forward to reading the sources confirming boxing and rowing originated in the UK or its predecessors. Daicaregos (talk) 20:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Here are a few sporting citations: , , , . Rangoon11 (talk) 21:26, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Interesting. Look , It's fine to be proud of your country, but we need to be realistic and truthful. According to this (p 1) “The earliest recorded rowing race, The Aeneid, written between 30 and 19 BC by Virgil, describes a competition in the Greek fleet that was in Troy around 800 BC.” And it's fairly well documented that regulated, competetive boxing has taken place since (at least) ancient Greek times. According to this (p. 7) “Most boys living in the days when Greece was in her prime were taught boxing.” The author goes on to note Homers's description of a boxing contest with similar guards and blows to those used today. It's probably fair to say something along the lines that many modern international sports organisations were established following the codification of those sports in Victorian England. But really, the real origin of sports will never be known. Have a look at Cnapan, Bando and Shinty for example. Daicaregos (talk) 22:29, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It's not a question of being proud of one's country (or equally of certain editors disliking the very idea of the UK existing at all) but of describing the reality. Modern boxing and rowing, as well as all the other sports listed in the sources, originated in the UK or its predecesors. This is well documented and to omit this is to not inform readers of the reality. To quote the German commentator from 1936 quoted in Elias' book (himself born German) 'As is well known, England was the cradle and loving 'mother' of sport.' Rangoon11 (talk) 22:43, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Some sports originated within the UK; many others had their roots all over the place (including football, cricket, golf, etc. etc.) but their modern rules of competition were codified in the UK. That more precise explanation is what is needed in the text. Ghmyrtle (talk) 07:32, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- It's not a question of being proud of one's country (or equally of certain editors disliking the very idea of the UK existing at all) but of describing the reality. Modern boxing and rowing, as well as all the other sports listed in the sources, originated in the UK or its predecesors. This is well documented and to omit this is to not inform readers of the reality. To quote the German commentator from 1936 quoted in Elias' book (himself born German) 'As is well known, England was the cradle and loving 'mother' of sport.' Rangoon11 (talk) 22:43, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Interesting. Look , It's fine to be proud of your country, but we need to be realistic and truthful. According to this (p 1) “The earliest recorded rowing race, The Aeneid, written between 30 and 19 BC by Virgil, describes a competition in the Greek fleet that was in Troy around 800 BC.” And it's fairly well documented that regulated, competetive boxing has taken place since (at least) ancient Greek times. According to this (p. 7) “Most boys living in the days when Greece was in her prime were taught boxing.” The author goes on to note Homers's description of a boxing contest with similar guards and blows to those used today. It's probably fair to say something along the lines that many modern international sports organisations were established following the codification of those sports in Victorian England. But really, the real origin of sports will never be known. Have a look at Cnapan, Bando and Shinty for example. Daicaregos (talk) 22:29, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Here are a few sporting citations: , , , . Rangoon11 (talk) 21:26, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I look forward to reading the sources confirming boxing and rowing originated in the UK or its predecessors. Daicaregos (talk) 20:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
Something missing from the intro
, , , are just a few where the primary geographical region they belong to is named in the first paragraph. This isn't the case here, so we need to acknowledge the point that UK is the biggest country in the British Isles (basic geography). Van Speijk (talk) 19:37, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
a modest lede proposal
I think the current lede is all right but unfortunate and does not summarize the article well per WP:LEDE. My line of thought is to structure the lede in 3 paragraphs according to following topics:
- 1 Introduction and basic facts
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- location, area & population
- politics & internal administrative structure
- 2 Brief history from prehistoric period till Pax Britannica
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- culture & religion
- developments leading to the United Kingdom formation
- 3 Modern UK
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- economy
- international relations
See the draft. I'm not an expert on the UK topic, though the refs for this content could be found in the article body. Feel free to edit the draft, fixing factual errors, my broken English or just in order to improve the content. AgadaUrbanit (talk) 21:39, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- With a bit of tweaking I think that your para 2 would make a nice addition to the lead. Rangoon11 (talk) 22:03, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- Yes good. I would suggest this modification is a sovereign state off the north-western coast of continental Europe and is the largest country in the British Isles. Van Speijk (talk) 22:16, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It's very good. I've made some smallish changes here. --RA (talk) 22:18, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It's fine but just one small comment on terminology: "Scottian, Pictish and Britannic". These are somewhat little used (and antiquated) terms and not used in the article: Scottian (and the link doesn't work) should be Goidelic or Gaelic (I used Gaelic to keep it simple in the main body) and Brythonic or even British. I used Brythonic. DeCausa (talk) 22:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- You're right. There are nicer terms in contemporary use. The intention is only to indicate that there was not one single population — and that the ancients were in very broad terms, analogous to the current Irish/Scottish/Welsh + English set up, which is interesting.
- Scottian (I'm not sure if that is the correct adjective) should link to Scoti. Gaelic though is fine by me. Brythonic is too ... but, to play devil's advocate, why not just call the ancient people British — or Britons? — for simplicity's sake (even at risk of confusing the ancient people with the modern people)? --RA (talk) 22:54, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think that's getting over-technical and precise for the lede. Wouldn't "several insular Celtic cultures" cover the point? Ghmyrtle (talk) 23:04, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- ... or that could do it too! xD --RA (talk) 23:09, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I think that's getting over-technical and precise for the lede. Wouldn't "several insular Celtic cultures" cover the point? Ghmyrtle (talk) 23:04, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- It's fine but just one small comment on terminology: "Scottian, Pictish and Britannic". These are somewhat little used (and antiquated) terms and not used in the article: Scottian (and the link doesn't work) should be Goidelic or Gaelic (I used Gaelic to keep it simple in the main body) and Brythonic or even British. I used Brythonic. DeCausa (talk) 22:27, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- I've suggested a (separate) tweaked version here. Too late now - will look at it again tomorrow. Ghmyrtle (talk) 22:49, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
A few points:
- There is no mention of the the word 'archipelago', British Isles or constituent countries stuff. Is that because of the above discussion? Ie is this draft based on above discussion?
