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Removing medical jargon

According to the manual of style for medical articles, medical jargon should be avoided because encyclopedia articles are written for the general public not medical people talking to each other. So, most often the language in the reference material needs to be switched to general language. And health care professionals need to be aware of their habit of using the language carried over from their work or schooling, and switch to general language when they write articles on Misplaced Pages. See Writing for the wrong audience. Also, articles should not be written as patient teaching materials--as if addressing patients. That is the reason that I reworded the article switching patient to people/person, and other minor changes of wording. My understanding is that these types of rewordings are non-controversial here on Misplaced Pages. Sydney Poore/FloNight♥♥♥♥ 13:28, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

Thank you for explaining, FloNight. Seems like a valuable principle to keep in mind, but I'm not sure "patient" counts as jargon. A lot of new vocabulary is introduced to the general reader in this article, I think as long as its clear the article is introducing and defining new terms its ok, we just can't assume the reader understands the technical jargon to begin with.Herbxue (talk) 18:15, 9 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm sorry but I disagree that we should be adding this particular terminology that is widely used by medical personnel when speaking to each other in healthcare but not widely used by ordinary people when discussing illnesses and treatments. "Patient" is jargon that medical personnel use when speaking of their clients and customers. It is not a word that ordinary people use when speaking of themselves in or out of a healthcare setting. Since the material is not specifically written for medical personal or patients I don't think that it is desirable to use that wording when speaking of people in Misplaced Pages articles. Beyond being unnecessarily, it denotes a mentality of ownership of healthcare topics by healthcare personnel that is undesirable in collaborative projects like Misplaced Pages where the end product benefits from the scrutiny of a variety of sub-populations of people interested in the topic.

My background in healthcare is an OB/GYN Registered Nurse (dating back to the 1970s) who specialized in working with women with high risk pregnancies and pregnancy loss. Through my work with these mother, babies, and their families and friends, I came to see the value of eliminating unnecessary jargon from my language. It is not a matter of "dumbing down" information by substituting a less appropriate word. It is recognizing that the consumers of health information on Misplaced Pages are not best thought of as clients and customers of medical personnel. But instead people living with a medial condition, their family, friends, neighbors, and employers, and well as students and the intellectually curious reader.

All that said, I normally remove unnecessary medical jargon in articles about diseases and treatments when I see it, and skip over them when the article is about a medical discipline. Not because I don't think alternative wording is better, but often I don't think that is seems as inappropriate. I went ahead and made the changes in this article because I felt it seemed appropriate to do it. A judgment call on my part. My usual practice on Misplaced Pages is that I don't ordinarily do any reverts when someone objects (unless I'm doing it in my capacity as an oversighter or checkuser based on strict policy.) So, I'm going to leave the article as you reverted it. If someone else sees that value of making the changes then they can do it. Happy editing :-) Sydney Poore/FloNight♥♥♥♥ 14:34, 10 April 2014 (UTC)

Thanks again for the thorough explanation. I am certainly interested in the idea that the words or attitudes used in the article represent "ownership" by one group over another. NPOV can be tricky because the fundamental assumptions of each editor come out not only in the way we word things, but more importantly the basic questions we have that lead to fleshing out the article. Herbxue (talk) 18:06, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

You think Traditional Chinese medicine treats patients? QuackGuru (talk) 18:17, 12 April 2014 (UTC)

You troll much? But seriously, you are not asking me a serious question, are you?Herbxue (talk) 05:39, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Inappropriate conclusion in lede of article

The end of the lede currently concludes that although TCM has some proponents, it is largely "irrational pseudoscience". This statement is problematic for several reasons.

1. The source for the statement is a 7 year old opinion piece. THe problem is not so much the age of the source, but the fact that one opinion is given the privilege of making the definitive value statement of the article (the last sentence of the lede).

2. The article should not be making a definitive value statement. The statement is certainly a notable and wide-spread OPINION, but it must be stated in the article WHO expressed this opinion. If not, it suggests that WP has collectively concluded that this opinion is fact. We have not.

