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**Sentences that need them - Find sentences that are debatable, controverial, or something a proponent of ] would argue with and list them as "citation needed". Then follow the previous instruction right above. **Sentences that need them - Find sentences that are debatable, controverial, or something a proponent of ] would argue with and list them as "citation needed". Then follow the previous instruction right above.
*'''Add to "Facts and Statistics"''' - needs to be fact-checked and more information about organics in other countries should be added *'''Add to "Facts and Statistics"''' - needs to be fact-checked and more information about organics in other countries should be added
*'''Incompetent Writing''' The author fails to define the central concepts of the article. To start, lose "in general"(P1) and state the qualities shared by ALL organic food. Only then will the central organic/conventional comparisons carry any weight at all.

Revision as of 07:15, 16 July 2006

  • Add Images of fresh, organic fruit - Replace the image of one organic apple with a picture that shows more types of organic fruit, or an organic farmer's market - something that captures organic food and is more interesting to look at!
  • Deal with "Citation Needed" notices
    • Sentences already with them - Try to find a reference online for them and put them on this page. If a reference can't quickly or easily be found...delete the sentence?
    • Sentences that need them - Find sentences that are debatable, controverial, or something a proponent of factory farming would argue with and list them as "citation needed". Then follow the previous instruction right above.
  • Add to "Facts and Statistics" - needs to be fact-checked and more information about organics in other countries should be added
  • Incompetent Writing The author fails to define the central concepts of the article. To start, lose "in general"(P1) and state the qualities shared by ALL organic food. Only then will the central organic/conventional comparisons carry any weight at all.