- If you'd never seen the UK on a map you wouldn't be left with much of a clue reading;
- The United Kingdom.. is a sovereign state off the north-western coast of continental Europe. The UK covers 243,610 square kilometres (94,060 sq mi) with 62 million inhabitants and is composed of Northern Ireland and the island of Great Britain, which consists of England, Scotland and Wales. Apart from a land border with the Republic of Ireland, the UK is surrounded by the Atlantic Ocean, the North Sea, the English Channel and the Irish Sea.
- "off the north-western coast" is meaningless unless you mention that it shares an archipelago. It mentions Northern Ireland and Great Britain, but not the island of Ireland. NI is more than just north Ireland! It's better to follow other encyclopedias than dictionaries for encyclopedic stuff imo (this being an encyclopedia).
- The line-ending, "leaving Northern Ireland within the UK" is too compressed a statement. Again, NI is more than just north Ireland - it was a new country created from Ireland being split into two: it wasn't a borrowed area. This is why I think the word 'country' for NI makes logical sense (as well as being widely-enough used). I agree none of the UK countries necessarily have to be named thus in the intro - but we all know they are going to have to be: so we've got to at least get this bit right.
- I don't know why the proposals have been rolled-up - all we did was go back to the status quo, which is never going to last of course until it's all settled. Why not move it to a sub page, and just roll up bits? It's only going to start up all over again (and looks like it has!).
- Also the line starting the 2nd parag, "Settlement by anatomically modern humans of what was to become the United Kingdom occurred in waves beginning by about 30,000 years ago."! Is this how Misplaced Pages introduces these paragraphs now?
- Finally, please people - this is the UK article, can we possibly use "intro" please? 'Lede' isn't even in my SOED, and that's because it is American newsroom journo slang from the 60's (as much as I can make out). Which just makes it doubly-annoying in my eyes for this particular encyclopedia article. I think it's just become a bit of a habit, but I find it a bit alienating at times. None of us in the UK grew up with it, and it's a form of 'wikispeak' that doesn't exactly bring us closer to the real world imo. Matt Lewis (talk) 23:49, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- In British English 'lead' is the usual spelling. Rangoon11 (talk) 23:57, 31 May 2011 (UTC)
- For me it's always an 'introduction' - leads are for newspaper reports surely. I find it doubly dastardly now everyone has gone lede crazy. They say when America has a cold. Matt Lewis (talk) 00:03, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Only reading this have I finally understood what lede was really intended to mean - thank you Matt Lewis. Trumpkin (talk) 00:19, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- For me it's always an 'introduction' - leads are for newspaper reports surely. I find it doubly dastardly now everyone has gone lede crazy. They say when America has a cold. Matt Lewis (talk) 00:03, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
The proposed draft takes no account of the prolonged discussion above, at which consensus was reached. Are you seeking to re-open that discussion? Daicaregos (talk) 07:46, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- There seems to be quite a lot of additions proposed in the draft that ive just looked at above, so if this debate is all reopening again then we need several days to gage different viewpoints so i hope it wont suddenly appear in the article within the next 24 hours. I do like some of the additions, i totally agree that the British Isles should be mentioned but im not convinced about going into some of the details on things like waves of immigration from 10000s of years ago and the specific land size of the UK. If that is needed we may as well even mention when these islands broke apart from what is now mainland Europe. BritishWatcher (talk) 22:11, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Tweaks by User:Rannpháirtí anaithnid and User:Ghmyrtle are very helpful. I've also added a line on climate in para #1, appears a basic UK info to me. If we consider Stonehenge as a part of UK heritage I'm leaning towards inclusion of prehistoric period but my mind is totally open. We're in no hurry achieving streamlined summary of the article and need to get it right. More tweaks are welcome. Current draft is here. AgadaUrbanit (talk) 07:06, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Clearly you don't agree with my comments re the presentation of Northern Ireland then! Well, it's your user space, so it's your right I suppose. Sorry, this may be good faith, but I actually object to it now. I refuse to edit someone's sandbox, and I feel the discussion has simply been moved off this page - but not onto a special one like it should have been instead of being roll-boxed - but onto someone's user space! Sorry, but no thank you - this is the United Kingdom article.
- Tweaks by User:Rannpháirtí anaithnid and User:Ghmyrtle are very helpful. I've also added a line on climate in para #1, appears a basic UK info to me. If we consider Stonehenge as a part of UK heritage I'm leaning towards inclusion of prehistoric period but my mind is totally open. We're in no hurry achieving streamlined summary of the article and need to get it right. More tweaks are welcome. Current draft is here. AgadaUrbanit (talk) 07:06, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- If I get time I'll look a special page. All the barnstars in the world won't make going back to the status-quo any kind of solution with this one. Matt Lewis (talk) 10:23, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Agree with BritishWatcher. I propose the mention of British Isles in the lead paragraph. It's basic geogrpahical information that should be included. Any reasons why we shouldn't? Van Speijk (talk) 09:56, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- If I get time I'll look a special page. All the barnstars in the world won't make going back to the status-quo any kind of solution with this one. Matt Lewis (talk) 10:23, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
Religion
DeCausa's Draft
Although the United Kingdom is considered one of the most secular countries in the western world, the Anglican Church of England is the established church in England and the Presbyterian Church of Scotland is recognised as the national church of Scotland. According to the 2001 census, Christianity has the largest number of adherents at 71.6% of the population with all other religions at 5.4% in total (the largest being Islam with 2.8% followed by Hinduism, Sikhism and Judaism). 15% claimed no religion, with a further 7% not stating a religious preference. A Tearfund survey showed only one in ten Britons actually attend church weekly. Although there is no UK-wide data in the 2001 census on adherence to individual Christian denominations, it has been estimated that 62% are Anglican, 13.5% Roman Catholic, 6% Presbyterian, 3.4% Methodist with small numbers of other Protestant denominations and Orthodox.