3. Both words "irrational" and "pseudoscience" are intentionally pejorative terms - they do not add anything to the readers understanding of the issues involved, they are simply insults. If you want the reader to understand the lack of confirmation of TCM ideas by science, you can do so by simply citing the results of systematic reviews (which is what we have to do to justify a positive statement in WP med-related articles). If you don't do this, you are giving an opinion here, but presenting it as if it were fact. That is inappropriate. Herbxue (talk) 06:59, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Criticism needs to be included in the lede, and since TCM is fringe this needs to be made plain according to policy. Nature seems a fine source for such a claim, and age does not matter unless there's evidence TCM has lost its pseudoscience. Of recent interest here is Jimbo's statement on this subject: see Misplaced Pages:Lunatic charlatans. Alexbrn 07:09, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

I fully agree that criticism needs to be included, but an opinion piece in Nature does not constitute a fact that must be disproven (as you suggest), it is just an opinion. Your use of terms like fringe, pseudoscience, and lunatic charlatans shows that you are more interested in POV pushing than an honest appraisal of facts. You seem to take "Jimbo"'s POV to mean that WP policy is to push an anti-fringe POV - that is not what he said, he said some sources are reliable and others aren't. Herbxue (talk) 08:01, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Best to avoid ranting and personal attacks: you're pulling quite a few of the tactics outlined in WP:FLAT. TCM is obviously based on pseudoscience (meridians, anybody?) and that fringeiness needs to be abundantly clear in the lede according to our policy. Alexbrn 08:36, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

The only thing that's obvious is that using pejorative labels is controversial, as seen in the lengthy dialogue about use of the term pseudoscience in previous talk page conversations (of which I was not the main person arguing against using the term). So, to say its obvious the article should conclude with a value judgement about an entire medical system is nonsense. This is an encyclopedia, not "Consumer Reports". Show, don't tell. Herbxue (talk) 15:18, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Are you referring to the category discussion? Whether we use the pseudoscience category is a different question (on which I have no firm view). However, saying TCM is "largely irrational pseudoscience" (which the Nature piece says is "obvious") is fine - and not the least bit controversial, I'd have thought. Is there any serious dispute over the statement? Alexbrn 15:26, 13 April 2014 (UTC)

Yes, there is. Its fine to include as long as you clearly identify, in the body of the text, who is expressing that it is irrational pseudoscience. As it is written, it implies that WP editors have come to consensus that TCM is irrational pseudoscience. We have not, but even if we did it would be Original Research to express it in this way, thus a violation of guidelines. If the statement is changed to clearly assign ownership of that opinion / conclusion, then I have no problem with it. As it is, it is inappropriate. Herbxue (talk) 05:12, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

So that would be a WP:FLAT No 3? – "You must not say 'the earth is not flat' but 'according to critics of the flat-earth theory, the earth is not flat'". Needlessly attributing uncontroversial statements risks creating the appearance of doubt or disagreement where there is none. Alexbrn 05:23, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

That's a dismissal on your part, not a sincere engagement with the issue. The "earth is not flat" is not equivalent here. MIllions of people consider TCM to be a valuable system of medicine, don't dismiss them unless you really know them (many are accomplished scientists). I assure you, the statement is controversial and disputable. You are smart enough to know that the article as written makes a conclusion that represents an opinion, and I have made clear that I am not interested in censoring out that opinion, only in making sure it is properly attributed. Herbxue (talk) 06:05, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Ha! By swaying to popular misconception we'd be in trouble with our UFO, creationist, homeopathy, etc. articles too! TCM is essentially a medieval pre-scientific belief system that has no correspondence with real science. No serious source disputes that. It's just an obvious fact which we can, and should, assert. You have provided no sources for your argument, merely: assertions (that the statement is controversial), an argumentum ad populum and a personal attack. Alexbrn 06:19, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

"We" could if we had consensus, and we don't. Simply agree to attribute the quote to its source and you would be doing the honorable and scientific thing to do. Instead you just make comparisons to other, more marginalized subjects. TCM may not be mainstream, but it is not "fringe" - there is licensure in many countries and universities dedicated to the subject in Asia and accredited colleges in the U.S. There are many convergences between TCM treatments and scientifically-verified actions of substances, so your dismissal that there is "no correspondence with real science" just shows your ignorance of the subject. If you do not understand the subject, how can you determine what an "obvious" judgement of its merits is? You cannot - you are only presenting an opinion. Herbxue (talk) 06:51, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I merely echo the mainstream, expert sources. Again, your arguments are of no use here. TCM is licensed in some countries ... so? Homeopathy is available from the National Health Service - that doesn't mean it's science. To repeat: "Needlessly attributing uncontroversial statements risks creating the appearance of doubt or disagreement where there is none". Show me the sources. Alexbrn 07:42, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

There are many sources stating that TCM is "pseudoscience". The question should be: "Why is there only one reference calling TCM pseudoscience?" Practitioners call TCM "science", yet the practitioners don't seem to perform scientific studies, so it passes the WP:DUCK test. I.e. pseudoscience. Given all of the points @Alexbrn: has made here, the "honorable" and "scientific" thing to do here is to call it Fringe and Pseudoscience. @Herbxue: your behaviour here is bordering on a personal attack. Please focus on content. Jim1138 (talk) 07:35, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

