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| I think the article is bit spinned toward Chinese POV. I will try to do bit better. ] 22:40, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC) | I think the article is bit spinned toward Chinese POV. I will try to do bit better. ] 22:40, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC) | ||
| Cleaned up the text a bit so it's far less engrish. Probably left a few spelling errors, but hopefully the grammar is more coherent. ] | Cleaned up the text a bit so it's far less engrish. Probably left a few spelling errors, but hopefully the grammar is more coherent. ] 22:35, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC) | ||
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I think the article is bit spinned toward Chinese POV. I will try to do bit better. FWBOarticle 22:40, 31 Aug 2004 (UTC)
Cleaned up the text a bit so it's far less engrish. Probably left a few spelling errors, but hopefully the grammar is more coherent. Chronarion 22:35, 3 Sep 2004 (UTC)