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| I propose that section '']'' be split into a separate page called '']''. This outbreak is receiving a high amount of attention, with six confirmed deaths and a government proposal to ban flavored e-cigarettes. The current article is also very lengthy. ] (] · ]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a ] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 01:51, 13 September 2019 (UTC) | I propose that section '']'' be split into a separate page called '']''. This outbreak is receiving a high amount of attention, with six confirmed deaths and a government proposal to ban flavored e-cigarettes. The current article is also very lengthy. ] (] · ]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a ] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 01:51, 13 September 2019 (UTC) | ||
| ⚫ | :The suggested title name is too vague. The word "American" is too vague. It is missing the words "outbreak" and "vaping products". ] (]) 01:54, 13 September 2019 (UTC) | ||
| :In another thread they want to merge content back into this article. | |||
| :Do you have any additional sources for a split? | |||
| ⚫ | :The suggested title name is too vague. The word "American" is too vague. It is missing the |
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| ::{{ec}} How is "American" too vague if this is is taking place in the United States? I based this on the styling of ]. It's also ''not'' missing the word "outbreak", the proposal is "2019 American lung illness ''outbreak''". ] (] · ]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a ] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 02:03, 13 September 2019 (UTC) | ::{{ec}} How is "American" too vague if this is is taking place in the United States? I based this on the styling of ]. It's also ''not'' missing the word "outbreak", the proposal is "2019 American lung illness ''outbreak''". ] (] · ]) – <small>(Don't forget to share a ] <span style="color:#4dac8b;">♥</span>)</small> 02:03, 13 September 2019 (UTC) | ||
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Discussion
Consensus for merge
See diff. QuackGuru (talk) 17:40, 14 February 2019 (UTC)
Deleting all the content against the RfC is not acceptable. See Talk:Composition_of_electronic_cigarette_aerosol/Archive_2#Proposed_merge_to_focus_specifically_on_electronic_cigarette_aerosol.
There was a RfC to merge content from another article and I put that in my edit summary. QuackGuru (talk) 20:38, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
No reviews yet
See http://www.ocregister.com/articles/cigarette-716541-eye-cavins.html
See http://insider.foxnews.com/2014/03/21/new-concerns-about-e-cigarettes-after-kids-drink-nicotine
Unable to find reviews for the above. QuackGuru (talk) 00:36, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Citation
References
- Rehan, Harmeet Singh; Maini, Jahnavi; Hungin, A PS (2018). "Vaping versus smoking: A quest for efficacy and safety of E-cigarette". Current Drug Safety. 13. doi:10.2174/1574886313666180227110556. ISSN 1574-8863. PMID 29485005.
Unable to get a copy of the source. QuackGuru (talk) 23:40, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
Search tools
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Jan
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Feb
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Mar
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Apr
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+May
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Jun
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Jul
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Aug
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Sep
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Oct
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Nov
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=electronic+cigarette+review+2019+Dec
http://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=MMWR+Morb+Mortal+Wkly+Rep.+Electronic+Cigarette
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=nicotine+ventral+tegmental+area+review
https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pubmed/?term=%CE%B14%CE%B22+receptor+nicotine+review
QuackGuru (talk) 00:36, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
PO
"Thermal degradation of propylene glycol can generate propylene oxide, which is classified by the International Agency for Research on Cancer as a class 2B carcinogen."
"When heated and vaporized, propylene glycol can form propylene oxide, an International Agency for Research on Cancer class 2B carcinogen,"
"As propylene glycol in EC solution is heated and aerosolized, it can be converted to propylene oxide, which is considered a possibly carcinogenic to humans (Group 2B) ."
"E-cig heated PG can be converted to propylene oxide (1,153), which is an irritant and an International Agency for Research on Cancer group 2b carcinogen (possibly carcinogenic to humans) (154)." QuackGuru (talk) 00:36, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
The benefits remain uncertain
See "Significant uncertainty exists about e-cigarette safety and efficacy, rendering patient discussions about these devices challenging."
See "These devices are unregulated, of unknown safety, and of uncertain benefit in quitting smoking." See "Although research has improved our understanding of e-cigarettes since these initial 2011 recommendations, safety and efficacy remains uncertain. "
See "The USPSTF concludes that the current evidence on the use of ENDS for conventional smoking cessation is insufficient. Evidence is lacking and conflicting, and the balance of benefits and harms cannot be determined."
The WP:MEDRS compliant sources confirm that "The benefits and the health risks of e-cigarettes are uncertain." If there is disagreement among reliable sources then that confirms the benefits and risks are still uncertain. QuackGuru (talk) 00:36, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Article length
The article covers several aspects of safety. It is going to be longer then the typical article because it covers all aspects of safety related to e-cigs. There is even a section on the safety of nicotine. QuackGuru (talk) 21:07, 22 February 2019 (UTC)
- I respectfully disagree. The WWII and cancer articles have readable prose size of 80 kB and 58 kB, respectively, and both are much larger topics than this is. This page has a readable prose size of 158 kB. It loads very slowly now: testing on multiple devices, it took 4-6 seconds to load on PC and a whopping 9 seconds on mobile. These times are on WiFi; one can only imagine how much of a burden the page size is for those on dial-up connections, mobile data, or with older devices. I do appreciate you including a section on nicotine safety. The changes you made to this somewhat controversial article were not discussed with anyone except for me. So...let's discuss them! Involving all editors who work on this article. In other words, I think we're in the "discuss" phase of the Bold, Revert, Discuss cycle. Thanks, --Chumash11 (talk) 18:58, 24 February 2019 (UTC)
- I need a specific proposal such as moving content to a new sub article. Just disagreeing because it is a bit too long won't help me improve the article. I created a subpage. See the shorter adverse affects section. Now it is shorter than the previous version.