The Joseph Needham source (currently in further reading) has some good content that can be used to expand the article explaining the disjunction between TCM and science. I hope to have time to get round to this shortly (unless somebody beats me to it!). Alexbrn 07:44, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I respectfully disagree Jim. Practitioners generally do not call TCM science, and yet often do participate in scientific studies. I have personally conducted a pilot study on a topical herbal preparation, and have the highest respect for those that conduct serious research as a career. Alexbrn gets under my skin because he defended POV-pushing edits by Dominusvobisdu that misrepresented Ernst's conclusions regarding placebo effect, and thus has a history of preferring his opinion over facts. That should not cloud the real issue here - labeling a system of thought that is pre-scientific and that does not claim to be based on science "pseudoscience" is an expression of opinion, not fact. It may be a popular opinion, it may even be the MOST popular opinion, but that does not make it fact. An opinion should be attributed to those who express it in the body of an article. Alex, I fully welcome your contributions about the "disjunction between TCM and science", I have no problem with that line of thinking. Herbxue (talk) 07:56, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

An appeal to personal experience and more personalization. If the statement is not in serious dispute (i.e. in high-quality sources) then it's a fact we can just assert. Failing to do so would not be neutral. Alexbrn 08:01, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

We've gotten circular at this point, need input from others.Herbxue (talk) 15:16, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Looks to me like there's no consensus for your proposed change. Alexbrn 15:19, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

Not yet at least.Herbxue (talk) 21:29, 14 April 2014 (UTC)

I don't feel comfortable with putting "pseudoscience" in the lede, for various reasons.

1.) I think TCM's theoretical base is largely superstitious, but "pseudoscience" implies that TCM actually tries to sound scientific. Which it doesn't. It has used the same terms since 2000 years.

2.) The source we have now is stating nothing else but the opinion of the author of the article, so the source could actually only be used for a sentence like: "An editorial in Nature stated that..."

3.) Apart from "pseudoscience", TCM has also been labeled "proto-science" and "pre-scientific" (and probably a couple of other terms as well that didn't show up on my google search).

My suggestion would be to either to not include all this labeling (and I actually don't understand the necessity for it) or to keep all these sources in a sentence like "TCM has been labeled pseudoscience, proto-science..." etc. --Mallexikon (talk) 10:33, 17 April 2014 (UTC)

i agree with above suggestion. 93.86.155.2 (talk) 15:55, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Comment: calling TCL fringe is beyond ridiculous... Billion+ people in Asia turn to this instead of modern medicine. In fact, one could say modern medicine is fringe for Asians. 93.86.155.2 (talk) 15:43, 18 April 2014 (UTC)

Point taken. However, from a scientific worldview (and that's what we follow on WP), it would still be considered fringe. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:50, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

One controversial descriptor at a time, please :). Looks like there is sufficient doubt that "irrational pseudoscience" is a consensus-driven conclusion here. Again, I am not trying to edit out that opinion, but we as WP have not concluded that TCM, without a doubt, deserves to be labeled as such. I will make a neutral edit now.Herbxue (talk) 06:18, 20 April 2014 (UTC)

QG reverted my neutral edit as OR, so I just changed the (overly) close paraphrase to a quote (it was basically a quote already, though someone slipped the word "irrational" in for extra flavor, not from the source). Herbxue (talk) 14:44, 22 April 2014 (UTC)

How about a sentence in the form of: "TCM has been both been labeled a protoscience(citation) and a pseudoscience(citation)"...? --Mallexikon (talk) 06:04, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

"TCM has been both been labeled a protoscience(citation) and a pseudoscience(citation)" is engaging in original research. QuackGuru (talk) 06:10, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Let's not get pointy. Of course, we could split the sentence: "TCM has been labeled a protoscience(citation). TCM has been labeled a pseudoscience(citation)." But that would sound imbecile, no? And we're here to build an encyclopaedia with good articles, no? --Mallexikon (talk) 07:55, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

"From the standpoint of Cognitive Science, Chinese Medicine appears as a proto-scientific system of health observances and practices based on a symptomological classification of disease using two elementary dynamical-processes pattern categorization schemas: a hierarchical and combinatorial inhibiting-activating model (Yin-Yang), and a non-hierarchical and associative five-parameter semantic network (5-Elements/Agents)."(PMID 17965759) That is nonsense.

