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| :*] May I suggest using a different hook? Maybe: | :*] May I suggest using a different hook? Maybe: | ||
| ::'''ALT 1''' - ...that ] (]) was so upset about ''']''' from ] that she cried every time she read the script? | ::'''ALT 1''' - ... that ] (]) was so upset about ''']''' from ] that she cried every time she read the script? | ||
| :I'm only suggesting it because the first hook is rather vague. We don't know what he changed it from or to so it's just frustrating. Or maybe that's me. Anyway, good to go otherwise. ]<sup>]</sup> 12:09, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | :I'm only suggesting it because the first hook is rather vague. We don't know what he changed it from or to so it's just frustrating. Or maybe that's me. Anyway, good to go otherwise. ]<sup>]</sup> 12:09, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | ||
| ::Sure, that sounds better. Although I would say "], who portrayed ], was so moved by her exit from '']'' that she could not read the script without crying?" Just to clarify that it's the actor and not the character, and I reworded it to reflect the quote. Also "upset" has a negative connotation and as Gillan arranged the exit herself, she was apparently pleased but sad about it. Just to clarify. <font face="Monotype Corsiva">] <sup>]</sup></font> 22:00, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | ::Sure, that sounds better. Although I would say "], who portrayed ], was so moved by her exit from '']'' that she could not read the script without crying?" Just to clarify that it's the actor and not the character, and I reworded it to reflect the quote. Also "upset" has a negative connotation and as Gillan arranged the exit herself, she was apparently pleased but sad about it. Just to clarify. <font face="Monotype Corsiva">] <sup>]</sup></font> 22:00, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | ||
| :] In which case, just to save the prep mover time, final alt is! | :] In which case, just to save the prep mover time, final alt is! | ||
| ::'''ALT 2''' ...], who portrayed ], was so moved by her exit from '']'' that she could not read the script without crying? ]<sup>]</sup> 22:46, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | ::'''ALT 2''' ... that ], who portrayed ], was so moved by ''']''' from '']'' that she could not read the script without crying? ]<sup>]</sup> 22:46, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | ||
| :::There was no link to the DYK article so I added one, on the text "her exit", but it could also go on "the script". ] <span style="color:blue">•</span> ] 22:53, 5 September 2012 (UTC) | |||
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The Angels Take Manhattan
( )- ... that Steven Moffat "completely changed" the exit of Karen Gillan and Arthur Darvill's characters Amy and Rory in the upcoming Doctor Who episode, "The Angels Take Manhattan"?
- Comment: Rhain1999 created this article on August 16, and I expanded it on August 18.
Created/expanded by Rhain1999 (talk), Glimmer721 (talk). Nominated by Glimmer721 (talk) at 15:17, 19 August 2012 (UTC)
May I suggest using a different hook? Maybe:
- ALT 1 - ... that Amy Pond (Karen Gillan) was so upset about her exit from Doctor Who that she cried every time she read the script?
- I'm only suggesting it because the first hook is rather vague. We don't know what he changed it from or to so it's just frustrating. Or maybe that's me. Anyway, good to go otherwise. Panyd 12:09, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
- Sure, that sounds better. Although I would say "Karen Gillan, who portrayed Amy Pond, was so moved by her exit from Doctor Who that she could not read the script without crying?" Just to clarify that it's the actor and not the character, and I reworded it to reflect the quote. Also "upset" has a negative connotation and as Gillan arranged the exit herself, she was apparently pleased but sad about it. Just to clarify. Glimmer721 22:00, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
In which case, just to save the prep mover time, final alt is!
- ALT 2 ... that Karen Gillan, who portrayed Amy Pond, was so moved by her exit from Doctor Who that she could not read the script without crying? Panyd 22:46, 5 September 2012 (UTC)
