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:*] New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Hook cited in article but could not be verified because the presumed source in full is only available to subscribers. The phrase "demonstrate who was boss" is very informal--if possible could you provide me with the part of the article that states this? If you can't, then at least make the hook a bit more formal. ]]<sup>]</sup> 01:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC) |
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:*] New enough, long enough, QPQ done. Hook cited in article but could not be verified because the presumed source in full is only available to subscribers. The phrase "demonstrate who was boss" is very informal--if possible could you provide me with the part of the article that states this? If you can't, then at least make the hook a bit more formal. ]]<sup>]</sup> 01:53, 17 July 2015 (UTC) |
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::*Thanks, Ben. Certainly -- the article sentence that I was paraphrasing in my own words was "As a child he suffered blows from Alon, who made the hierarchy at home clear." Alon is his older brother. Open to suggestions. Best. Sorry for the slow response -- have not had pc access. ] (]) 22:45, 21 July 2015 (UTC) |
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