"TCM has been labeled a protoscience(failed verification). TCM has been labeled a pseudoscience(failed verification)." QuackGuru (talk) 17:32, 23 April 2014 (UTC)

Not quite clear what you're trying to say. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:37, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Doesn't seem to fail verification in any sense. Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 10:54, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

The source does not say "TCM has been labeled a protoscience".(PMID 17965759)

"TCM has been labeled a pseudoscience" is OR and does not tell the reader anything. I call it diluting the facts. QuackGuru (talk) 06:18, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

The source says "proto-scientific system". If you'd like to claim that that is not covered by WP:Close paraphrasing, I'll be happy to go into WP:DR about this. A third-party opinion might be a good starting point. --Mallexikon (talk) 09:05, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

The source written by the trade fails WP:FRIND for such an extreme view. We have independent sourcing for pseudoscience. You can't obscure the facts with the bias source. QuackGuru (talk) 19:46, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

The source, a peer-reviewed journal, is reliable. If that is a "trade" journal, then so is any journal publishing pharmaceutical research. Herbxue (talk) 19:50, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Take the source to the noticeboard if you still disagree. See Misplaced Pages:Fringe theories/Noticeboard/Archive 40#Evidence-based Complementary and Alternative Medicine for previous WP:CON. QuackGuru (talk) 19:54, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

The source is from a peer-reviewed scientific journal. It would take more than a couple editor's opinions to convince me that it is a fringe source. With one editorial calling TCM pseudoscience and an article calling it protoscience, it is clear that there are differences of opinion as to what label it should have, and none of the sources include what the profession itself would label itself as. With all this diversity, the article should certainly not make an OR conclusion that it is pseudoscience. I'd be fine with both labels being included, clearly attributed to the authors asserting the label.Herbxue (talk) 20:41, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Looks like a strong, reliable source to me. A peer-reviewed scientific journal, which of the best possible sources there can be. Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 10:54, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

For now we should abide by WP:CON. You are free to start another discussion about the source at Misplaced Pages:Fringe theories/Noticeboard. QuackGuru (talk) 20:58, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Ok, well we have multiple editors agreeing that pseudoscience is not appropriate for the lede so I will abide by WP:CON and remove the whole sentence.Herbxue (talk) 21:00, 24 April 2014 (UTC)

Agree, I don't think pseudoscience is quite appropriate. Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 10:54, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Not only pseudoscience label is inappropriate, but talking about TCM in context of fringe and similar guidelines is even more inappropriate. I don't think some editors here understand what fringe means. Even the cited guideline explains something different, read the nutshell if nothing further... 178.221.90.250 (talk) 10:49, 25 April 2014 (UTC)

This has been hashed out a number of times before. I would recommend reviewing the archives

Pseudoscience is appropriate. Besides the cite, it fits the wp:duck test. Many claim it to be scientific, yet fails to use scientific methodology. Many mechanisms of effect are not testable or fail testing. The Pseudoscience label should stay. Consensus has not been reached. Jim1138 (talk) 02:52, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Archives yield this: https://en.wikipedia.org/Talk:Traditional_Chinese_medicine/Archive_3#Pseudoscience

I would agree consensus has not been reached - either for or against use of the term pseudoscience, and certainly not for the article concluding it is pseudoscience in the lede. I propose a compromise - simply clearly show, in the text of the article, who asserts that it is pseudoscience. Herbxue (talk) 20:23, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

A summary in the lede for Traditional Chinese medicine#Drug research is appropriate. QuackGuru (talk) 20:28, 26 April 2014 (UTC)

Labels: Pseudoscience, proto-science, pre-science

I added the material about proto-science and pre-science. The source for "proto-science" is a peer-viewed journal; therefore, the formal requirements for WP:RS and WP:FRIND are fulfilled. If someone wants to challenge this source anyway, it would be on them to prove that this source is not reliable even though it is peer-reviewed. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:32, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

See Misplaced Pages:Fringe theories/Noticeboard/Archive 40#Evidence-based Complementary and Alternative Medicine for previous WP:CON on the source written by the trade. The other misplaced text is from a personal website that is not a summary of Traditional Chinese medicine#Drug research. QuackGuru (talk) 01:38, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

I read Misplaced Pages:Fringe theories/Noticeboard/Archive 40#Evidence-based Complementary and Alternative Medicine. Nowhere does it say that there's consensus to not use this journal. Please provide evidence if you think this peer-reviewed journal is not reliable. Otherwise please move on. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:53, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Our lede currently carries the sentence: "Although advocates have argued that research had missed some key features of TCM, such as the subtle interrelationships between ingredients, it has been suspected that the reason for these scarce results is that TCM is largely pseudoscience." IMO, this is too much information for the lede.

