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			:*] Hook is short and punchy (and slightly tweaked for clarity), sourcing is thorough, and the text is detailed and sufficiently neutral. Article was 1597 characters of readable prose before expansion began and 10328 characters five days after, far exceeding the 5x expansion requirement. However, spot checks of the prose found close paraphrasing (such as "his size coming out of high school kept bigger schools away" from the '']'' and "His size when graduating from high school had kept bigger schools away" from the article) which needs to be cleared up before this can be promoted. - ] (]) 01:10, 26 June 2015 (UTC)
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Ali Marpet

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... that Ali Marpet is the highest-drafted NFL pick in the history of NCAA Division III American football?

Reviewed: Terug tot Ina Damman.

5x expanded by Epeefleche (talk). Self-nominated at 21:24, 29 May 2015 (UTC).

Hook is short and punchy (and slightly tweaked for clarity), sourcing is thorough, and the text is detailed and sufficiently neutral. Article was 1597 characters of readable prose before expansion began and 10328 characters five days after, far exceeding the 5x expansion requirement. However, spot checks of the prose found close paraphrasing (such as "his size coming out of high school kept bigger schools away" from the Boston Globe and "His size when graduating from high school had kept bigger schools away" from the article) which needs to be cleared up before this can be promoted. - Dravecky (talk) 01:10, 26 June 2015 (UTC)

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