I have reverted the deletion of over three-quarters of the Religion section. I do agree that this section can be reduced - in my view a reduction of roughly two paragraphs is appropriate - but these deletions were in my view too extreme. They also changed the emphasis of the section somewhat, which I have some concerns about. Rangoon11 (talk) 11:27, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Don't worry I really can't be bothered with pursuing this. DeCausa (talk) 11:30, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Let's not give up quite yet. Perhaps Rangoon can outline in a bit of detail what he/she thinks the section might look like and we can go from there.--SabreBD (talk) 11:48, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Btw, the sections I did this morning: Religion, Media, Dependencies, languages, and Demographics were the fairly obvious low hanging fruit. Good job I didn't move on to the rest.... DeCausa (talk) 11:52, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- You can't have seriously expected that the mass deletion of multiple sections all at once and with no prior discussion would be acceptable. Let's work on one section at a time. I'm happy to post a proposed shorter version of this section but can't do it immediately, will try and do it later today. Rangoon11 (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Given that the article is twice as long (or more) than the Misplaced Pages view of country article best practice (as seen through FAs), it makes more sense to heavily cut back the clearly bloated sections and have people argue for the re-inclusion of material. If it's done the other way around, and given the process on this talk page, it will never happen to any material extent. If however Misplaced Pages best practice is not accepted as a goal. That's a different matter. DeCausa (talk) 12:13, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages operates by consensus and has no end date. There is no urgency to reducing the size of the article and the removal of large amounts of long standing content from this article must be done in a way which enables proper discussion and the input of more than one editor's views. Rangoon11 (talk) 12:27, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Well, this article is about double the maximum size recommended by the WP:Article size guideline, so there is a need to substantially reduce text on this page. Anyway, it would help Rangoon if you stated what information that was removed from religion is, in your opinion, needed on this article? Chipmunkdavis (talk) 14:12, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Misplaced Pages operates by consensus and has no end date. There is no urgency to reducing the size of the article and the removal of large amounts of long standing content from this article must be done in a way which enables proper discussion and the input of more than one editor's views. Rangoon11 (talk) 12:27, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Given that the article is twice as long (or more) than the Misplaced Pages view of country article best practice (as seen through FAs), it makes more sense to heavily cut back the clearly bloated sections and have people argue for the re-inclusion of material. If it's done the other way around, and given the process on this talk page, it will never happen to any material extent. If however Misplaced Pages best practice is not accepted as a goal. That's a different matter. DeCausa (talk) 12:13, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- You can't have seriously expected that the mass deletion of multiple sections all at once and with no prior discussion would be acceptable. Let's work on one section at a time. I'm happy to post a proposed shorter version of this section but can't do it immediately, will try and do it later today. Rangoon11 (talk) 12:01, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Btw, the sections I did this morning: Religion, Media, Dependencies, languages, and Demographics were the fairly obvious low hanging fruit. Good job I didn't move on to the rest.... DeCausa (talk) 11:52, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Let's not give up quite yet. Perhaps Rangoon can outline in a bit of detail what he/she thinks the section might look like and we can go from there.--SabreBD (talk) 11:48, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
Here is a shortened version of the section for discussion. It is around half of the length of the current version.
Rangoon11's Draft 1
Main article: Religion in the United KingdomChristianity has been the dominant religion in the United Kingdom and its predecessors for over 1,000 years. The Acts of Union 1707 ensured that there would be no "Papist" succession in the new nation, as well as confirming a link between church and state that remains in all of the UK except Wales. In the 2001 census 71.6% of all respondents stated that they were Christians, with the next largest faiths by number of adherents Islam (2.8%), Hinduism (1.0%), Sikhism (0.6%), Judaism (0.5%), Buddism (0.3%) and all other religions (0.3%). 15% of respondents stated that they had no religion, with a further 7% not stating a religious preference. A Tearfund survey in 2007 showed only one in ten Britons actually attend church weekly.