I suggest to shorten this sentence to "TCM has also been labeled pseudoscience" and put it behind "It is considered a protoscience, and has been compared to the humoral theory of Galen." --Mallexikon (talk) 04:54, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

I support your suggestion, even though I think the comparison to humoral theory is unfair considering one died out long ago and another has been continually practiced. Still, it is important to contextualize the labels properly and your suggestion is the most appropriate so far.Herbxue (talk) 07:50, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

It isn't protoscience, for the simple reason that current investigations of TCM are characterised by pseudoscience. Earlier (as in prior to Mao's resurrection of the field) investigations are non-science or pre-science or whatever but we reflect current practice in this article, because this article, although it discusses history, describes current practice. The status of TCM inquiry can be assessed by reference to its views on qi and humours: once TCM robustly rejects those ideas as incorrect, we will have some confidence that it has begun a process of proper science. Guy (Help!) 10:08, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

sometimes it is good to trust your eyes. if quantum mechanics can be true, even though nobody understands it, why qi cannot? something being unlikely does not make it impossible. . go qi go! 212.200.205.18 (talk) 20:53, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

@Guy: I also think it's a pseudoscience, but your and my opinion doesn't matter. There is no wrong or right reasoning here - it all comes down to different sources calling it this or that. I think it's deplorable to argue about labels here, especially pejorative ones. This article should give an NPOV description of TCM. Adding "it is largely pseudoscience" to the lede definitely doesn't make this a better article, and it adds zero important information for the reader. It just makes it sound like we want to nail our colors to the mast. --Mallexikon (talk) 03:48, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Pseudoscience

For the pseudoscience label, we're currently using this source: "So if traditional Chinese medicine is so great, why hasn't the qualitative study of its outcomes opened the door to a flood of cures? The most obvious answer is that it actually has little to offer: it is largely just pseudoscience, with no rational mechanism of action for most of its therapies." This sentence is a grammatically difficult structure, and I'd like to point out that the colon connects the "it is largely just pseudoscience" with the "the most obvious answer is...". That means, this article is only suspecting that (the reason why success stories like the discovery of Artemisin are so few and far between is that) TCM is a pseudoscience. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:50, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Feel free to suggest a better wording of that sentence. Guy (Help!) 09:50, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

The suggestion to state only "TCM has also been labeled pseudoscience". in the lede does not tell the reader much. The previous wording added by User:Mallexikon was not an improvement. For example, it has been suspected is weasel wordings to skew/dilute the facts. QuackGuru (talk) 17:00, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Nope - it is clearer. Anything more is OR. Herbxue (talk) 23:11, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

This source has been correctly reflected in our article's "Drug research" section: "... a 2007 editorial in Nature said that while this may simply be because TCM is largely pseudoscience..."

The sentence featured in our lede ("... it is largely pseudoscience..."), however, is a POV interpretation which is simply not covered by the source. It would either have to be changed or deleted. --Mallexikon (talk) 03:22, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

Looks like an accurate summary of the source to me. It appears that your trying to shift the burden of proof from the TCM side to the science side. The rule in science is that it's bullshit until proven otherwise, and TCM proponents have not offered much in the way of proof. Quite the opposite, in fact. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 02:05, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

I'm not trying to shift anything. Of course TCM theory is probably bullshit. But we're writing an encyclopaedia here that wants to be better than the Britannica. Throwing around labels like "pseudoscience" is just angry, pubertal POV - Britannica would never do this, unless it's universally excepted. But we don't even have a source saying TCM is universally excepted to be pseudoscience. We only have a source saying "the most probable cause why there haven't been a lot of breakthroughs in isolating new efficient medicaments from TCM herbs is that TCM is largely just pseudoscience". That's not adequate sourcing to put "TCM is pseudoscience" in the lede. So sure, knock yourselves out and satisfy your anger. After all, WP maybe is a place to right big wrongs (like all those soccer moms going crazy about alternative medicine). Why not put "TCM is just pseudoscience" at the top of the lede? Why use a source for this at all, since we have so many smart people on WP agreeing on it? And within no time, WP will look exactly like all of us white male tech/science-friendly geeks like it. Great job. --Mallexikon (talk) 02:36, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

You do realize that you lose a lot of credibility when you lay down the race card, don't you? If that's how you think, then you're going to have a very difficult time convincing other editors to work with you. Best idea is to step back and banish all such thoughts from your head. TCM, or any other bullshit, doesn't deserve a break because it's "not white". That's silly romantic era thinking of the "noble savage" sort that is actually highly insulting and condescending to non-westerners. And we don't need a source stating that "TCM is universally excepted to be pseudoscience". Consensus does not require unanimity. The source is correct: when a school of thought has been singularly unsuccessful in providing anything in the way of scientific validity for it's practices, it's a pretty safe bet that it's a pseudoscience. And I see nothing wrong at all in pointing that out here in WP. The source's conclusion is not as ambiguous as you seem to think. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 03:18, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Wow, the white/male/tech-friendly assumption really hit a nerve in you, did it? Let me put it this way: as long as you don't show me a source saying that TCM is generally accepted to be a pseudoscience, there'll be no consensus to include this here. The source we use right now is misused. It's being used correctly in the "drug research" section. It's not being used correctly in the lede. I guess it's time for WP:DR. --Mallexikon (talk) 04:04, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

What on earth do my nerves have to do with the discussion at hand? Keep personal comments like that to yourself in the future. They have no place on WP.

