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An investigation by Human Rights Watch concluded that the explosion was caused by a 155mm Israeli artillery shell, stating that 'The shrapnel, crater, and injuries all point to this weapon as the cause.'<ref>http://www.hrw.org/en/node/10911/section/9</ref>] (]) 17:58, 8 June 2012 (UTC) | An investigation by Human Rights Watch concluded that the explosion was caused by a 155mm Israeli artillery shell, stating that 'The shrapnel, crater, and injuries all point to this weapon as the cause.'<ref>http://www.hrw.org/en/node/10911/section/9</ref>] (]) 17:58, 8 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
:@Dalai lama ding dong: I wouldn't recommend removing a news citation just because the link is dead. Instead you should add the {{tl|dead link}} template to the citation and give people a chance to find a new URL for the news story. ] (]) 01:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC) | :@Dalai lama ding dong: I wouldn't recommend removing a news citation just because the link is dead. Instead you should add the {{tl|dead link}} template to the citation and give people a chance to find a new URL for the news story. ] (]) 01:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC) | ||
::my action was correct, according to this. http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:SOURCES#Reliable_sources Material that fails verification may be tagged with {{failed verification}} or removed.] (]) 15:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC) |
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The fact that something is reported in the media doesn't make it relevant to this page. Everything here should have a secondary source that ties it to the topic. Zero 23:50, 26 March 2012 (UTC)
- You initial objection was that the content was "trivial", so I have sought to demonstrate that they were not minor bagatelles but were widely reported in international media. Though I dispute the necessity of "a secondary source that ties it to the topic", the UN false tweet paragraph did already do so and you still summarily removed it. I shall add further information from media watchdog groups concerning these events in accordance with your wishes.
Best Wishes Ankh.Morpork 09:39, 27 March 2012 (UTC)- They are still trivia, and worse they are just dumps from the political action groups Honest Reporting and Camera, like most of this appalling article. Zero 12:50, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
Scholarly article about bias
This may be suitable for this article though not sure to what section it belongs
- Yes, this is the type of thing that the article should contain, along with scholarly articles having different viewpoints. At the moment it is mostly a big pile of garbage. Zero 13:23, 27 March 2012 (UTC)
Frequently cited incidents section is unbalanced and suffers from recentism
The lead for the "Frequently cited incidents" section says that it includes examples from both sides, but all nine examples are examples of pro-Palestinian media coverage. This doesn't seem very balanced. Also, the last two examples seems to be rather trivial (in the scope of decades of bloodshed) and I have a hard time believing these are actually "frequently cited incidents", rather than just the most recent items to hit the news. Kaldari (talk) 04:31, 5 June 2012 (UTC)
- My edits were reverted without any discussion here. Would anyone actually like to talk about this? Specifically, I don't see how the last two examples in the section qualify as "frequently cited incidents" of biased media coverage:
- Regarding the "Baby death date misrepresentation", I could only find a single source that mentions the incident more than a week after it occurred: a blog that mentions it 3 weeks later in April. That hardly qualifies as "frequently cited".
- Regarding the UN tweet incident, it is still being covered by the media, but the section doesn't discuss the media coverage at all. Khulood Badawi is a UN official, not a journalist, so her tweet doesn't qualify as biased media coverage. This seems to be a WP:COATRACK.
- Kaldari (talk) 17:49, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- i agree. Dalai lama ding dong (talk) 18:28, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- I agree the with Kaldari's analysis. the section is problematic. Regarding the "tweet incident" it was challenged by Zero when it was initially introduced (two threads up) and there was never a consensus supporting its inclusion. Dlv999 (talk) 18:41, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- I understand the point you are raising. I shall replace them in a separate section detailing misrepresentations since ou state that these are not "frequently cited incidents".Ankh.Morpork 21:43, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- What is the focus of this article actually supposed to be? "Media coverage of the Arab–Israeli conflict" is a huge topic and right now this article seems to be focused on only one small aspect: Cases where facts about the Arab–Israeli conflict were misrepresented in the media (generally in favor of Palestinians). Right now, the article seems to be a coatrack for repeating whatever news items get put out by the various media watchdog groups. Misplaced Pages isn't a media watchdog, it's an encyclopedia. The sections of this article should be stuff like:
- History of media coverage
- Newspapers and periodicals
- Film
- Books
- Television
- Regional differences in media coverage
- Criticism and controversy
- Creating yet another coatrack section to house "non-frequently cited incidents" isn't going to help the situation. Kaldari (talk) 22:41, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- I do understand that there is great deal of work to be added to this article to improve upon its more general scope. Do you think all the incident should be moved to another page specifically detailing media bias? Ankh.Morpork 17:31, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