The largest religious group in England is Christianity, with the Church of England (Anglican) the established church: the church retains a representation in the UK Parliament and the British monarch is a member of the church as well as its Supreme Governor. The Church of England also retains the right to draft legislative measures related to religious administration through the General Synod that can then be passed into law by parliament. The largest religious group in Scotland is also Christianity, and the Presbyterian Church of Scotland, is recognised as the national church. The Church of Scotland is not subject to state control and the British monarch is an ordinary member, required to swear an oath to "maintain and preserve the Protestant Religion and Presbyterian Church Government" upon his or her accession. The Church in Wales is 'disestablished' but remains in the Anglican Communion. Christianity is the main religion in Northern Ireland though the main denominations are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church in Ireland is the largest single church in Northern Ireland though there is a greater number of Protestants and Anglicans overall. Rangoon11 (talk) 22:35, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
- Predictably, I think it's too wordy, particularly the second para. One factual point: there's no church-state link in NI either. Two things I added which you haven't which are worth saying (IMO): that the UK is one of the most irrelegious/secular countries in the west; a breakdown of denominations UK-wide. DeCausa (talk) 06:35, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Considering the largest religious group in all 4 countries is Christianity the blanket statement at the beginning precludes the need to say it for each individual country in the second paragraph? Anyway, step forward at the very least. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 07:56, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is definitely a step in the right direction (and I feel instinctively about the right length), but it could still be tighter. I think it was better to give overall figures, since the article is on the UK, rather than those for each part of the UK. I would also like to see the comment on secularism back, as "dominant religion ... for a thousand years" might lead readers to get the wrong impression of the current situation. I also don't see why we need the details on the "Papist" succession (even in inverted commas this is likely to be controversial. The detail on the Queen also seems out of place as these are probably details more appropriate to the individual articles.--SabreBD (talk) 08:06, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I would suggest avoiding the term "Papist" and simply say Roman Catholics. This is the 21st century. --RA (talk) 08:11, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with the preceding comments - there's no need to mention the role of Christianity in each of the four countries (we could simply say "across the UK"); there needs to be more about secularism and lack of religious affiliation generally (the 15% figure is very low compared to other surveys, and the census figures are regarded as quite dubious on that point because of the wording of the question asked); we should certainly avoid terms like "Papist"; "not subject to state control" is not great wording (I doubt if Rowan Williams sees himself that way either); there is too much emphasis on the churches' relationship (or lack of it) with the monarchy, and to say that the monarch is "a member" of the church is unnecessary if we say she is its Supreme Governor (in relation to which it may be worth mentioning Henry VIII). Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:01, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I would suggest avoiding the term "Papist" and simply say Roman Catholics. This is the 21st century. --RA (talk) 08:11, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is definitely a step in the right direction (and I feel instinctively about the right length), but it could still be tighter. I think it was better to give overall figures, since the article is on the UK, rather than those for each part of the UK. I would also like to see the comment on secularism back, as "dominant religion ... for a thousand years" might lead readers to get the wrong impression of the current situation. I also don't see why we need the details on the "Papist" succession (even in inverted commas this is likely to be controversial. The detail on the Queen also seems out of place as these are probably details more appropriate to the individual articles.--SabreBD (talk) 08:06, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Considering the largest religious group in all 4 countries is Christianity the blanket statement at the beginning precludes the need to say it for each individual country in the second paragraph? Anyway, step forward at the very least. Chipmunkdavis (talk) 07:56, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- To echo DeCausa, the Church of Ireland was disestablished in 1871. Suggested rewite of the NI section:
Christianity is the main religious tradition in Northern Ireland, with the majority of people being of the Protestant branch of Christianity (45.6%). The main religious dominations in Northern Ireland are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church in Ireland is the largest single church in Northern Ireland (40.2%), followed by Presbyterian Church in Ireland (20.7%) and the Church of Ireland (Anglican, 15.3%).
- --RA (talk) 08:11, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- 45.6% isn't a majority! Not sure that saying that "Christianity is the main religious tradition in Northern Ireland" is the most informative way of putting it, given the social divisions there. Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:04, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is a majority if nothing else outnumbers it. Mabuska 10:36, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- No, that's a plurality. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:41, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Its still a majority regardless. It's good enough for our stilly first-past-the-post system where MP's get elected with a majority vote even though in many contituencies not even a majority of people bother to vote - but thats away from this issue and its only a clatter of terms. Mabuska 10:48, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- No, that's a plurality. Ghmyrtle (talk) 10:41, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is a majority if nothing else outnumbers it. Mabuska 10:36, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- RE: "majority" = LOL.
- The first sentence could go altogether. However, the "social divisions there" is the reason I think it is important to indicate that the dynamic not simply between churches but between Protestant and Catholic. Simply saying that the largest Church in Northern Ireland is the Roman Catholic Church, while true, is misleading about "the social divisions there".
- Maybe something like:
The main religious denominations in Northern Ireland are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church in Ireland is the largest single church in Northern Ireland (40.2%) although adherdants of Protestant branches of Christianity form a larger communal group (45.6%). In particular, the Presbyterian Church in Ireland (20.7%) and the Church of Ireland (Anglican, 15.3%) are significant.
- --RA (talk) 09:38, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- This piece by Rangoon i think cuts down the waffle on it good enough, as the linked to article will explain it in more depth.
Christianity is the main religion in Northern Ireland though the main denominations are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church in Ireland is the largest single church in Northern Ireland though there is a greater number of Protestants
and Anglicans overall.- Still scope to add in percentages there. Mabuska 10:36, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- That paragraph implies that Anglicans aren't Protestant. As an Anglican myself, I have always considered myself and been designated as a Protestant. In Northern Ireland, Anglicans (Church of Ireland) are definitely part of the Protestant community.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:53, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- As someone of Anglican background myself i made a big boob there when i just copy-and-pasted Rangoon's suggestion without taking that bit out. My bad. Striked out now :-) Mabuska 10:55, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- That paragraph implies that Anglicans aren't Protestant. As an Anglican myself, I have always considered myself and been designated as a Protestant. In Northern Ireland, Anglicans (Church of Ireland) are definitely part of the Protestant community.--Jeanne Boleyn (talk) 10:53, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- 45.6% isn't a majority! Not sure that saying that "Christianity is the main religious tradition in Northern Ireland" is the most informative way of putting it, given the social divisions there. Ghmyrtle (talk) 09:04, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
Here is a redraft incorporating some of the comments above. I know that the discussion still has some way to run but thought that this might help ease things forward. Personally I do think that the opening sentence is important to provide context as Christianity does remain the dominant religion in the UK - despite most adherents no longer going to church regularly - and has played a very large role in shaping the nation and its predecessors. For me this is not a value judgement but a statement of fact and to avoid it is actually to not be neutral or complete.