I've considered your arguments and have said all I have to say on this matter, and think that further discussion on this matter is pointless, either here or at DR. Dominus Vobisdu (talk) 05:45, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Definitely not pointless, this matter is not settled.Herbxue (talk) 17:14, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Protoscience

rest my case 212.200.205.18 (talk) 20:04, 27 April 2014 (UTC)

Once TCM is brought to the standards of modern medicine, it won't be TCM but "medicine". Currently it is not. It seems that few TCM practitioners will agree on fundamental points such as the mechanism of action. Nothing has changed by that declaration, so it is still pseudoscience. Jim1138 (talk) 17:02, 28 April 2014 (UTC)

I also think it's a pseudoscience, but your and my opinion doesn't matter. There is no wrong or right reasoning here - it all comes down to different sources calling it this or that. I think it's deplorable to argue about labels here, especially pejorative ones. This article should give an NPOV description of TCM. Adding "it is largely pseudoscience" to the lede definitely doesn't make this a better article, and it adds zero important information for the reader. It just makes it sound like we want to nail our colors to the mast. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:00, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

The edit did not match the edit summary. You deleted sourced text that is part of the summary of the body. QuackGuru (talk) 01:40, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

"ideas should not be portrayed as rejected or labeled with pejoratives such as pseudoscience unless such claims can be documented in reliable sources." - WP:FRINGE. Nature is an impeccable and highly reliable source for such claims. Adam Cuerden 11:19, 29 April 2014 (UTC)

Note: there is a discussion at Misplaced Pages:Dispute resolution noticeboard#Traditional Chinese medicine. I thought the debate was settling down a bit here but now it has bubbled over to acupuncture. QuackGuru (talk) 06:11, 30 April 2014 (UTC)

Disruptive editing by user QuackGuru

I have been observing the editing style of a certain user, QuackGuru (talk), for quite a while now. Out of the 500 last edits on this article's page, 282 has been carried out by the same user (which is 56,4% of all edits). The editing is really disruptive, as there might be even up to 10 different edits in a row from the same user with immature edit summaries, such as "nonsense", "total nonsense", etc.

Also the user is clearly more interested in pushing his own opinions rather than building a well-balanced, neutral point of view article. For example, in the narrow field of alternative medicine articles, QuackGuru is clearly switching between different wikitags according to whatever best might suit his personal views:

1. The user adds a {{copyright violation}} tag.
2. The user changes it to a {{citation needed}} tag.
3. As this didn't work out with the other editors either, now he changes the tag into {{POV-statement}}.
4. Finally, user Paavo273 reverts the latest attempt of QuackGuru by stating: "...Remove POV tag that replaced one or more other tags. See talk...."

This applies to all the alternative medicine articles (Traditional Chinese Medicine, Chriropractic, etc.) Overall, the editing is aggressive in both terms of reverts and misuse of wikitags, as well as it is fragmented and hard to follow. There is no question why the articles have so strong opinionated bias.

Therefore, I'd like the user to stop the disruptive editing and respect the other contributors as well. Misplaced Pages isn't one man's project. Should there be any difficulties with the technical side of editing, please get familiar with WP:SANDBOX where he can practice editing without causing a nuisance to the other users. Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 10:49, 2 May 2014 (UTC)

QG reverts just about every edit I ever make, without discussion, and has the nerve to accuse me of edit warring. He thinks he owns all these articles. I'm really tired of it. Herbxue (talk) 18:54, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Herbxue (talk), I have noticed the exactly same in QuackGuru's aggressive editing behaviour. According to

DVMt (talk) at another alternative medicile article, Chiropractic, QuackGuru has been banned earlier for his disruptive editing in alternative medicine articles.
He has also been warned by administrator EdJohnston from editwarring the alternative medicine articles here: ,
as well as been warned by another administrator Tiptoety here: . "...Hi QuackGuru. Please consider this your only warning for edit warring on Traditional Chinese medicine. ... I'll also note that if you continue to edit war on Pseudoscience related articles, I will impose a 1RR restriction your account per the discretionary sanctions..."
It is clear that the user is still continuing the same disruptive way of behaviour.

This appears to be forum shopping by User:Jayaguru-Shishya. You already brought it up here Talk:Chiropractic#Disruptive_editing_by_user_QuackGuru. Adding the same text on more than one page is not useful. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:47, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

I am sorry (talk · contribs · email), I don't quite understand. If you look at the other thread, you'll see that it is not the same post. The problem is the same, but that's concerning the Chiropractic article.

