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| * Acquire copyedits. | * Acquire copyedits. | ||
| *As another example, we later have a paragraph that begins, egregiously: "1958 Kurosawa film '']'' was a strong influence, many elements are included such as the two bickering peasants (who evolved into C-3PO and R2-D2), elements of the Obi-Wan/Luke relationship and the Darth Vader-like evil general wears a kamon, commonly called simply a 'mon', a Japanese family crest similar to the Imperial Crest." |
*As another example, we later have a paragraph that begins, egregiously: "1958 Kurosawa film '']'' was a strong influence, many elements are included such as the two bickering peasants (who evolved into C-3PO and R2-D2), elements of the Obi-Wan/Luke relationship and the Darth Vader-like evil general wears a kamon, commonly called simply a 'mon', a Japanese family crest similar to the Imperial Crest." | ||
| *As a final example, chosen virtually at random, examine the first sentence of the "]" section: "''Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope'' debuted in 37 theaters and broke 36 house records, and effectively become the very first ] film." | |||
| *Create the Videogames section | *Create the Videogames section | ||
| *Resubmit for GA | *Resubmit for GA | ||
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- Roger Ebert's review of Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope
- James Berardinelli's review of Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope
- In depth review of Star Wars Episode IV: A New Hope on Filmsite
- Acquire copyedits.
- As another example, we later have a paragraph that begins, egregiously: "1958 Kurosawa film The Hidden Fortress was a strong influence, many elements are included such as the two bickering peasants (who evolved into C-3PO and R2-D2), elements of the Obi-Wan/Luke relationship and the Darth Vader-like evil general wears a kamon, commonly called simply a 'mon', a Japanese family crest similar to the Imperial Crest."
- Create the Videogames section
- Resubmit for GA