Rangoon11's Draft 2
Main article: Religion in the United KingdomChristianity has been the dominant religion in the United Kingdom and its predecessors for over 1,000 years. The Acts of Union 1707 ensured that there would be no Roman Catholic succession in the new nation, as well as confirming a link between church and state that remains in England and Scotland, although not in Northern Ireland or Wales. In the 2001 census 71.6% of all respondents indicated that they were Christians, with the next largest faiths (by number of adherents) being Islam (2.8%), Hinduism (1.0%), Sikhism (0.6%), Judaism (0.5%), Buddhism (0.3%) and all other religions (0.3%). 15% of respondents stated that they had no religion, with a further 7% not stating a religious preference. A Tearfund survey in 2007 showed only one in ten Britons actually attend church weekly.
The Church of England (Anglican) is the established church: the church retains a representation in the UK Parliament and the British monarch is a member of the church as well as its Supreme Governor. The Church of England also retains the right to draft legislative measures related to religious administration through the General Synod that can then be passed into law by parliament. In Scotland the Presbyterian Church of Scotland is recognised as the national church. The Church of Scotland is not subject to state control and the British monarch is an ordinary member, required to swear an oath to "maintain and preserve the Protestant Religion and Presbyterian Church Government" upon his or her accession. The Church in Wales is 'disestablished' but remains in the Anglican Communion. The main Christian denominations in Northern Ireland are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church in Ireland is the largest single church denomination in Northern Ireland (40.2%) though there is a greater number of Protestants and Anglicans. Rangoon11 (talk) 11:02, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It is probably a good idea to keep redrafting (as painful as this is likely to be) and thanks for that, so this doesn't get any more confusing I have pasted DeC's version at the top of this section for reference and relabelled the headings (we shouldn't really have lots of identical sub-headings. The other drawback is that, since Rangoon11 hasn't incorporated all the points made above some explanation is probably needed for keeping them, or the points will just have to be restated.--SabreBD (talk) 11:20, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Rangoon please
strike outremove the last three words in your proposal, i.e. "and Anglicans overall" as they are Protestants as well. If you did read the comments above you'd have seen the very recent point by Jeanne. Mabuska 11:36, 2 June 2011 (UTC)- In fact here is an addendum Rangoon should implement instead as it leaves out two things not required (which i've marked out with strikes), also denomination is a better term to use than just church:
The Roman Catholic Church
in Irelandis the largest singlechurchdenomination in Northern Ireland (40.2%) though there is a greater number of Protestantsand Anglicans.- Mabuska 11:38, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Apologies I missed that, will make the change now.Rangoon11 (talk) 11:44, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Rangoon please
- Would it not be worthwhile giving the names of the churches in Northern Ireland, as with England, Scotland and Wales? Anglican appears in parenthesis after Church of England so it may be perceived that Anglicans in Northern Ireland are members of the Church of England. Similarly, Presbyterians in Northern Ireland may be thought to be part of the Church of Scotland.
The main Christian denominations in Northern Ireland are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church is the largest single denomination in Northern Ireland (40.2%). Although a greater number people are members of Protestants churches (45.6%), such as the Presbyterian Church in Ireland (20.7%) or the Anglican Church of Ireland (15.3%).
- --RA (talk) 12:01, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is unnecessary after "and Anglican" was struck out. Still might be worthwhile for more depth. --RA (talk) 12:07, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Personally i'd rather leave the specifics to the specific article, which is why i prefer Rangoons suggestion with those few amendments i pointed out. We are meant to be trying to cut down on the waffle, and if another article deals with the specifics, we should let that article highlight them. Indepth is the reason this section is bloated. We could add the specific religion in X articles up beside the "Religion in the UK" link at the top of the section to make the links more prominant. Mabuska 12:59, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Sounds like a good idea. However, I suggest something the following change:
...a greater number people are members of Protestants churches (45.6%).
- Reason being to (a) give a picture of the balance of Protestant to Catholic since a percentage was given for Catholics (b) because "there is a greater number of Protestants" just sound blunt to me. Obviously (a) is less trivial. --RA (talk) 13:15, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- If a percentage is given for one then it should be for the other. Is there a need to further complicate and bloat it by noting the percentages once you add in the religious background figures as oppossed to those who just declared they belong to a religion? Or maybe just follow my own advice and keep the specifics to the specific article. Mabuska 13:33, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I agree with your first sentence. I don't understand what you mean by the rest. Just so we are on the same page, what I am suggesting is:
The main Christian denominations in Northern Ireland are organised on an all-Ireland basis. The Roman Catholic Church is the largest single denomination in Northern Ireland (40.2%) although a greater number people are members of Protestants churches (45.6%).
- I think this is the same as what you are suggesting too. --RA (talk) 14:02, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- If a percentage is given for one then it should be for the other. Is there a need to further complicate and bloat it by noting the percentages once you add in the religious background figures as oppossed to those who just declared they belong to a religion? Or maybe just follow my own advice and keep the specifics to the specific article. Mabuska 13:33, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Personally i'd rather leave the specifics to the specific article, which is why i prefer Rangoons suggestion with those few amendments i pointed out. We are meant to be trying to cut down on the waffle, and if another article deals with the specifics, we should let that article highlight them. Indepth is the reason this section is bloated. We could add the specific religion in X articles up beside the "Religion in the UK" link at the top of the section to make the links more prominant. Mabuska 12:59, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- This is unnecessary after "and Anglican" was struck out. Still might be worthwhile for more depth. --RA (talk) 12:07, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
If we have solved the Northern Irish issues, I would like to get back to the points about the beginning of the draft and suggest the following opening, in line with the suggestions and using the sourced material from DeCausa's draft:
"Although Christianity has been the most influential religion in the United Kingdom and its predecessors since the 6th century, it is now one of the most secular countries in the western world. In the 2001 census 71.6% of all respondents stated that they were Christians, with the next largest faiths by number of adherents Islam (2.8%), Hinduism (1.0%), Sikhism (0.6%), Judaism (0.5%), Buddhism (0.3%) and all other religions (0.3%). 15% of respondents stated that they had no religion, with a further 7% not stating a religious preference. However, a Tearfund survey in 2007 showed only one in ten Britons actually attend church weekly."