- There was a discussion for the merge. A significant amount of content you deleted was against the RfC. Please see Talk:Safety_of_electronic_cigarettes#Consensus for merge. QuackGuru (talk) 03:07, 25 February 2019 (UTC)
- The current article is a better length; thanks for making those changes. --Chumash11 (talk) 16:00, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
- agree w/ Chumash11--Ozzie10aaaa (talk) 17:13, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- I looked at the other sections. They are not long enough to create a new subpage. The current article is very detailed and contains a lot of content on nicotine. I moved most of the content from the e-cig page on nicotine and rewrote it without the misleading content and without the failed verification content. QuackGuru (talk) 19:42, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
- The current article is a better length; thanks for making those changes. --Chumash11 (talk) 16:00, 3 March 2019 (UTC)
Nicotine content
https://en.wikipedia.org/Electronic_cigarette#Nicotine Underweight content on main page regarding nicotine.
https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Safety_of_electronic_cigarettes&type=revision&diff=891247043&oldid=891201683 Content about seizures.
https://en.wikipedia.org/search/?title=Adverse_effects_of_electronic_cigarettes&diff=prev&oldid=891246937 Content about seizures.
There is more than 10 paragraphs about nicotine content in the Safety of electronic cigarettes page. All content from the main e-cig page on nicotine was rewritten and moved to the safety and adverse affects page. QuackGuru (talk) 18:05, 6 April 2019 (UTC)
Note for new editors
See Spammers, POV-pushers, COI editors, etc., are all definitely willing to "edit for free".
WP:OR is one of Misplaced Pages's core policies. Editors do not add content based on what they say or think is WP:TRUE. Rather, content is based on reliable sources. This is explained in the policy, WP:VERIFY. The definition of a "reliable source" for content about health-related content is explained in the WP:MEDRS guideline, and for other content, is explained in the WP:RS guideline. Please be careful about adding content to Misplaced Pages that is not cited to a reliable source. Original research and failed verification content attracts those we don't speak of. It is better to remove the original research and uncited content. Thank you. QuackGuru (talk) 00:36, 20 February 2019 (UTC)
Why two articles?
In February, QuackGuru created a separate page called Adverse effects of electronic cigarettes. This was said to be because Safety of electronic cigarettes is too long, but I don't understand how creating a redundant page helps readers. "Safety" and "adverse effects" are in this context effectively synonymous. The difference in scope is unclear; QG removed context on respiratory failure from the adverse effects article as "off topic", whereas respiratory failure would seem to be an adverse effect. Unless a clear dividing line can be drawn, the new article is a WP:REDUNDANTFORK that must be merged back in, and the article size issue must be resolved in some other way. Fences&Windows 11:44, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- I got reverted multiple times by different editors for over-expanding this article. See Talk:Safety of electronic cigarettes#Article length. It was way too long. See Safety_of_electronic_cigarettes#2019 US outbreak of lung illness associated with vaping products for the details about the lung illness. QuackGuru (talk) 11:48, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- It seems to be more on-topic as an adverse effect than as a safety feature, which is perhaps where the dividing line could be drawn. Jack N. Stock (talk) 18:57, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- 1.1 Poisoning
- 1.2 Risks related to e-liquid
- 1.3 Fires, explosions, and other battery-related malfunctions
- 1.4 Case reports related to health effects
- The Adverse effects of electronic cigarettes article has clear protocols for including content. A dividing line has been drawn for each section and the lede summarises the body. This article contains the content on the lung effects. I recently launched 4 new nicotine-related articles. This time around I over-expanded each article before I created live articles. For example, see Electronic cigarette and e-cigarette liquid marketing. It is the longest electronic cigarette article. No editor is going to propose a merge. It is too long. QuackGuru (talk) 19:24, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- Lung illness is not a type of safety, neither does it make electronic cigarettes safer. There's no way that this belongs under the heading of "Safety". It is an adverse effect. I suggest that this article be limited to the precautions or changes electronic cigarette manufacturers or regulators have taken to reduce or eliminate lung illness as a result of the use of electronic cigarettes. Jack N. Stock (talk) 02:26, 9 September 2019 (UTC)
- It seems to be more on-topic as an adverse effect than as a safety feature, which is perhaps where the dividing line could be drawn. Jack N. Stock (talk) 18:57, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
I agree with recombining these two overlapping subjects. The way that this subject has been splintered down into sub-articles is unfortunate. For sure, adverse effects and safety issues should be combined into a single article. The way to get there is to trim out the fat which makes up 80% of these walls of text. Pick out those medical reports that are most significant and report on them, rather than cramming every published article in without any context, and letting people try to figure out what is significant. -- MelanieN (talk) 21:58, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
- Deleting content to undo the creation of a new subarticle is a bad idea. QuackGuru (talk) 22:24, 8 September 2019 (UTC)
2019 American lung illness outbreak split
I propose that section #2019 US outbreak of lung illness associated with vaping products be split into a separate page called 2019 American lung illness outbreak. This outbreak is receiving a high amount of attention, with six confirmed deaths and a government proposal to ban flavored e-cigarettes. The current article is also very lengthy. Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ♥) 01:51, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
- The suggested title name is too vague. The word "American" is too vague. It is missing the words "outbreak" and "vaping products". QuackGuru (talk) 01:54, 13 September 2019 (UTC)
- (edit conflict) How is "American" too vague if this is is taking place in the United States? I based this on the styling of Western African Ebola virus epidemic. It's also not missing the word "outbreak", the proposal is "2019 American lung illness outbreak". Nice4What (talk · contribs) – (Don't forget to share a Thanks ♥) 02:03, 13 September 2019 (UTC)