If you have specific edits / content you wish to discuss, discuss them. Making comments like "He thinks he owns all these articles." is not useful. Doc James (talk · contribs · email) (if I write on your page reply on mine) 20:49, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

No. At the time I posted this thread, 282 edits out of 500 in this very article were done by one single user, QuackGuru. Many of them includes reverts such as I described above. It means that nobody will post 282 different posts discussing every single edit at the Talk Page; the problem is the user himself.

Since mid-April, I did 9 edits. Out of these 9 edits, 6 were reverted by QG (, , , , , ).

Good point. The latest warning for editwarring for QuackGuru by administrator Tiptoety you can find over here: ]

This last revert is particularly funny since the reason given for it was: "Consensus is to leave this out of the article" - there was, however, not even a discussion about it. The source is a reliable skeptic journal, the author of the article is Steven Novella. My summary of the source is truthful. How do you explain reverts like this? --Mallexikon (talk) 03:18, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

This source was previously deleted and it isn't protoscience. You can also read this comment. QuackGuru (talk) 03:47, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

So... what exact rationale are you citing for reverting this edit? --Mallexikon (talk) 05:18, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

I don't see any point QuackGuru is trying to make with his last comment. The problem stay unchanged, the user himself. You have been warned multiple times. Jayaguru-Shishya (talk) 10:59, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Labels: pseudoscience, protoscience

We are arguing about the last sentence in the lede, which currently reads:

Although advocates have argued that research had missed some key features of TCM, such as the subtle interrelationships between ingredients, it is largely pseudoscience, with no valid mechanism of action for the majority of its treatments.

We already have a form of words in the lede that makes the situation clear:

Nonetheless, the bulk of these precepts, including the model of the body, or concept of disease, are not supported by science or evidence-based medicine. TCM is not based upon the current body of knowledge related to health care in accordance with the scientific community.

Having ploughed my way through the above and the DR threads, I've come to a few conclusions:

1) TCM is not a protoscience because (AFAIK) it shows no signs of working towards a scientific method. The journal Evidence-Based Complementary and Alternative Medicine is at the lower end of the peer-reviewed scale, but it is still on that scale. Subject to consensus we could therefore use the word, but personally I don't think it's useful to the article, certainly not in the lede.

2) TCM is not a pseudoscience because, like many other systems of medicine, it doesn't even imitate any sort of scientific method. To qualify as pseudoscience it needs to at least try to test hypotheses against observation. However, the word "pseudoscience" is also used - as by the Nature reference - to mean "rubbish". We could use the word, tout court, in the lede, though, personally, I'd omit it and simply remove the last sentence of the current lede. Noting however the majority opinion for inclusion, I might suggest keeping all the criticism together, using the word "pseudoscience", but because of its ambiguous meaning, reporting the usage of a RS rather than offering a simple assertion in Misplaced Pages's voice. Maybe something like:

Nonetheless, the bulk of these precepts, including the model of the body, or concept of disease, are not supported by science or evidence-based medicine. TCM is not based upon the current body of knowledge related to health care in accordance with the scientific community. It has been described as "largely pseudoscience", with no valid mechanism of action for the majority of its treatments.

I hope this helps. I feel inclined to try a bold edit, but I'll solicit comments first. Richard Keatinge (talk) 10:21, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Nonetheless, the bulk of these precepts, including the model of the body, or concept of disease, are not supported by science or evidence-based medicine. The TCM theory is not based upon the current body of knowledge related to health care in accordance with the scientific community.

This sentence above is about the TCM theory. TCM is a separate issue.

Although advocates have argued that research had missed some key features of TCM, such as the subtle interrelationships between ingredients, it is largely pseudoscience, with no valid mechanism of action for the majority of its treatments.

This sentence is neutrally written. Your proposal dramatically weakens the meaning of this sentence and adding "It has been described" is a violation of WP:ASSERT and WP:OR. QuackGuru (talk) 18:03, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

I support Richard's proposal, although the whole quote from the nature article should be in quotations (as it is all a quote from the same editorial). As Richard states, the journal using the term protoscience meets requirements, and it is fair game to use, just as much as the nature article is fair game. I also agree that the article already made the point that many TCM concepts are not supported by bioscience, so the edit in question is redundant and is just piling on derogatory labels with no purpose other than to push POV (even harder than it is already pushed in the article).Herbxue (talk) 18:52, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

TCM and TCM theory are two separate things. See WP:IDHT. I clarified the text. Conflating the two together is WP:OR. QuackGuru (talk) 19:08, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

Actually "Although" may introduce a false dichotomy - there is not, necessarily, any opposition between "pseudoscience" and "subtle interrelationships between ingredients", and the rest of QuackGuru's sentence might be considered, in light of the various usages of the word "pseudoscience", to be difficult to maintain in the light of WP:ASSERT.

