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	We've got a fine old edit war going over the lead paragraphs of this article. I find the content fine as written, with appropriate redundancy in the lead. That's what's done in encyclopedic writing. However, I do find one sentence needs rewriting for clarity, which I will do once this is settled. --] (]) 17:19, 16 August 2012 (UTC)		We've got a fine old edit war going over the lead paragraphs of this article. I find the content fine as written, with appropriate redundancy in the lead. That's what's done in encyclopedic writing. However, I do find one sentence needs rewriting for clarity, which I will do once this is settled. --] (]) 17:19, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

			:A wholesale, 100% rv of an obviously good-faith edit that was clearly explained in the edit comments is inappropriate and can be taken as hostile. The original rv of my edits were done so quickly after I completed them that it's clear my version was never even read. It was just automatically reverted. First, it is inappropriate to put content about date/time of premeire prior to explaining the show's concept. Also, all the content about the different dates/times that Fox had temporarily scheduled the show to air are totally unimportant as most shows go through a scheduling debate. All that matters is when it was ultimately scheduled to begin airing. Content about The Finder is totally unnecessary. The show does not include a "team of hospitality experts" as was incorrectly stated. There were multiple redundancies with sentences; examples: "that premiered on Fox on August 13, 2012, at 8 pm ET/PT as part of a two-night premiere event" (premiered/premier); "This series is Ramsay's fourth television series" (series/series); and "visiting various struggling lodging establishments throughout the United States, in hopes that their expertise would reverse the establishment's fortunes" (establishments/establishment's). I retained all relevant, encylopedic content and sourcing. Overall, instead of completely reverting my entire edit, it should have been discussed with me or taken to the talk page. --] (]) 17:38, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

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We've got a fine old edit war going over the lead paragraphs of this article. I find the content fine as written, with appropriate redundancy in the lead. That's what's done in encyclopedic writing. However, I do find one sentence needs rewriting for clarity, which I will do once this is settled. --Drmargi (talk) 17:19, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

A wholesale, 100% rv of an obviously good-faith edit that was clearly explained in the edit comments is inappropriate and can be taken as hostile. The original rv of my edits were done so quickly after I completed them that it's clear my version was never even read. It was just automatically reverted. First, it is inappropriate to put content about date/time of premeire prior to explaining the show's concept. Also, all the content about the different dates/times that Fox had temporarily scheduled the show to air are totally unimportant as most shows go through a scheduling debate. All that matters is when it was ultimately scheduled to begin airing. Content about The Finder is totally unnecessary. The show does not include a "team of hospitality experts" as was incorrectly stated. There were multiple redundancies with sentences; examples: "that premiered on Fox on August 13, 2012, at 8 pm ET/PT as part of a two-night premiere event" (premiered/premier); "This series is Ramsay's fourth television series" (series/series); and "visiting various struggling lodging establishments throughout the United States, in hopes that their expertise would reverse the establishment's fortunes" (establishments/establishment's). I retained all relevant, encylopedic content and sourcing. Overall, instead of completely reverting my entire edit, it should have been discussed with me or taken to the talk page. --76.189.121.5 (talk) 17:38, 16 August 2012 (UTC)

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