- Hmm, it does seem like they would be more appropriate within the scope of something like List of incidents of media bias regarding the Arab–Israeli conflict, but I have to wonder if such an article would actually be encyclopedic or not. And of course if the list were ever complete, it would probably be the longest article in Misplaced Pages history :) I'd be interested in hearing what other people's opinions are, though. Kaldari (talk) 17:46, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
- I do understand that there is great deal of work to be added to this article to improve upon its more general scope. Do you think all the incident should be moved to another page specifically detailing media bias? Ankh.Morpork 17:31, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
- What is the focus of this article actually supposed to be? "Media coverage of the Arab–Israeli conflict" is a huge topic and right now this article seems to be focused on only one small aspect: Cases where facts about the Arab–Israeli conflict were misrepresented in the media (generally in favor of Palestinians). Right now, the article seems to be a coatrack for repeating whatever news items get put out by the various media watchdog groups. Misplaced Pages isn't a media watchdog, it's an encyclopedia. The sections of this article should be stuff like:
- I understand the point you are raising. I shall replace them in a separate section detailing misrepresentations since ou state that these are not "frequently cited incidents".Ankh.Morpork 21:43, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- I agree the with Kaldari's analysis. the section is problematic. Regarding the "tweet incident" it was challenged by Zero when it was initially introduced (two threads up) and there was never a consensus supporting its inclusion. Dlv999 (talk) 18:41, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- i agree. Dalai lama ding dong (talk) 18:28, 7 June 2012 (UTC)
- Kaldari -- the article does have a lot of awkward "on the one hand...but yet on the other hand" structuring, but overall it could be a lot worse than it is, and I'm not sure that I see a need for major basic restructuring (as opposed to intensive local work on selected subsections). AnonMoos (talk) 19:31, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
Gaza Beach
See this revert. http://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Media_coverage_of_the_Arab%E2%80%93Israeli_conflict&diff=496628657&oldid=496627477 AnkhMorpork has removed sourced material, and re added a failed link. Here is what was removed.
The IDF acknowledged that the cause of the blast may have been an unexploded 155mm artillery shell from an earlier shelling, but suggested it might have been used as an IED by Palestinians.
Here is the source for the above text. http://www.hrw.org/en/node/10911/section/9
Here are two quotes from that source 'A third hypothesis, advanced by the IDF, is that Palestinian militants may have taken an unexploded IDF shell they found elsewhere and rigged it up as an improvised explosive device (IED) that then exploded, with fatal consequences, on June 9.' 'The IDF suggested that militants might have placed an IED on the beach in order to thwart an IDF landing from the sea.' Here is the HRW source for the second quote. Human Rights Watch interview with Maj. Gen. Meir Kalifi, deputy commander of Ground Forces Headquarters and head of the investigative committee for the beach incident, IDF, Tel Aviv, June 19, 2006.
Here is another quote from that HRW source: Major General Kalifi, the investigative team leader, told Human Rights Watch that based on ballistic analysis, surveillance videos, and shrapnel, he concluded that an Israeli shell launched that afternoon could not have caused the explosion. He said, "Without any doubt and absolutely no question it could not have been the result of artillery fired on that day. Information until now negates the result of artillery fire." Kalifi made clear that this conclusion was based exclusively on information assembled by the IDF and excluded all evidence from other sources, including Human Rights Watch. He argued first that another type of weapon killed the civilians on the beach. When presented with Human Rights Watch's evidence during an interview, however, he modified his hypothesis and conceded that the cause of the blast may have been a 155mm shell, but then argued that Palestinians may have placed it there as an IED or that it was a dud Israeli shell that was set off by the IDF barrage that afternoon.
I suggest that the reverted data should be added back by AnkhMorpork, and the allegation of misrepresentation removed as a matter of course.
This removed text should also be restored, as it is reliably sourced. No reason appears to have been given for this removal.
An investigation by Human Rights Watch concluded that the explosion was caused by a 155mm Israeli artillery shell, stating that 'The shrapnel, crater, and injuries all point to this weapon as the cause.'Dalai lama ding dong (talk) 17:58, 8 June 2012 (UTC)
- @Dalai lama ding dong: I wouldn't recommend removing a news citation just because the link is dead. Instead you should add the {{dead link}} template to the citation and give people a chance to find a new URL for the news story. Kaldari (talk) 01:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC)
- my action was correct, according to this. http://en.wikipedia.org/Wikipedia:SOURCES#Reliable_sources Material that fails verification may be tagged with or removed.Dalai lama ding dong (talk) 15:13, 9 June 2012 (UTC)
- Cite error: The named reference
HRW Report
was invoked but never defined (see the help page). - http://www.hrw.org/en/node/10911/section/9
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