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:Would someone please explain to Mystar why I made the changes I did, he doesn't listen to me. ] 18:08, 6 September 2006 (UTC) :Would someone please explain to Mystar why I made the changes I did, he doesn't listen to me. ] 18:08, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

::I have to agree with NeoFreak here. His edit is:
::A) Better gramatically,
::B) More concise, and
::B) Gives away less information
::Overall, it's a better introduction, mostly because it can be readily understood by someone unfamiliar with the SoT series. - ] 20:41, 6 September 2006 (UTC)

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I've started this article off but I haven't read it (the book) recently enough to be able to complete it. If no one else follows up, I will read it again and make this a little more accurate and detailed. Kouros 20:30, 6 Sep 2004 (UTC)

Themes section

The Themes section needs a rewrite but I'm really not the right person to do it. The seond sentence needs to go as it's POV, WP:OR and incorrect in tone. If I delete it that only leaves the section with a single sentence so there is really no point in keeping it at all. If no one wants to rewrite it soon-ish I'm just going to pull it but I'd like to see it stay if possible. NeoFreak 09:34, 6 September 2006 (UTC)


NeoFreak, have you read this book? The second sentence, 'There is also an emphasis on the ability to choose our own course in our lives - this is most evident through the parallel tales of Oba and Jennsen', I don't see as POV. The book mainly follows Oba and Jennsen (separately), and shows how when they are both given the same/similar opportunities, they make different choices. Thus, showing us the ability to make our own decisions in life. -Merrit

Would someone please explain to Mystar why I made the changes I did, he doesn't listen to me. NeoFreak 18:08, 6 September 2006 (UTC)
I have to agree with NeoFreak here. His edit is:
A) Better gramatically,
B) More concise, and
B) Gives away less information
Overall, it's a better introduction, mostly because it can be readily understood by someone unfamiliar with the SoT series. - Runch 20:41, 6 September 2006 (UTC)
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