That should cover the historical situation and the current one. I don't think we need the bit about church-state relations in the different nations as this is covered in the second paragraph. I still think that there is no reason to state the monarch is a member if they are the supreme governor (you cannot be one without the other) so I suggest:
"The (Anglican) Church of England is the established church in England. It retains a representation in the UK Parliament and the British monarch is its Supreme Governor."
This way around with Anglican and CofE is preferable, since there is no such thing as "the Anglican", it has to have "Church" after it.--SabreBD (talk) 17:13, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- That proposed first sentence is in my view misleading in that it suggests that Christianity is no longer the most influential religion in the UK, when it clearly is. I also think that the point about the UK being one of the most secular countries is highly dubious, it is an opinion, not a fact, and should not be given such weight in my view, and there is not room in the section for a proper analysis (what 'secular' actually means is itself a topic that can be debated). The sentence about only 1 in 10 currently attenting church in my view conveys what this sentence is touching on in a far more neutral and factual manner, although even that is arguably slanted as the number who attend church less frequently is far higher. It remains the case that a substantial majority of British people identify as Christian. There are also a huge number of faith schools in the UK, Islam is fast-growing, the Pope's recent visit showed a considerable depth of feeling in the Catholic community, and the overall picture is actually rather complex.Rangoon11 (talk) 17:25, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes tt is complex and whatever is done will be a simplification, including terms such as Anglican, Protestant and Christian. The problem of the census data and "identification" with Christianity regardless of any action are well known and mentioned above. I think my suggestion produces a reasonable, balanced (and sourced) summary of the situation and that what is here at the moment is certainly not neutral. I am, of course, open to other suggestions of wording. No one is really sure what the Pope's recent visit means or for that matter what we should enthusiasm for days off during royal weddings, so that is not really pertinent here.--SabreBD (talk) 17:49, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The problem is that the UK is 'one of the most secular countries in the western world' is an opinion, not a fact. What secular means can be debated, the level of secularism in the UK can be debated, and the relative level of secularism in the UK vis a vis other countries can also be debated. What I would much prefer is a reference to Church attendance having fallen, something which is factual. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:16, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- We could try "has been identified as one of the most secular countries in the western world" or you can try a form of words that encapsulated the fall in attendence. However, I think this needs to be in the first sentence or it implies that the situation has not changed for a thousand years.--SabreBD (talk) 18:19, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- 'Christianity has been the dominant religion in the United Kingdom and its predecessors for over 1,000 years.' strikes me a plain and simple fact for which tens of thousands of citations could be provided, and which is still correct today. Falling church attendance in recent decades is a quite separate point in my view, although one which I am not against including. I think that it should be in a sentence next to or connected with the one about 1 in 10 currently attending weekly however. I will try and find some sources/numbers. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:33, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The Religion in the United Kingdom article cites the British Social Attitudes Survey for 2007 saying that 45% of Britons consider they have "no religion". There are numerous academic sources saying that the UK has one of the least religious populations in the "first world". I just picked one source in my edit of the section. It's quite easy to find others. I don't actually think it's a particularly controversial or contested point. (But I agree "secular" was too much of a short-hand.) To ignore this point, IMHO, is to omit probably the most notable aspect of "religion" in the UK.DeCausa (talk) 18:46, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Including the result of the British Social Attitudes Survey alongside the census data - on which I am neutral but could certainly live with - is very different from stating that the UK is 'one of the most secular countries in the western world'. Reading up on this topic I can see that there has been some criticism of the census results (and they are also now a decade old of course) although there has also been some criticism of the British Social Attitudes Survey methodology. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:57, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The article on Irreligion by country cites various sources; the 2007 Gallup poll, for example, gives a figure of 71% non-religious, behind only Estonia, Sweden, Denmark, Norway, Japan, Azerbaijan, Czech Republic and France. Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:03, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- With all topics, and particularly one like this, the results of polling will depend to an extent on the form of the question asked. Unfortunately we have very limited space here. The census figures are probably still valid, because of their vast sample size, for giving a rough idea of the relative sizes of the various religions in the UK (although Islam has undoubtedly grown since 2001). We should in my view pick one other survey/poll to provide another and more recent number for those with no religion. Rangoon11 (talk) 19:09, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't understand. I provided an academic source providing backing for the irrelegious nature of the UK. It's no good saying it's "just opinion". a large portion of the article is academic opinion. It will not be difficult to find other academic opinion to back it up. Please provide a contrary source if you think it is incorrect. Equally, I and GhMyrtle provide polling backing up that opinion. I think it's not reasonable to provide your own opinion on these reliable sources without backing it with sourced views casting doubt on the polling. It is highly notable that the UK is irreligious. The issue should be only agreeing on a succinct sentence expressing that. DeCausa (talk) 19:51, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The issue of 'how religious is the UK' is highly contentious, complex and controversial and it is a point of view, nothing more, to state plainly that the UK is irreligious. According to this piece of research by the Universities of Birmingham and Manchester (which is excellent and well worth a read whatever ones' views): 'Until well after the Second World War, the overwhelming majority of the British people professed to believe in some kind of God and to ‘belong’ to some form of organized religion, even if they did not practice it. This situation is now changing, but the proportion of avowed atheists still remains relatively low.' and 'Secularism as a movement is usually traced back to the days of the French Revolution, when its prophet was Thomas Paine, but it has never been a strong numerical force in Britain'
