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Jim Kilburn has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it. Review: January 28, 2013. (Reviewed version). |
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- This review is transcluded from Talk:Jim Kilburn/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.
Reviewer: Sahara4u (talk · contribs) 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
Comments –
- Use ndashes (–) instead of hyphens (-) in dates' ranges.
- Well spotted: bad mistake! Fixed now. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
- "He bowled fast-paced off spin." needs a ref.
- The ref was at the end of the next sentence. I've linked them to make it clear. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
- You may link Barnsley Chronicle and the Yorkshire Post.
- Latter one done now, but I'd prefer to leave the Barnsley Chronicle as there is no article and I don't see the purpose of a red link for a borderline-notability article. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
- "Kilburn's writings on the Yorkshire players of the 1930s and 1940s made them well-known to the public as personalities and he wrote several pieces for the Yorkshire Post which became well-known." comma after personalities
- You may link England team and Australia.
- Did the first; the second is not the team, and linking the country would be overlinking. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
- Don't you think the Bibliography section needs a ref?
- For a bibliography section, the books serve as their own reference, as I understand it. Sarastro1 (talk) 17:44, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
Overall good work, very well-written. I really enjoyed it. Zia Khan 23:34, 27 January 2013 (UTC)
- I'm busy right now, will take a look later today. Zia Khan 17:50, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
Final assessment
- GA review (see Misplaced Pages:Good article criteria and WP:GACN)
- Well written.
- a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
- a (clear and concise prose which doesn't violate copyright laws, grammar and spelling are correct): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, and fiction:
- Factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Misplaced Pages:No original research):
- a (well-referenced): b (citations to reliable sources): c (Misplaced Pages:No original research):
- Broad in its coverage.
- a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):
- a (covers major aspects): b (well-focused):
- Neutral .
- Fair representation, no bias:
- Fair representation, no bias:
- Stable.
- No edit wars nor disputed contents:
- No edit wars nor disputed contents:
- Illustrated appropriately by images.
- a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Conclusion: No other issues. Good work, keep it up! Zia Khan 21:59, 28 January 2013 (UTC)
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