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- Improve the Embargo section
- Get a peer review
- Remove material well represented elsewhere - ie. much of the Foreign relations material. (see Foreign relations of Cuba)
- Remove or reword material stating that "Castro repelled the Bag of Pigs invaders" or "Castro was forced to shut down 118 factories" - these were Cuban military and government actions.
- Add a survey of what "rank" Castro was during famous military actions -- has he always been comandanté? what were the insignia on his lapels or epaulets, when he wore such things?
- "External links" section must be cleaned up and better categorized
- Remove "struggle for power" weasel formulations, this misleads into thinking that the only reason for the Cuban revolutionaries was "lust for power", while in fact they say they had a social patos against the Batista regime (believe it or not).
- Change "...as part of their own global political game." to "...as part of their own global political agenda." in the fourth paragraph.