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::*Making reasonably good points about the direction of the coalition that were often never followed up.
::*Making reasonably good points about the direction of the coalition that were often never followed up.
::*The so-called ].
::*The so-called ].
::*Tory speculation of a Labour-SNP coalition.
::*Forget now, but I think they may also have mentioned a lack of narrative post-2010 that allowed the coalition to blame Labour for creating a world recession.
::*Forget now, but I think they may also have mentioned a lack of narrative post-2010 that allowed the coalition to blame Labour for creating a world recession.
::Happy to read through this again at some point in the next few days and make more suggestions. Cheers, ] (]) 14:25, 6 June 2015 (UTC)
::Possibly not all of this would be relevant here, but I'm happy to read through this again at some point in the next few days and make more suggestions. Cheers, ] (]) 14:25, 6 June 2015 (UTC)
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The only thing I see is a red page with Ed Miliband's picture and 'Vote Miliband'? Does anybody knows what's going on? --Wester (talk) 15:09, 7 May 2015 (UTC)
I removed a detail that is from someone else's bio, as it is It is irrelevant to Ed Miliband . It is distracting in reading (as the text says later on: his father had 'roving' career, that should do it. Correctly, not all subsequenct job changes of another person are mentioned here). However, it was reverted twice by Bus stop. Full sequence, for the es's:
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Bus stop motivated the inclusion by explaining that that other person was his father no less, and what had happened to his father. However, I do not dispute those facts. I state that these facts are irrelevant to this bio. How is it noteworthy for Ed's bio that his father was at the LSE (or even that his father was not at LSE any more)? I see no relevant connection. Including an irrelevant fact is confusing too.
A 5 word mention of his resignation and defeat in the GE isn't really that sufficient. I've added some information but I think someone should add information seat losses etc. 86.128.123.174 (talk) 13:37, 28 May 2015 (UTC)
A few things spring to mind, although without reading through the Misplaced Pages article again, I don't know if we've used them already. But here goes:
There's the disastrous party conference speech in which he forgot to mention the economy.
Labour's apparent lack of direction before and during the election campaign.
Making reasonably good points about the direction of the coalition that were often never followed up.
Forget now, but I think they may also have mentioned a lack of narrative post-2010 that allowed the coalition to blame Labour for creating a world recession.
Possibly not all of this would be relevant here, but I'm happy to read through this again at some point in the next few days and make more suggestions. Cheers, This is Paul (talk) 14:25, 6 June 2015 (UTC)