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| This article needs a better lede. "One of the murderers in "Operation Nemesis" tells almost nothing to those unfamiliar with the specific event. Maybe someting like "an Ottoman Armenian who assassinated Behbud Khan Javanshir, Internal Affairs Minister of Azerbaijan in 1921" may be a better introduction. I'll call the editor. | This article needs a better lede. "One of the murderers in "Operation Nemesis" tells almost nothing to those unfamiliar with the specific event. Maybe someting like "an Ottoman Armenian who assassinated Behbud Khan Javanshir, Internal Affairs Minister of Azerbaijan in 1921" may be a better introduction. I'll call the editor. | ||
| ] (]) 18:04, 8 September 2012 (UTC) | ] (]) 18:04, 8 September 2012 (UTC) | ||
| :I tried to fix it, but it still needs some work. ] (]) 09:35, 10 September 2012 (UTC) | |||
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Lede
This article needs a better lede. "One of the murderers in "Operation Nemesis" tells almost nothing to those unfamiliar with the specific event. Maybe someting like "an Ottoman Armenian who assassinated Behbud Khan Javanshir, Internal Affairs Minister of Azerbaijan in 1921" may be a better introduction. I'll call the editor. Nedim Ardoğa (talk) 18:04, 8 September 2012 (UTC)
- I tried to fix it, but it still needs some work. George Spurlin (talk) 09:35, 10 September 2012 (UTC)