"It has been described" - it has, and I'm suggesting that we don't have sufficient agreement on the usage of "pseudoscience" here to say it ourselves. However, thanks for adding "theory" - edit conflict, I was just going to. The paragraph becomes:

Nonetheless, the bulk of these precepts, including the model of the body, or concept of disease, are not supported by science or evidence-based medicine. TCM is not based upon the current body of knowledge related to health care in accordance with the scientific community. Its theoretical basis has been described as "largely pseudoscience", with no valid mechanism of action for the majority of its treatments.

While I'm at it, this is not importantly weaker than a direct assertion in our voice, but it allows us to distance ourselves appropriately from the ambiguity of the term's use, and may allow us to come to a consensus. Richard Keatinge (talk) 20:25, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

"It has been described" is still a violation of WP:ASSERT. There is no in light of the various usages of the word "pseudoscience".

"Its theoretical basis"... is also WP:OR. TCM and the TCM theory are different things.

According to the source: "Advocates respond by claiming that researchers are missing aspects of the art, notably the interactions between different ingredients in traditional therapies." Therefore, the current wording is accurate.

The text beginning with Nonetheless, the bulk of these precepts,... is about the theory. The other text is about TCM. We can't merge two different things into one paragraph. QuackGuru (talk) 20:58, 4 May 2014 (UTC)

I basically support Richard's proposal. To be responsive to QG's WP:OR concerns, however, I suggest we write "It has been described as "largely pseudoscience", with no valid mechanism of action for the majority of its treatments."

WP:ASSERT is definitely not violated by us writing this. On the contrary, trying to distort the statement of an editorial which says "The most obvious answer is that ... it is largely just pseudoscience, with no rational mechanism of action for most of its therapies" into "TCM is pseudoscience" would violate WP:ASSERT, since it would feign an assertion that is just not there. The wording in the editorial is too ambiguous. It's hardly more than speculation. --Mallexikon (talk) 01:43, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

The proposal is conflating two separate issues. Claiming It has been described is not what the source says. The source does say "it is largely just pseudoscience". The source is discussing TCM. Read the paragraph beginning with So if traditional Chinese medicine is so great, why hasn't the qualitative study of its outcomes opened the door to a flood of cures?. This text is part of a summary of a model of the body and this text is a summary of drug research. QuackGuru (talk) 03:11, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

The DRN is still open on this topic. The DR does not seem to have consensus for change. So, the pseudoscience phrase should probably stay as-is. There is the Chinese Medicine journal. The home page states: Chinese Medicine is an open access, online journal publishing evidence-based, scientifically justified, and ethical research into all aspects of Chinese medicine. Given that, Dr. Keatinge, would you agree that would indicate an "imitation of scientific medicine" and that the pseudoscience statement should stay? Jim1138 (talk) 04:27, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

"The DR does not seem to have consensus for change. So, the pseudoscience phrase should probably stay as-is". Sure. That's also a way to make sure you have your way. You use an ambiguous editorial to make a statement violating WP:ASSERT, just revert anyone who opposes this, and then demand that your POV edit has to stay where it is since there'd have to be consensus for change. Brilliant! --Mallexikon (talk) 04:45, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

Interesting how you apply WP:ASSERT to me, but not to Keatinge or other supporters. If you note, I am writing in the talk page, but not the article nor proposing it be put in the article, so how does WP:ASSERT apply? Jim1138 (talk) 07:04, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

The assertion you want to keep in the article ("TCM is largely pseudoscience") can not be found in this way in the source. The source's wording is "So if traditional Chinese medicine is so great, why hasn't the qualitative study of its outcomes opened the door to a flood of cures? The most obvious answer is that it actually has little to offer: it is largely just pseudoscience, with no rational mechanism of action for most of its therapies." The structure of the sentence is somewhat complicated by the (superfluous) subordinate clause "... that it actually has little to offer". But it basically says "The most obvious answer is: it is largely just pseudoscience". This source (and let's keep in mind that this is an editorial) is speculating. Trying to present this speculation as a fact violates WP:ASSERT ("The text of Misplaced Pages articles should assert facts, but not assert opinions as fact"). We'd also violate WP:FRIND ("ideas should not be portrayed as rejected or labeled with pejoratives such as pseudoscience unless such claims can be documented in reliable sources"). To keep the term pseudoscience in the article, we'd have to use it differently. "It has been described as pseudoscience" sounds like a passable way to me. --Mallexikon (talk) 07:49, 5 May 2014 (UTC)

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