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| The intro mentions FORscene waaay too many times. Also, it looks a bit choppy and 4 and 5 references for a couple lines seems a bit excessive. ] 19:51, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | The intro mentions FORscene waaay too many times. Also, it looks a bit choppy and 4 and 5 references for a couple lines seems a bit excessive. ] 19:51, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | ||
| : Thanks. I've diluted the FORscene mentions, but the references are there as a reaction to the last AfD. ] 20:15, 30 May 2006 (UTC) | |||
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Choppy intro
The intro mentions FORscene waaay too many times. Also, it looks a bit choppy and 4 and 5 references for a couple lines seems a bit excessive. Fresheneesz 19:51, 30 May 2006 (UTC)
- Thanks. I've diluted the FORscene mentions, but the references are there as a reaction to the last AfD. Stephen B Streater 20:15, 30 May 2006 (UTC)