- And to take a few quotes from this BBC article : - 'It's very difficult to measure. There are so many different things to measure - by belief, practice, whether you believe in God, whether you attend places of worship, whether you pray' 'Average Sunday attendance in the Church of England was 960,000 in 2008, a figure which has been falling for a number of years. A survey by Christian charity Tearfund suggested it was one in 10. Yet nearly 40 million people in England and Wales, 72%, identified themselves as Christian. Other surveys suggest the majority of people pray and believe in God, even if they don't regularly go to church.' 'It's very hard to make an absolute measurement. You have to get an ideal definition about what being a Christian means or what being religious means'. These are complex issues and, as there is not sufficient space in this article for anything like a proper analysis, the information given should be as factual and neutral as possible. Orthodox Jews are now operating courts in the UK, and Sharia banking is on the rise: . These are complex issues.Rangoon11 (talk) 21:10, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nothing in the sources you cite contradicts the sourced point made. Just saying it is complex is not a sufficient argument - its all complex, we still have to find a concise way of expressing what reliable sources indicate.--SabreBD (talk) 21:26, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Those sources clearly do not support a bald statement that the UK is either secular or irreligious, merely that it has moved more in that direction. If a rich man loses half his wealth he can still be rich. I have suggested a way forward, that we provide some factual reference to a decline in church attendance and/or those stating that they are religious in the post second world war period. Rangoon11 (talk) 21:32, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- It's a question of finding words that give the right (that is, most neutral) balance. We need to ensure that the wording neither over- nor under-emphasises the status of Christianity (particularly its residual institutional status), and neither over- nor under-emphasises the modern secular character of the UK; and, also, gives the right weight to other religions. All elements need to be in there. The latest draft appears to me to overemphasise the institutional role of Christianity - for example, I think the sentences about the Church of England, Church of Scotland and Church in Wales could be partially removed and certainly shortened - with the result that the amount of text given to Christianity appears disproportionate. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:03, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Following on from Ghymrtle's important point about the balance, if I was going to sum the whole thing up without boldly using the contested term of secularisation (which I think is being interpreted in two senses here) in the first sentence, I would probably go for something like:
- It's a question of finding words that give the right (that is, most neutral) balance. We need to ensure that the wording neither over- nor under-emphasises the status of Christianity (particularly its residual institutional status), and neither over- nor under-emphasises the modern secular character of the UK; and, also, gives the right weight to other religions. All elements need to be in there. The latest draft appears to me to overemphasise the institutional role of Christianity - for example, I think the sentences about the Church of England, Church of Scotland and Church in Wales could be partially removed and certainly shortened - with the result that the amount of text given to Christianity appears disproportionate. Ghmyrtle (talk) 08:03, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Those sources clearly do not support a bald statement that the UK is either secular or irreligious, merely that it has moved more in that direction. If a rich man loses half his wealth he can still be rich. I have suggested a way forward, that we provide some factual reference to a decline in church attendance and/or those stating that they are religious in the post second world war period. Rangoon11 (talk) 21:32, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Nothing in the sources you cite contradicts the sourced point made. Just saying it is complex is not a sufficient argument - its all complex, we still have to find a concise way of expressing what reliable sources indicate.--SabreBD (talk) 21:26, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- I don't understand. I provided an academic source providing backing for the irrelegious nature of the UK. It's no good saying it's "just opinion". a large portion of the article is academic opinion. It will not be difficult to find other academic opinion to back it up. Please provide a contrary source if you think it is incorrect. Equally, I and GhMyrtle provide polling backing up that opinion. I think it's not reasonable to provide your own opinion on these reliable sources without backing it with sourced views casting doubt on the polling. It is highly notable that the UK is irreligious. The issue should be only agreeing on a succinct sentence expressing that. DeCausa (talk) 19:51, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- With all topics, and particularly one like this, the results of polling will depend to an extent on the form of the question asked. Unfortunately we have very limited space here. The census figures are probably still valid, because of their vast sample size, for giving a rough idea of the relative sizes of the various religions in the UK (although Islam has undoubtedly grown since 2001). We should in my view pick one other survey/poll to provide another and more recent number for those with no religion. Rangoon11 (talk) 19:09, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The article on Irreligion by country cites various sources; the 2007 Gallup poll, for example, gives a figure of 71% non-religious, behind only Estonia, Sweden, Denmark, Norway, Japan, Azerbaijan, Czech Republic and France. Ghmyrtle (talk) 19:03, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Including the result of the British Social Attitudes Survey alongside the census data - on which I am neutral but could certainly live with - is very different from stating that the UK is 'one of the most secular countries in the western world'. Reading up on this topic I can see that there has been some criticism of the census results (and they are also now a decade old of course) although there has also been some criticism of the British Social Attitudes Survey methodology. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:57, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The Religion in the United Kingdom article cites the British Social Attitudes Survey for 2007 saying that 45% of Britons consider they have "no religion". There are numerous academic sources saying that the UK has one of the least religious populations in the "first world". I just picked one source in my edit of the section. It's quite easy to find others. I don't actually think it's a particularly controversial or contested point. (But I agree "secular" was too much of a short-hand.) To ignore this point, IMHO, is to omit probably the most notable aspect of "religion" in the UK.DeCausa (talk) 18:46, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- 'Christianity has been the dominant religion in the United Kingdom and its predecessors for over 1,000 years.' strikes me a plain and simple fact for which tens of thousands of citations could be provided, and which is still correct today. Falling church attendance in recent decades is a quite separate point in my view, although one which I am not against including. I think that it should be in a sentence next to or connected with the one about 1 in 10 currently attending weekly however. I will try and find some sources/numbers. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:33, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- We could try "has been identified as one of the most secular countries in the western world" or you can try a form of words that encapsulated the fall in attendence. However, I think this needs to be in the first sentence or it implies that the situation has not changed for a thousand years.--SabreBD (talk) 18:19, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- The problem is that the UK is 'one of the most secular countries in the western world' is an opinion, not a fact. What secular means can be debated, the level of secularism in the UK can be debated, and the relative level of secularism in the UK vis a vis other countries can also be debated. What I would much prefer is a reference to Church attendance having fallen, something which is factual. Rangoon11 (talk) 18:16, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- Yes tt is complex and whatever is done will be a simplification, including terms such as Anglican, Protestant and Christian. The problem of the census data and "identification" with Christianity regardless of any action are well known and mentioned above. I think my suggestion produces a reasonable, balanced (and sourced) summary of the situation and that what is here at the moment is certainly not neutral. I am, of course, open to other suggestions of wording. No one is really sure what the Pope's recent visit means or for that matter what we should enthusiasm for days off during royal weddings, so that is not really pertinent here.--SabreBD (talk) 17:49, 2 June 2011 (UTC)
- "Forms of Christianity have dominated religious life in what is now the United Kingdom for over 1,400 years. Although a majority still identify with Christianity in surveys, since the second half of the 20th century regular church attendence has fallen dramatically, while immigration has contributed to the growth of a diversity of other faiths. This has led commentators variously to describe the United Kingdom as both a highly secularised and multi-faith country."
