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- The articles citations need attention. All references need to use the {{cite}} template.
- 16 citations need specific reference to page numbers.
- Section on "Mid-twentieth century" needs work: a) the first paragraph needs to bring together the de Beauvoir material and the second-wave material better; b) it should mention "difference feminism" somehow - it needs to convey that the assumptions underlying second-wave feminism were different than those underlying first-wave feminism.
- The "Socialism" subsection does not explain the general impact as well the other two sub-sections. It is too fact-based.
- Explanation of "feminisms", as in "multiple feminisms" in the Movements section
- Summarize Women's rights and integrate.
- Consider the structure and hierarchy of contents with regard to featured standards