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Ongoings is not a noun. It probably isn't even a word. Perhaps "goings on" would be better for this, the "Did You Know?" section of the Parish Newsletter.

Community Spirit

"Much interest is drawn from the 'little England' attitude from locals - there are still strong rural sensibilities, as well as a lack of traditional aptitude for further or higher education. The Ellowes Hall Foundation School serves much of the population of the area for secondary education, the insular nature of the community might well explain the poor perfomance of the school in connection with the relevant affluence of the area."

What?! Much interest? Where? This is an encyclopedia - it should contain facts and references. "might well explain"? Either it does or it doesn't (it doesn't) - this isn't some kind of personal notebook. This poor performance of Ellowes Hall is probably due to poor management of the school, rather than the 'insular nature' that you suggest, but I'm merely guessing. I suggest you look up weasel words. --D.elwell 21:49, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

"In terms of the future, Dudley borough's growing population, as well as planned transport/light rail links to the booming Birmingham, east of the borough, will no doubt increase Sedgley's status as a commuter town, rather than an 'overgrown village'.""

This is simply not true. There are no light-rail links planned in the Sedgley area - the only light-rail link planned in the Midlands is an extension of the Midland Metro from Wednesdbury to Brierley Hill (and a small extension in Birmingham City Centre). If you know different, supply references. --D.elwell 21:49, 15 July 2006 (UTC)

Steve Willis

Hi there. I'm removing the information about Steve Willis again. He isn't notable, and I'm still very suspicious that 82.37.179.220 is actually him (along with EmmaWaldren and VickyRoper). Basically for three reasons :

1. The anon seems keen to add essentially promotional material about him
2. The anon's IP traces back to blueyonder - the ISP for Steve Willis' website
3. The anon seems keen to remove references to the Imperial units system, and one of the few weblinks on Steve Willis' site is to the UK Metric Association

These are obviously all circumstantial points, and the addition of spam alone is enough to keep me deleting. But I thought I'd better elaborate somewhat. Cheers, --Plumbago 13:14, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

Hello, My name is Emma, and I am new to this, so very sorry if I'm not doing this right, I would just like to clarify the following points. I am not connected in any way to Steve Willis, I have been studying Media at Sandwell College, and Steve Willis was mentioned as part of the course. I just thought that he is someone that we can hear on the radio and therefore takes part of the Sedgley history. The reason he was mentioned in the class was that he plays the "Angelus" before his show, which is very rare in this country. Hope I explained my point. Emma EmmaWaldren 16:16, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

OK Emma, I'll take you at your word for this. However, I'm still going to delete the text you've reinserted. There are lots of facts true about any given town or place, but they need to be notable to merit an entry in the Misplaced Pages, and I'm just not convinced that Steve Willis is. That he isn't notable enough to even have his own article suggests that mentioning him in another article is unnecessary. As an aside, he's only one of probably a dozen or so DJs on a community radio station (that, I note, doesn't have an article on it), none of whom have an article about themselves. That he's also not in the best timeslot (6pm, on a Sunday?) points towards other more deserving cases. Regarding Angelus, notice that the article talks about radio stations around the world in general terms; a specific example from a local community channel in one part of the world does not need mentioning in this article. Period. However, all that said, it's great that you're being bold in your edits to the Misplaced Pages - please continue to do so, but be aware of notability issues and the appropriateness of information for different articles. Cheers, --Plumbago 16:35, 20 September 2006 (UTC)

Hi Plumbago, thank you for your kind reply. It did leave me a little deflated as this was my first ever contribution. However, I see your point, and thank you for taking the time to educate me on how this thing works. Hope to chat with you again in the future. 82.37.179.220 18:15, 21 September 2006 (UTC)