- I think that accomodates the points from the sources Rangoon11 cites and it also avoids the idea of a monolithic single religion labelled Christianity (since historically it has been extremely diverse) while highlighting its historic and continued importance in social/cultural life. Obviously this would then need to cite the census and some other polling on attendence to make the significance clear.--SabreBD (talk) 09:45, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
I think that's balanced and conveys a good overview. The problem with the recitation of facts alone (percentages, statement of constitutional positions etc) is that the general (overseas) reader isn't necessarily able to pick up what all means in practice. DeCausa (talk) 10:09, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks, and at the risk of complicating things further before Rangoon11 even gets a chance to look this over, I considered including "Christian" along with the descriptions that have been used in the second sentence, but (although secularised and multi-faith are easy to source) the term I found used the most for the UK was post-Christian. It is accurate, in the sense of a society that is greatly influenced by Christianity but is no longer universally Christian in practice, but I am not certain that it will easily be interpreted that way. Anyway I thought I would sign-post it here as a possibility in case it helps resolve this.--SabreBD (talk) 10:24, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
- just one point of pedantry: probably should be "many" surveys. Eg wouldn't be true of the 2007 British Social attitudes Survey, for instance. DeCausa (talk) 10:42, 3 June 2011 (UTC)
Media
I have reverted the deletion of over half of the Media section. Again I agree that this section can be made more concise and can lose one of its photos, but these deletions were - although not as extreme as the prior ones to the Religion section - too great in quantity, and also removed certain content which in my view should be retained. The bulk removal of long-standing content in this way needs to be properly discussed. Rangoon11 (talk) 11:37, 1 June 2011 (UTC)
sorry but it seems there are large mistakes in this article
for example yo mama !!!!!!!!!!!
- Sacred and secular: religion and politics worldwide, p.84 Pippa Norris, Ronald Inglehart, 2004, 0 521 54872 1
- The History of the Church of England The Church of England. Retrieved 23 November 2008.
- "Religion in Scotland". Scotland.com. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "UK Census 2001". National Office for Statistics. Retrieved 22 April 2007.
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- The changing religious landscape of Europe p.47 Hans Knippenberg, 2005, ISBN 90 5589 248 3
- "UK Census 2001". National Office for Statistics. Retrieved 22 April 2007.
- "Religion: 2001 Census". Office for National Statistics.
- "Research published this week by the British Charity, Tearfund, makes somber reading for church leaders. It found only one in 10 people in the United Kingdom attend church on a weekly basis even though 53 percent of the British population identify themselves as Christian". News.adventist.org. 4 April 2007. Retrieved 12 September 2010.
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- "Religion in Scotland". Scotland.com. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "Organisation – Church of Scotland". Church of Scotland. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "UK Census 2001". National Office for Statistics. Retrieved 22 April 2007.
- "Religion: 2001 Census". Office for National Statistics.
- "Research published this week by the British Charity, Tearfund, makes somber reading for church leaders. It found only one in 10 people in the United Kingdom attend church on a weekly basis even though 53 percent of the British population identify themselves as Christian". News.adventist.org. 4 April 2007. Retrieved 12 September 2010.
- The History of the Church of England The Church of England. Retrieved 23 November 2008.
- "Queen and Church of England". British Monarchy Media Centre. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "General Synod". Church of England. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "Religion in Scotland". Scotland.com. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- "Organisation – Church of Scotland". Church of Scotland. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
- Sacred and secular: religion and politics worldwide, p.84 Pippa Norris, Ronald Inglehart, 2004, 0 521 54872 1
- "UK Census 2001". National Office for Statistics. Retrieved 22 April 2007.
- "Religion: 2001 Census". Office for National Statistics.
- "Research published this week by the British Charity, Tearfund, makes somber reading for church leaders. It found only one in 10 people in the United Kingdom attend church on a weekly basis even though 53 percent of the British population identify themselves as Christian". News.adventist.org. 4 April 2007. Retrieved 12 September 2010.
- The History of the Church of England The Church of England. Retrieved 23 November 2008.
- "Queen and Church of England". British Monarchy Media Centre. Retrieved 5 June 2010.
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