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Revision as of 06:42, 27 August 2007 by SineBot (talk | contribs) (Automatically signing comment made by 203.91.95.124)(diff) ← Previous revision | Latest revision (diff) | Newer revision → (diff)- Neutralize the language by adjusting all absolute statements to carry qualifiers. eg "It is claimed that four planes were hijacked..." —Preceding unsigned comment added by 203.91.95.124 (talk) 06:41, August 27, 2007 (UTC)
Summarize the sections by cutting down on detail, which can be moved to the main articles specific to those sections.Combine related sections and cut down on ToC- Better organization of pictures
- Provide more references
- Add effect on Northern Virginia, as the attack on the Pentagon occurred there.