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| I've listed this article for peer review to hopefully get it upgraded to feature article soon. Also, there are only a small number of people editing it and I want to make sure that no one person (including myself) impacts the style to greatly. Also I have written a lot of the content as staff member for the organization, so this will help to ensure a fair POV and neutrality. | |||
| Thanks, addisonschopp 21:00, 3 June 2010 (UTC) | |||
| '''Brianboulton preliminary comments''':- | |||
| *The article has a major cleanup banner, placed by addisonschopp on 3 June. Articles for peer review must be clear of such banners; is this one still in effect? | |||
| *There are several disambiguation links to fix. The toolbox in the right hand corner identifies them. | |||
| *A number of section headings breach the MOS requirements on capitalisation, e.g. "Collegiate Menber Awards", "Important Dates" and others | |||
| *The two books entered under "Further reading" are both used as sources in the article. "Further reading" is intended for books on the topic that are not cited. I suggest you change the heading to Bibliography. | |||
| *The online citations are presented as bare urls, and need to be formatted properly. See ] for information on doing this | |||
| ] (]) 20:47, 10 June 2010 (UTC) | |||